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               <note type="label">Edward … princes</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The deaths of Edward IV and the princes in the Tower, unlike in Shakespeare’s play, occur in view of the audience. See this edition’s <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_GenIntro">General Introduction</ref> for further analysis.</note>
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            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_4024" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_4025">
               <note type="label">Shore’s Wife</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Daughter of a successful merchant and wife to goldsmith William Shore, Elizabeth Shore became a notorious figure during and after her lifetime due to her affairs with public figures including Edward IV and William, Lord Hastings. She was erroneously given the name <soCalled>Jane</soCalled> in Thomas Heywood’s play <title level="m">Edward IV</title>, a name with which she has become synonymous, although in this play she is referred to as <quote>Shore’s wife</quote>. For more information, refer to this edition’s <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_GenIntro#emdTTR3_GenIntro_notable_treatmentWomenChildren">introduction</ref> and <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Shoreswife">supplementary material</ref>.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The 1594 title page indicates the playwright’s priority for (and selling point of) Shore’s wife’s story: <quote>With a lamentable ende of Shores wife, an example for all wicked women</quote> is centred and italicized. For further analysis of Shore’s wife’s role, see this edition’s <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_GenIntro#emdTTR3_GenIntro_notable_treatmentWomenChildren">General Introduction</ref>.</note>
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               <note type="label">Queen’s … Players</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">The Queen’s Men.</note>
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               <note type="label">Thomas Creede</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">A stationer whose career spanned 1582 to 1616, and who <quote>dwelt at the sign of the Catharine Wheel, near the Old Swan, in Thames Street</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:BULL16">Bullen 69</ref>).</note>
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               <note type="label">William Barley</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">A bookseller who served an apprenticeship with the Drapers’ Company and trained with bookseller Yarath James, who owned the shop at Newgate Market near Christ Church door. Barley had his own shop in St. Peter upon Cornhill from 1592, but continued to sell from the Newgate site, as shown by this title page (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:JOHN9">Johnson 12</ref>).</note>
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               <note type="label">Christ Church door</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Christ Church Greyfriars, in Newgate Street. The original thirteenth century monastic church was used as a parish church at the time that Barley’s shop stood nearby and was destroyed during the Great Fire of London in 1666. The edifice was rebuilt according to the designs of Sir Christopher Wren, and was destroyed again during the Blitz.</note>
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               <note type="label">Enter Truth … Poetry</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">They appear as prologue (and may have appeared later in epilogue in the form of messengers, see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3085 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3086"/>) in an unusually extensive appearance of Senecan arguments to set out the narrative. In contrast, this play’s prologue <quote>only sets forth the story up to the point at which the stage action is to commence</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:GRIF2">Griffin 88</ref>).</note>
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               <note type="label">To them</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The ghost’s appearance warrants discussion between Truth and Poetry, which makes clear that they have observed his entrance and his subsequent dropping of his shield. The silent interaction between the ghost and the two allegorical figures would have been a dramatic, meaningful moment. Each character would have been recognizable by their dress, or indicative elements, as this interaction sets the scene for the remainder of the play.</note>
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               <note type="label">holding … shield</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">A shield expresses emblematic power, not only as a defensive tool, but also as an expressive display object, representing heraldic status. As Fleischer notes, <quote><supplied>itself</supplied> an attribute of Minerva, Faith, and others, it also—in its ornamentation—can bear national or personal devices or even occasional messages</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:FLEI1">Fleischer 183</ref>). Clarence’s shield bears an expository message, an unusual device given the improbability of an audience reading it. This is solved once Clarence abandons his shield, so Truth and Poetry may read it. This is emblematic of the prologue scene itself, or, <quote>as shield to Ghost, so Induction to play</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:FLEI1">Fleischer 184</ref>).</note>
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               <note type="label" xml:lang="la">Cresce … vendicta</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><gloss>Rise, blood! Blood is sated by blood! Rise, that which I wish for! I thirst, O I thirst, I thirst, Vengeance!</gloss></note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Greg credits 1844 editor Barron Field with <quote>apparently reconstruct<supplied>ing</supplied></quote> the Latin as <quote xml:lang="la">Cresce cruor, sanguis satietur sanguine, cresce, / Quod spero citò. O citò, citò vendicta (or sitio vindictam)!</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:GREG11">Greg 1929 x</ref>). Griffin notes this is the first of three examples in the play where the author <quote>flaunts <supplied>his</supplied> Latin quotations from Seneca <gap reason="sampling"/> though <supplied>he</supplied> also condescends to translate them</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:GRIF2">69</ref>).</note>
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               <note type="label">vendicta</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Irish notes this word as <quote>Senecanism</quote> in the ghost’s <quote>blood-thirsty</quote> nature (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:IRIS1">126</ref>). The ghost calling for vengeance is a well-worn early modern theatre trope, which includes the ghost in Hamlet, <quote>the prophesying ghost of Albanacht in Locrine, the ghost of the murdered royalty in <title level="m">The Battle of Alcazar</title>, all <supplied>of whom</supplied> cry for vengeance</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:FLEI1">Fleischer 229</ref>).</note>
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               <note type="label">Truth … player?</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">As verse, this collection of lines is difficult to scan, but given that the remainder of this scene (featuring the personification of Poetry) is in verse, it makes little sense to consider this segment as prose. The disjointed nature of Truth and Poetry’s interactions could signal performance considerations, such as the two figures warily circling each another or negotiating the space. Despite the difficulty in scanning the meter, this short section is more useful as verse.</note>
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               <note type="label">well met</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">You are welcome in my company (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>meet</term>, v.7.f</ref>).</note>
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               <note type="label">What makes thou</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">What are you doing here?</note>
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               <note type="label">Shadows</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Images of reality translated to the stage (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>shadow</term>, n.6.b</ref>), or actors representing dead historical figures.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">This passage provides the additional tinge of dramatic irony in spectral forms, or phantoms (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>shadow</term>, n.7</ref>). Walsh expands on this by noting that this is <quote>a synonym for players in some early modern theatrical discourses, <gap reason="sampling"/> a metaphorical description of theatre itself, one that highlights the insubstantial, fleeting, ephemeral, and also dubious nature of performance</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:WALS2">80</ref>).</note>
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               <note type="label">Then will … bodies</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Hunter notes, <quote>Poetry can only (as in Plato) offer <quote>shadows</quote>, but Truth can give substance to poetic shadows by showing things that actually happened</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:HUNT6">16</ref>).</note>
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               <note type="label">Therefore … leave</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Go and let me.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Truth dismisses Poetry, as she <quote>recognizes the stage as a space to transmit information and sees the emptiness and presumably false nature of Poetry as something which needs to be expunged</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:WALS2">Walsh 80</ref>).</note>
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               <note type="label">her</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The feminine depiction of Truth evokes the Roman figure of Veritas, or her Greek counterpart, Aletheia. Walsh suggests the feminine Truth:
                  <cit><quote>might also draw on the <foreign xml:lang="la">veritas filia temporis</foreign> motif. <gloss>Truth is the daughter of time</gloss>, a recurring trope in the sixteenth century, was often deployed in the context of religious polemic and was embodied in royal and civic pageants in celebration of both Mary and Elizabeth in the 1550s.</quote> 
                     <bibl>(<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:WALS2">78</ref>)</bibl></cit></note>
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               <note type="label">pageant</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Play with historical lessons for its audience about the fall of kings.</note>
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               <note type="label">player</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Actor (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>player</term>, n.4</ref>).</note>
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               <note type="label">will Truth … player?</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Poetry’s question could be literal: will the actor playing Truth also play other roles in that performance? With casts of only 14, early modern actors frequently doubled or played more than one role.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Poetry emphasises Truth is not always present on stage: her participation is noteworthy.</note>
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               <note type="label">Tragedia-like</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">In the style of Greek tragedy.</note>
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               <note type="label">done but late</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Recently completed, undertaken in living memory.</note>
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               <note type="label">late</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Recently.</note>
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               <note type="label">drooping</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Failing, decaying, flagging (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>drooping</term>, adj.2</ref>).</note>
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            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_45" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_46">
               <note type="label">Richard Plantagenet</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard of York, father to Edward IV, Clarence, and Richard III, appears in Shakespeare’s <title level="m">H6</title> and was a chief antagonist to Henry VI.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_47" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_48">
               <note type="label">descent</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Transmission of title to heirs (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>descent</term>, n.I.1.a</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Q spells this word as <quote>dissent</quote>, or disagreement or loss of popularity (see <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:THOM6">Thomas, <term>Prōsāpia</term></ref>), but this is a common alternate spelling for this word.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_49" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_50">
               <note type="label">chronicles</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Detailed and continuous register of events in order of time; a historical record, (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>chronicle</term>, n.1.a</ref>), understood to be facts delivered without bias.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The wars of the roses were recorded in numerous chronicles, including Fabyan, Holinshed, Hall, Benet, Gregory, Hardyng, Croyland, Warkworth, Rous, and Waurin, amongst others. Walsh suggests this reference works to:
                  <cit><quote>claim authority, as if to reassure Poetry and the playgoers that the information being presented has an unimpeachable basis outside the theatre. The chronicles in this instance are a yardstick with which to measure other discourses of history.</quote> 
                     <bibl>(<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:WALS2">85</ref>)</bibl></cit></note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3249" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3250">
               <note type="label">act of parliament</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">This timeline is muddled: the heir presumptive became unclear after the death of Humphrey, duke of Gloucester, in 1447, but Richard of York’s candidacy was not confirmed until the Act of Accord in 1460, Henry VI’s 38th year. Churchill (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:CHUR5">406</ref>) proposes that this unclear timeline is down to the playwright’s over-reliance on Hall’s chronicle, which mistakenly suggests a date for this act of parliament (see <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:HALL11">Hall, 249</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_51" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_52">
               <note type="label">dignity</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Honour, position, rank (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>dignity</term>, n.2.a</ref>). The first of two references within 13 lines <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3243"/>.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_53" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_54">
               <note type="label">not contented … time</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Not willing to wait patiently.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Yorkists declared civil war only months after the Act of Accord, where Richard of York died.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_55" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_56">
               <note type="label">outrage</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Disorder, violence (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>outrage</term>, n.1.a</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">This word is repeated four times throughout the play (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3722 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3723"/>, <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3724 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3725"/>, <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3726 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3727"/>), always as an indicator of political or physical violence.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3251" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3252">
               <note type="label">Wakefield … pitched</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The Battle of Wakefield was waged on December 30 1460, in West Yorkshire, near Sandal Castle. This conflict saw victory for Henry VI and the death of Richard of York.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_57" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_58">
               <note type="label">Outrageous</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Fierce, cruel (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:HOLL1">Hollyband, <term>Farouche</term></ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_59" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_60">
               <note type="label">latest</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Last, final (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT3"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>latest</term>, Adjective A.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_61" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_62">
               <note type="label">Edward, now … king</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">In this compacted timeline, we enter 22 years after Edward’s 1461 coronation (as Truth notes at <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_91 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_92"/>), after Clarence’s death (1478) and before his own (1483).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3253" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3254">
               <note type="label">Then Henry … Edward IV</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Then Henry VI, after the death of Richard of York, was prevented from taking the throne again, which resulted in the coronation of the next king, Edward IV.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_63" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_64">
               <note type="label">style</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Ceremonial designation, titles and dominions (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>style</term>, n.II.18.a</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Henry passed these to Edward after defeat at the battle of Tewkesbury (1471).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_65" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_66">
               <note type="label">But tell … Truth</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">A pertinent question, given the lack of clarity over Henry’s death. The actual circumstances are murky, but he died in the Tower following the battle of Tewkesbury, likely murdered (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:GRIF8">Griffiths</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_67" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_68">
               <note type="label">attainted</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Tainted, corrupted (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>attainted</term>, adj.4</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Clarence’s interests on both sides led to his imprisonment and death.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_69" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_70">
               <note type="label">Falsely of treason</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Clarence’s interests on both sides and ongoing implications in various inheritance schemes suggests the treason accusation is probably true.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_71" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_72">
               <note type="label">unnaturally</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Inhumanly, unfeelingly, cruelly, wickedly (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT3"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>unnaturally</term>, adv.1</ref>). Both uses relate to Richard (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3728 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3729"/>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_73" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_74">
               <note type="label">parents’ stock</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">His ancestry (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT3"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>stock</term>, A.1.3.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_75" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_76">
               <note type="label">butt</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Cask usually measured between 108 and 140 gallons (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>butt</term>, n.4.1.a</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The rumour of Clarence’s unusual death is corroborated in contemporary accounts (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:ROYC1">Jean de Roye</ref>, <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:MANC1">Mancini</ref>, <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:RILE1">the Crowland continuator</ref>), and has suggested links to Clarence’s alleged love for alcohol (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:HICK2">Hicks</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3255" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3256">
               <note type="label"><quote>Blood … revenge</quote></note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">As a vegetation metaphor, blood is a sign of regeneration, a natural birth in the order of things, and renews the earth for new plant life to grow. The motto therefore notes that while blood intentionally sprinkled will encourage new life to spring, blood that is spilled through violence or murder is unnatural and thus demands vengeance.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Then Moses took the blood, and sprinkled it on the people, and said, Behold the blood of the covenant, which the Lord hath made with you concerning all these things</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:THEB6">GNV, Exodus 24.</ref>8).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_79" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_80">
               <note type="label">A man ill-shaped</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The traditional notion of Richard as a hunchback may have been Tudor propaganda but was partially proven as scoliosis upon the August 2012 discovery of Richard’s skeleton in Leicester.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_81" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_82">
               <note type="label">crooked-backed</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">For this line to scan, pronounced <mentioned>crookt-backed</mentioned>.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3258" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3259">
               <note type="label">tyrannous</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">For this line to scan, pronounced <mentioned>tyrr’nous</mentioned>.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_83" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_84">
               <note type="label">minority</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">The period of a person’s life prior to attaining full age (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>minority</term> n.1.a and <term>minor</term> adj.I.3.a</ref>), which means he requires a guardian.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Edward V was twelve years of age at his father’s death, and was uncrowned king for 86 days before he was disinherited by Richard.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_85" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_86">
               <note type="label">lord protector</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">The role of surrogate governor due to the minority of the sovereign (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>protector</term>, n.2.a</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard was not named as such until after Edward’s death, but the playwright compacts time to insert this pertinent point.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_89" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_90">
               <note type="label">Gentles</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">People of gentle birth and rank (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>gentle</term>, adj.1.b</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Truth redirects attention from Poetry to address the audience in a: <cit><quote>verbal gesture <supplied>which</supplied> prevents the <supplied>prologue</supplied> from being a self-contained exchange among <q>characters</q>. Rather, it makes evident this opening has been calculated to involve the audience in the enterprise of historical representation.</quote> 
                     <bibl>(<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:WALS2">Walsh 82</ref>)</bibl></cit>
                  
                  This phrase is repeated in the play’s epilogue (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3123 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3124"/>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_91" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_92">
               <note type="label">two-and-twenty</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Repeated alliteration in discussion of Henry VI’s 22nd year (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3730 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3731"/>). In this case, the dating is accurate: it incorporates both Edward IV’s first (1461–1470) and second reigns (1471–1483) but elides Henry VI’s brief restoration (1470–1471).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_93" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_94">
               <note type="label">like to die</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Near to death.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Edward IV’s final illness set in over Easter 1483, but he had time to set his business in order and appoint Richard protector.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_95" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_96">
               <note type="label">duke his brother</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard of Gloucester.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3260" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3261">
               <note type="label">two sons … daughters</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Not including illegitimate issue, Edward had ten children: three boys and seven girls. The two sons noted are Edward, prince of Wales, and Richard, duke of York. Only five daughters are named, which is down to More: <cit><quote>Elizabeth, whose fortune and grace was after to be queen, wife unto King Henry the Seventh, and mother unto the Eighth; Cecily not so fortunate as fair; Brigette, who, representing the virtue of her whose name she bear, professed and observed a religious life in Dartford <supplied>Priory, Kent</supplied>, a house of close nuns; Anne, that was after honorably married unto Thomas, then Lord Howard and after Earl of Surrey; and Katherine <supplied>sic</supplied>, which long time tossed in either fortune, sometime in wealth, often in adversity.</quote> 
                     <bibl>(see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_More#emdTTR3_More_anc_319">Master Thomas More, Undersheriff of London</ref>)</bibl>
               </cit> More does not mention George, Margaret, or Mary.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_97" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_98">
               <note type="label">hapless</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Destitute, unfortunate, unlucky (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>hapless</term>, adj.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_99" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_100">
               <note type="label">excuse … matter</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Pardon the play’s length because the content will be entertaining.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_103" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_104">
               <note type="label">Wend</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Go, proceed (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>wend</term>, v.II.8.a</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">As actors who will take other roles in the play, Truth invites Poetry to leave the stage so that they may participate: we have no reason to believe that, as in The Spanish Tragedy, they would stay to watch. A secondary layer offers further interpretation: <quote>be transformed</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>wend</term>, v.I.4.b</ref>) implicates their impending change of costume and character, which offers the meaning to the actors.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_105" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_106">
               <note type="label">Scene 1</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Probably a prose scene mistakenly treated as verse by the typesetter, or, as McMillin and MacLean posit, a company-sponsored scribe, who expected verse and misinterpreted pauses as end-stopped verse lines: this mystery scribe <quote>hears the end of a line, but the actor is only pausing in the syntax of prose. As a result, the scribe writes a blank verse that is not being spoken</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:MCMI1">117</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_107" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3264">
               <note type="label">Edward IV … bed</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Edward’s entrance, sick in his bed, would include curtains which are drawn after his death. The bed would have been pushed on stage through a door or opening, or potentially from a discovery space. As Thomson notes, <quote><supplied>if</supplied>, as this direction seems to indicate, the bed was out on the stage the most straightforward reading is that it was curtained</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:THOM5">36</ref>). There are two beds in this play, the second the site of the princes’ murder.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_111" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_112">
               <note type="label">Lord Hastings</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">This scene dramatizes how Hastings, a long-time loyalist to Edward, has maintained his antagonism to the Woodville faction. Ironically, accusations of collusion with Woodvilles led to his summary execution in June 1483.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_113" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_114">
               <note type="label">Marquess</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Q records the title of Dorset, marquess, as <quote>Marcus</quote>, as though it were a name. Greg proposes this a scribe’s mishearing of the word <mentioned>Marquess</mentioned> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:GREG11">1929, vi</ref>). This edition corrects to <quote>Marquess</quote> on all occasions.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_118" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_119">
               <note type="label">to them Richard</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard enters anonymously, not afforded the coup de theatre of Shakespeare (see <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:JOWE5"><title level="m">R3</title> 1.1.1.s.d.</ref>). Rather than appear at the point of triumph, this Richard enters quietly as an observer during a sensitive moment, without a single line. His would have been a striking, mysterious figure, and his presence is a reminder of the power of a mute character. Churchill argues that this entrance is a corrupted stage direction left over from an earlier text, and that Richard does not actually appear, and dismisses the potential of a mute Richard in this scene (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:CHUR5">416</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_121" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_122">
               <note type="label">in all happiness</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">In all good fortune, success, prosperity (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>happiness</term>, n.1.a</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Hastings knows Edward is soon to die; adding this phrase to his customary greeting lets Hastings demonstrate his sensitivity.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_123" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_124">
               <note type="label">Dorset</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Speech headings corrected from Q’s <quote>Marcus</quote> for clarity of naming.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3265" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3266">
               <note type="label">An honorable … king</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">May honorable age, with the richness of Croesus’ wealth, extend the hours of the king’s life.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_125" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_126">
               <note type="label">Croesus’</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">A Lydian king synonymous with fabulous wealth. <quote>Rich as Croesus</quote> was a contemporary proverb (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:TILL1">Tilley C832</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_127" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_128">
               <note type="label">hourly attend</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The actor who plays Dorset may pick up the same sycophancy in flattering the king; alternately, his sincerity may mock Hastings. Dorset’s line reminds us of Edward’s quickly-failing health.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_129" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_130">
               <note type="label">the person</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">That is, the body, respectfully stated (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>person</term>, n.II.3.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_133" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_134">
               <note type="label">peers</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Members of hereditary nobility (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>peers</term>, n.4.a</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Given Dorset’s marginal nobility, with minor family connections until his mother married Edward (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:PUGH1">Pugh</ref>), this equation of the two may be unwelcome for Hastings.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_135" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_136">
               <note type="label">unthankfulness</note> 
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Ingratitude (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>unthankfulness</term>, n.1</ref>). Dorset clarifies in the next line (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3732 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3733"/>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_137" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_138">
               <note type="label">he that … here</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">God who put me in my death-bed.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Edward was not renowned for his piety, unlike his predecessor, Henry VI. Edward’s notoriety was due to his womanizing, his marriage to Elizabeth Woodville, and his pre-contract to Lady Eleanor Talbot, which might bring his death-bed piety into question (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:HORR1">Horrox</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_139" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_140">
               <note type="label">estate</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">State or condition: material, moral, bodily (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>estate</term>, n.I.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_141" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_142">
               <note type="label">seen … all</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Evident.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_143" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_144">
               <note type="label">dreadful</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Inspiring dread, fear, awe (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>dreadful</term>, adj.n.2.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_145" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_146">
               <note type="label">stroke</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Crushing act of divine chastisement or vengeance (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>stroke</term>, n.1.3.a</ref>). The brutality of this phrase shows Edward expects retribution.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_147" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_148">
               <note type="label">friendly-wise</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">An amicable manner (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>friendly</term>, adj.2.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_149" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_150">
               <note type="label">malice</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Active ill will or hatred</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>malice</term>, n.I.1.a</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">This word appears on six more occasions in this play, demonstrating the angry tenor of the subject matter (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3734 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3735"/>, <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3736 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3737"/>, <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3738 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3739"/>, <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3740 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3741"/>, <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3742 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3743"/>, <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3744 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3745"/>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_151" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_152">
               <note type="label">envy</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The Woodvilles were the object of Yorkist innuendo and scorn for their perceived social climbing. Even so, this play presents the Mother Queen as a strong, resourceful figure worthy of the play’s epilogue as direct ancestor to Elizabeth I.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_153" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_154">
               <note type="label">sedition</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Dissent, disorder (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>sedition</term>, n.1.a</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">In the first blush of the Yorkist reign, the risk of Lancastrian uprisings were common.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_155" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_156">
               <note type="label">admonished</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Warned, put in mind of (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:COOP2">Cooper, <term>Calais</term></ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_157" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_158">
               <note type="label">discretions</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Abilities to adjudicate (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>discretion</term>, n.I.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_159" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_160">
               <note type="label">enemy</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Adversary, antagonist, opponent</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>enemy</term>, n.I.1.a</ref>) to their own advancement. This word appears nine times, five linked with matters of pride.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_161" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_162">
               <note type="label">league of amity</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Union based on friendship.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The enmity was ongoing and was based in political jealousy over favor. Despite Edward’s efforts, he could not heal this rift.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_163" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_164">
               <note type="label">you may … soul</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Edward’s self-serving request is canny in understanding that by leaving his son as heir, such dysfunction would be dangerous. His hope is the act of swearing fealty will build support for the future king.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_165" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_166">
               <note type="label">celestial</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">From the heavens (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>celestial</term>, adj.2.a</ref>). Despite his flaws, Edward assumes he is bound for paradise.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_167" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_168">
               <note type="label">decease</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Death.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_169" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_170">
               <note type="label">wise … counsel</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Edward establishes he will not choose between his closest advisor (Hastings) and his family (Dorset), and that he hopes both sides will counsel the new king.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_171" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_172">
               <note type="label">bring comfort</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The factions in Edward IV’s court were a cause for worry, with the knowledge that exiles awaited an opportunity to return, feared as a potential precursor to civil war.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_175" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_176">
               <note type="label">What</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Suggests a pause, as opportunity for both men to speak, but neither takes the invitation. Since this temporary halt speaks to each man’s reluctance to apologize first, they might exchange an unfriendly glance.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_177" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_178">
               <note type="label">resolute</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Constant, firm, steadfast (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:FLOR1">Florio, <term>Costante</term></ref>). Edward repeats the coupling of this word with ambition (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3746 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3747"/>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_179" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_180">
               <note type="label">ambition</note> 
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Determination, pride (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>ambition</term>, n.I.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_181" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_182">
               <note type="label">submit</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Consent, comply (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>submit</term>, v.I.1.a</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">This word is used four times in this play, all in the next thirty lines, as surrender to the king’s will.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_183" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_184">
               <note type="label">my father</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Elizabeth has a more significant role in this play than in Shakespeare: as the hope for the future, she is the one to unify the warring parties.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_185" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_186">
               <note type="label">sues for peace</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Chases, pursues an agreement (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>sue</term>, v.III.14.b</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_187" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_188">
               <note type="label">mitigate your wrath</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Lessen the violence of our feud.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_189" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_190">
               <note type="label">ambitious</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Ruthless. This reference to ambition supplies another stress on its role in the feud (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_179 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_180"/>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_191" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_192">
               <note type="label">last … death</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Edward is near death, but he clearly uses his state to manipulate an agreement.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_193" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_194">
               <note type="label">tormented</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Agitated, distressed (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>torment</term>,  v.3.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_195" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_196">
               <note type="label">entreaty</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>An earnest or humble request</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>entreaty</term>, n.3</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_197" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_198">
               <note type="label">courteous</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Gracious (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>courteous</term>, adj.2.a</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The obsolete word <term>curtuous</term>, defined in Baret as <gloss>gentle, kind</gloss> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:BARE1">Baret, <term>curtuous</term></ref>) is the original spelling here.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_199" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_200">
               <note type="label">of</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">From.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_201" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_202">
               <note type="label">mark</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Target an archer aims at (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>mark</term>, n.VI.23.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_203" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_204">
               <note type="label">except</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>'Unless', 'if not'</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>except</term>, conj.2</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_205" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_206">
               <note type="label">upshot</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>A final shot in a match at archery</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>upshot</term>, n.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_207" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_208">
               <note type="label">head</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Arrow-tip (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>head</term>, n.II.i.16.a</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Dorset puns on the head Hastings soon loses from his shoulders.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_209" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_210">
               <note type="label">losses</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Costs of defeat (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>loss</term>, n.2.d</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">To complete the archery imagery, Dorset equates wagers placed on a match to the losses their enmity brings society.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3923" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3924">
               <note type="label">sith</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Seeing that</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>sith</term>, conj.4, now arch.</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_211" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_212">
               <note type="label">jar</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Discord, want of harmony</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>jar</term>, n.II.5</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_213" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_216">
               <note type="label">greater … this</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Edward’s inability to bring Dorset and Hastings to accord is a reminder of his weakness. This reunion, he felt, should have been simple, had he his full strength.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_217" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_218">
               <note type="label">I take … both</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The rivalry is for Edward’s final approval; when he rejects them both the stakes are raised, as his final decrees may disadvantage both.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_219" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_221">
               <note type="label">an’t … majesty</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">If your majesty pleases.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_222" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_223">
               <note type="label">a prey</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>A person who is easily deceived or harmed</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>prey</term>, n.I.2.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_224" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_225">
               <note type="label">mine enemy</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Not necessarily only Dorset, but any who mistrust the Woodville faction, if Hastings appears to reach across the divide, as Richard’s silent presence makes more pertinent, as he will later use this information to doom him.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_226" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_227">
               <note type="label">Ah, yield, … marquess</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Edward echoes Elizabeth’s plea and prefaces the unification they hope for.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_228" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_229">
               <note type="label">obstinate</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Stubborn, stiff, firm (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:THOM6">Thomas, <term>Obstĭnātē</term></ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3269" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3270">
               <note type="label">content</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Satisfied (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>content</term>, adj.I.2.a</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">This extension of Elizabeth’s <quote>contented</quote> indicates satisfaction that Hastings acquiesced first (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3748 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3749"/>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3267" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3268">
               <note type="label">foul offence</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Dorset offers his chest to his enemy’s blade to apologize for upsetting his king, not for any wrong done to Hastings.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_230" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_231">
               <note type="label">than</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Rather than.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_236" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_237">
               <note type="label">take … hand</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Hastings offers his hand first, but Dorset does not accept it immediately, which sets the potential of Hastings standing with arm outstretched for five lines of dialogue; dropping his proffered hand in annoyance; or a physical reaction (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3750 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3751"/>). More records this handshake: <quote><supplied>there</supplied> in his presence as by their words appeared, each forgave other, and joined their hands together, when (as it after appeared by their deeds) their hearts were far asunder</quote> (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_More#emdTTR3_More_anc_321">Master Thomas More, Undersheriff of London</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_238" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_239">
               <note type="label">league of amity</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Hastings repeats Edward’s earlier phrasing as a public show of support (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_161 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_162"/>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_240" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_241">
               <note type="label">not … deed</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Dorset echoes Hastings almost precisely, to suggest mockery or even disbelief. His statement questions Hastings’s vow and actions.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3271" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3272">
               <note type="label">to have … withal</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Dorset’s much more graphic description of Hastings’ death strives to top its equivalent statement, and might be played as a humorous final attack under the guise of forgiveness (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3752 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3753"/>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_246" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_247">
               <note type="label">shivered</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Broken, shattered</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>shivered</term>, adj.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3273" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3274">
               <note type="label">in piecemeals</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Into small pieces (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>piecemeal</term>, n.I.2.a</ref>), or <quote>one piece at a time; little by little, by degrees</quote>, in stages (by piecemeals, <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>piecemeal</term>, n.I.2.b</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3275" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3276">
               <note type="label">fowls … air</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Carrion-eaters, scavengers, like raptors, crows, ravens, gulls.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_248" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_249">
               <note type="label">allegiance</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Note the parallel to Hastings’s two references to <quote>entreaty</quote> (<ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_195 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_196"/>), which are pleas; Dorset makes clear he is allied to the king, not simply someone obeying a command.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_250" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_251">
               <note type="label">perfect</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Righteous, immaculate, flawless (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>perfect</term>, adj.I.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_252" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_253">
               <note type="label">friendship</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Harmony, affinity (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>friendship</term>, n.5</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_254" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_255">
               <note type="label">forever</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Dorset disingenuously echoes Hastings’ earlier phrasing to emphasise its hyperbole (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3754 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3755"/>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_256" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_257">
               <note type="label">for confirming … it</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">To seal the compact.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_258" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_259">
               <note type="label">falsify</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Alter, pervert (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>falsify</term>, v.1.f</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_260" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_261">
               <note type="label">confusion</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Damnation or overthrow, ruin (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>confusion</term>, n.1.a</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The treble repetition of the word seals the chaos about to begin (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3756 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3757"/>). Later, Richard uses the same word to describe what would happen if his plot to kill the princes became known (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3758 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3759"/>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_262" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_263">
               <note type="label">Ludlow</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The prince of Wales and duke of York lived at Ludlow Castle in Shropshire until their father’s death.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_264" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_265">
               <note type="label">the rest … kindred</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">More notes, <quote><supplied>a</supplied>djoined were there unto him other of the same party, and, in effect, every one as he was nearest of kin unto the queen so was planted next about the prince</quote> (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_More#emdTTR3_More_anc_323">Master Thomas More, Undersheriff of London</ref>). This notion backfired as Richard used the confluence of Woodvilles as ammunition to claim treason.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_266" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_267">
               <note type="label">be unto … me</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Presumably, respectful and attentive.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_268" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_269">
               <note type="label">thirteen … most</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">This is relatively accurate: Edward V was 12 years, 5 months old when his father died, and probably died before his thirteenth birthday.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_270" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_271">
               <note type="label">government</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Guidance, direction, control (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>government</term>, n.I.1.d</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_272" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_273">
               <note type="label">my brother</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard, duke of Gloucester, the first reference to him in this scene, even as he reacts throughout. His reactions might vary, depending on actors’ choice: he may in fact be a comforting presence for his brother. More and Hall place the nomination of protector at a council meeting prior to Edward’s arrival from Ludlow (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3760 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3761"/>) (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:WILS15">Wilson 302</ref>). The playwright may have gleaned this information from Francis Segar’s poem on Gloucester in The Mirror for Magistrates.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_274" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_275">
               <note type="label">give thee this</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">While this could simply refer to Edward’s command that Elizabeth be loyal to her brother, an actor may play this as offering a kiss or, less likely, a gift for Elizabeth to take. A minor change in punctuation (<quote>give thee this. (he kisses her) Be loyal <gap reason="sampling"/> </quote>) offers a different option for the actor.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_276" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_277">
               <note type="label">be loyal … brother</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Elizabeth’s later union with Richmond is an implicit fulfillment of this request, as she refuses to marry her brothers’ murderer.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_278" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_279">
               <note type="label">authority</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Role and time as sovereign.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_280" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_281">
               <note type="label">prayers</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Requests, entreaties (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>prayers</term> n.1.2, now rare</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_282" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_283">
               <note type="label">scepter and crown</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>An ornamental rod or wand (often of gold and jewelled) borne in the hand as a symbol of regal or imperial authority</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>sceptre</term>, n.1.a</ref>); <quote>a circular ornamental headdress <gap reason="sampling"/> worn by a monarch as a mark or symbol of sovereignty</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>crown</term>, n.I.1.a</ref>). Together, symbolized power or authority; royal or imperial dignity, sovereignty, supremacy.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Tacit acknowledgement that the king’s son has the king’s preferment as heir. As Churchill (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:CHUR5">407–408</ref>) notes, this parting speech is borrowed directly from Hall: 
                  <cit><quote>Oh I am so sleepy, that I must make an end, and now before you all I commend my soul to almighty God, my savior and redeemer: my body to the worms of the earth, my kingdom to the Prince my son, and to you my loving friends my heart, my trust, and my whole confidence.</quote> 
                     <bibl>(see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Hall#emdTTR3_Hall_anc_89"><title level="m">The Union of the Two Noble and Illustre Families of Lancaster and York</title></ref>)</bibl></cit></note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_284" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_285">
               <note type="label">draw the curtains</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Close the bed-curtains. Beds were usually thrust on stage through one of the stage doors. Curtains would hang from the bed’s canopy, so the bed need not be removed before the king dies. With the specific stage direction for the king’s death, the audience witnesses the death (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3931 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3932"/>). See <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:THOM5">Leslie Thomson’s <title level="a">Beds on the Early Modern Stage</title></ref>.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3277" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3278">
               <note type="label">unto … spirit</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>And Jesus cried with a loud voice, and said, Father, into thine hands I commend my spirit. And when he thus had said, he gave up the ghost</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:THEB6">GNV, Luke 23:46</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_292" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_293">
               <note type="label">Fortune</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Shore’s wife’s first phrase is apt, given her depiction as one on whom Fortune had smiled, only to be dashed to penury. From her preferment as the king’s favorite mistress, Rowan notes <quote>it seems certain that she ended her days as a beggar and prostitute</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:ROWA1">458</ref>), while some traditions inaccurately suggest Shoreditch earned its name as the ditch in which her pauper’s grave lay.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_294" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_295">
               <note type="label">fortunate</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">One who makes others fortunate, <quote>gives good fortune to</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>fortunate</term>, v.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_296" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_297">
               <note type="label">famous</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Renowned, glorious, excellent (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:FLOR1">Florio, <term>Famoso</term></ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Fame is an attribute Shore’s wife had long been accused of craving; her prior hubris already causes difficulty in this first scene. Later, Richard calls Shore’s wife a <quote>famous strumpet</quote>, to bring this phrase full circle (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1383 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1384"/>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_298" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_299">
               <note type="label">mere mercy</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Absolute, perfect mercy in the fullest sense (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>mere</term>, adj.II.4</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary">Shakespeare uses the same phrase once in Q1 <title level="m">Rom</title>: <quote>This is meere mercie, and thou seest it not</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:SHAK62">F4v</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_300" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_301">
               <note type="label">fraught</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Carrying, burdened by (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>fraught</term>, adj.3</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_302" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_303">
               <note type="label">mirrors</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Shore’s wife repeats this imagery after she hears of the king’s death (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_382 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_383"/>). This evokes Churchyard’s poem (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Shoreswife#emdTTR3_Shoreswife_anc_51">How Shore’s Wife was Despoiled</ref>) in The Mirror for Magistrates, one of this play’s sources, and acts as a specific warning to sinners (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:CHUR5">Churchill 412</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_304" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_305">
               <note type="label">magnanimity</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Courage, fortitude (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>magnanimity</term>, n.2</ref>). Repeated alliteration heightens Shore’s wife as a character to be censured for daring to question Fortune.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_306" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_307">
               <note type="label">I would … me</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">With the king’s sickness close to her mind, Shore’s wife notes her tenuous hold on luck, and wishes she had no notoriety or taste of fame.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_308" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_309">
               <note type="label">exclaim</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Accuse, blame, rail at (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>exclaim</term>, v.2.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_310" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_311">
               <note type="label">condemn</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Doom, damn (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>condemn</term>, v.5.a and v.5.b</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Shore’s wife will later repeat the same term (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3762 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3763"/>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_312" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_313">
               <note type="label">advanced</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Elevated, benefited (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>advanced</term>, v.I.3</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_316" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_317">
               <note type="label">so may … down</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Shore’s wife does not appear to believe her fall inevitable: indeed, Fortuna was a fickle goddess who acted on her whims, both to raise a person up and drop them down.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_318" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_319">
               <note type="label">the king … sick</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">A virile, handsome king in his youth, Edward’s health became a matter of concern in his waning days: 
                  <cit><quote>with over-liberal diet, somewhat corpulent and burly, and natheless not uncomely; he was of youth greatly given to fleshly wantonness <gap reason="sampling"/> This fault not greatly grieved the people, for neither could any one man’s pleasure stretch and extend to the displeasure of very many, and was without violence.</quote> 
                  <bibl>(<ref target="doc:emdTTR3_More#emdTTR3_More_anc_325">Sir Thomas More, Undersheriff of London</ref>)</bibl>
                  </cit>He probably declined due to pneumonia or diabetes, exacerbated by his extravagant lifestyle: the poem describing Edward’s sudden death in <title level="m">The Mirror for Magistrates</title> is tellingly entitled <title level="a">How King Edward the Fourth, Through his Surfeiting and Untemperate Life, Suddenly Died in the Midst of his Prosperity, the Ninth of April, Anno 1483</title> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:BALD6">236</ref>), while Baldwin notes Edward’s lifestyle in his <title level="m">Mirror</title> poem on Rivers: 
                  <cit><quote>The king was bent too much to foolish pleasure, / In banqueting he had so great delight: / This made him grow in grossness out of measure. / Which as it kindleth carnal appetite, / So quencheth it the liveliness of the spirit, / Whereof ensue such sickness and diseases, / As none can cure, save death, that all displeases.</quote> 
                     <bibl>(see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Rivers#emdTTR3_Rivers_anc_47">How Sir Anthony Woodville was Imprisoned</ref>)</bibl></cit></note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_320" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_321">
               <note type="label">presageth</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Warns, senses a bad omen (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>presage</term>, n.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_322" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_323">
               <note type="label">mishaps</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Misfortune, <quote>injury, harm, damage</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>mishap</term>, n.3</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3279" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3280">
               <note type="label">for … king</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">We are not told how long it has been, but given Edward died surrounded by two courtiers, his brother, and his daughter (conspicuously not his queen) indicates the absence of amorous thoughts in his last days.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_324" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_325">
               <note type="label">approached</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Loomed, impended.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_326" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_327">
               <note type="label">I have … all</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Shore’s wife’s generosity was well documented: 
                  <cit><quote>where the king took displeasure, <supplied>Shore’s wife</supplied> would mitigate and appease his mind; where men were out of favor, she would bring them in his grace; for many who had highly offended, she obtained pardon; of great forfeitures she got men remission; and finally, in many weighty suits, she stood many men in great stead either for none or very small rewards.</quote> 
                     <bibl>(see More <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_More#emdTTR3_More_anc_329">Sir Thomas More, Undersheriff of London</ref>; <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:MORE2">More History, 49–50</ref>)</bibl>
                  </cit> Churchyard repeats such a perspective in his Mirror for Magistrates entry: 
                  <cit><quote>I took delight in doing each man good, / Not scratting all myself as all were mine, / But looked whose life in need and danger stood, / And those I kept from harm with cunning fine.</quote> 
                     <bibl>(see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Shoreswife#emdTTR3_Shoreswife_anc_45">How Shore’s Wife was Despoiled</ref>)</bibl></cit></note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_328" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_329">
               <note type="label">still ready</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Will in future.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_330" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_331">
               <note type="label">prefer</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Advance, promote (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>prefer</term>, v.I.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_332" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_333">
               <note type="label">preferment</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Advantage, position, benefit (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>preferment</term>, n.I.2</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_334" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_335">
               <note type="label">would deny</note>
                <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Shore’s wife was particularly persuasive with Edward: <quote>But the merriest was this Shore’s wife, in whom the king therefore took special pleasure. For many he had, but her he loved</quote> (see <ref>More as quoted in Holinshed</ref> <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_More#emdTTR3_More_p39">Sir Thomas More, Undersheriff of London</ref>; <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:MORE2">History, 49</ref>). Chute’s version of Shore’s wife boasts of how she manipulated Edward by withholding affection (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Chute#emdTTR3_Chute_anc_37">Beauty Dishonored Written Under the Title of Shore’s Wife</ref>). In Churchyard’s <title level="m">Mirror for Magistrates</title> poem, Shore’s wife claims <quote>I governed him that ruled all this land: / I bare the sword, though he did wear the crown</quote> (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Shoreswife#emdTTR3_Shoreswife_anc_47">How Shore’s Wife was Despoiled</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_336" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_337">
               <note type="label">want</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Go without, suffer.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_338" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_339">
               <note type="label">heavens forfend</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">May God forbid, avert (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>forfend</term>, v.2.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_340" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_341">
               <note type="label">nothing … comfort me</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">While renowned for her dalliances, her position as mistress prevented her from inheriting money or property on Edward’s death. As a pseudo-widow, she faces loss of her sole income.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_342" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_343">
               <note type="label">withal</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">As well, on top of it all (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>withal</term>, adv.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_344" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_345">
               <note type="label">my foes … triumph</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The public perception of Shore’s wife as social climber and (later) witch indicates she did not ingratiate herself with others in Edward’s court.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_346" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_347">
               <note type="label">scape</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Escape, recover.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_348" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_349">
               <note type="label">feather my nest</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Make the most of my opportunities, enrich myself (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title>, <term>feather</term>, v.I.5.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3281" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3282">
               <note type="label">that blow … cold</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">So that no matter how cold the winter storms blow.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_350" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_351">
               <note type="label">throughly</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Fully, completely, perfectly (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>throughly</term>, adv.1.a</ref>), as in <quote>wash me throughly from mine iniquitie</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:THEB6">GNV, Psalms 2.2</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_354" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_355">
               <note type="label">Mistress Shore</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">One of only two forms of address for Shore’s wife, implicit emphasis of her perceived promiscuity combined with the shame of an adulteress, having abandoned her husband for the king. Even if William Shore were complicit in the arrangement (as Heywood sympathetically illustrates in his play <title level="m">Edward IV</title>), the moral judgment seems embedded.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3283" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3284">
               <note type="label">come … with him</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Lodowick’s go-between role emphasises the scandal. Hastings is quoted in Dolman’s poem in the Mirror for Magistrates: 
                  <cit><quote>Shore’s wife was my nice cheat. / The holy whore, and eke the wily peat: / I fed his lust with lovely pieces so, / That God’s sharp wrath I purchased, my just woe.</quote> 
                  <bibl>(see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Hast#emdTTR3_Hast_anc_27">How the Lord Hastings was Betrayed</ref>)</bibl>
                  </cit> And later describes her as his <quote>tender piece</quote> (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Hast#emdTTR3_Hast_anc_29">How the Lord Hastings was Betrayed</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_356" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_357">
               <note type="label">recovered</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Restored; regained, brought back</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>recovered</term>, adj.1</ref>). Lodowick quibbles on how death <quote>recovered</quote> his soul back to God.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3285" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3286">
               <note type="label">He hath recovered</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">A political lie.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Lodowick has not been sent to deliver news of Edward’s death, but to deliver her to Hastings, who would presumably report it.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_358" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_359">
               <note type="label">long looked for</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">For years anticipated and hoped to reach.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_360" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_361">
               <note type="label">mend</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Improve, heal (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>mend</term>, v.I.5.a</ref>). Mistress Shore means physically; Lodowick hedges to mean spiritually.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_362" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_363">
               <note type="label">greatest … torments</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Edward’s earthly burden as opposed to the burden of the enmity resolved prior to death. Lodowick repeats the term Edward uses prior to his death (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_193 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_194"/>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_364" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_365">
               <note type="label">contentment … prince</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Satisfaction of King Edward IV (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>contentment</term>, n.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3287" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3288">
               <note type="label">The nobles … them</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Lodowick’s knowledge of Hastings’ mind allows aspersions that the lords’ agreement was a false show for the king’s benefit.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_366" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_367">
               <note type="label">revivest</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Restore, bring back from the dead (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>revive</term>, v.2.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_368" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_369">
               <note type="label">ended</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Lodowick says the agreement ended the moment Edward died, but his phrasing hints it remains in place for now. Suggesting <quote>but few</quote> denotes surprise it is intact.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_370" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_371">
               <note type="label">changed</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Exchanged, given up, altered (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>change</term>, v.2.b</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_372" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_373">
               <note type="label">Ah me, … woman</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Shore’s wife’s immediate reaction to consider her own loss, rather than the loss of the king, demonstrates an awareness of how much her financial survival depended on Edward.</note>	
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_374" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_375">
               <note type="label">misery</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Wretchedness, distress, misfortune (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:THOM6">Thomas, <term>Mĭsĕria</term></ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_376" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_377">
               <note type="label">forsake</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Abandon, desert (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>forsake</term>, v.4.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_378" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_379">
               <note type="label">entertained</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Employed, took into service, enlisted (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>entertained</term>, adj.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_380" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_381">
               <note type="label">change</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Adapting Lodowick’s phrase to her shift in security (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_370 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_371"/>). Arguably, she can’t have believed she was set for life, but the king’s relatively young age (almost 41 at death) suggests the younger woman felt her future more secure.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3289" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3290">
               <note type="label">when I … lands</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Lodowick is fictional: no historical land exchange is recorded. Even so, in this situation, as Lodowick is attached to Hastings, a Yorkist loyalist, we can infer Lodowick’s (fictional) lands were confiscated by the Lancastrians, and when the regime changed, Shore’s wife had them returned.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_382" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_383">
               <note type="label">mirror</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>A person or thing embodying something to be avoided; an example, a warning</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>mirror</term>, n.I.2</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The repeated imagery emphasises her fragility and how she will later reflect back the shortcomings of those who look on her (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_302 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_303"/>). The reflective nature of the stage itself as a mirror is a common parallel, which dates to at least Roman times.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_384" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_385">
               <note type="label">unconstant</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Inconstant, fickle, changeable (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>unconstant</term>, adj.1.a</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Shore’s wife repeats the phrase at <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3764 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3765"/>.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_386" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_387">
               <note type="label">one friend</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">King Edward IV.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_388" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_389">
               <note type="label">tree</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">A familiar botanical image that equates the king to a sturdy trunk, but also evolves into a reference to a <soCalled>family tree</soCalled>.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">A metaphor for the central trunk of the king and the dependent branches of his followers. Shakespeare uses a similar image (see <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:JOWE5"><title level="m">R3</title> 2.2.41</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_390" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_391">
               <note type="label">offspring … heart</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Joys grown from my love (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>offspring</term>, n.4</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_392" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_393">
               <note type="label">never abide me</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">An attitude directly adapted from Churchyard’s poem on Shore’s wife in The Mirror for Magistrates: 
                  <cit><quote>But well was he that could procure my fall: / His brother was mine enemy most of all, / Protector then, whose vice did still abound, / From ill to worse till death did him confound.</quote> 
                  <bibl>(see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Shoreswife#emdTTR3_Shoreswife_anc_49">How Shore’s Wife was Despoiled</ref>)</bibl>
                  </cit> Chute, too, uses similar hyperbole in his poem on Shore’s wife: in it, Richard calls Shore’s wife <quote>the monster of her age</quote> (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Chute#emdTTR3_Chute_anc_39">Beauty Dishonored Written Under the Title of Shore’s Wife</ref>). Churchill, however, questions the especial rancor that Richard is supposed to have held for Shore’s wife, as there is no material evidence of any interactions between the two until it was useful to blame her for Hastings’s corruption (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:CHUR5">411</ref>). Following that, Richard’s disdain appears falsely moralistic, as More records: 
                  <cit><quote>What manner of folk <supplied>Edward</supplied> most favored, we shall for his honor spare to speak of; howbeit this wot you well all, that whoso was best, bear alway least rule, and more suit was in his days made unto Shore’s wife, a vile and abominable strumpet, than to all the lords in England, except unto those that made her their protector, which simple woman was well named and honest till the king, for his wanton lust and sinful affection, bereft her from her husband, a right honest, substantial young man among you.</quote> 
                  <bibl>(see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_More#emdTTR3_More_anc_333">Sir Thomas More, Undersheriff of London</ref>)</bibl></cit></note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_394" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_395">
               <note type="label">to the death</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Violently, vehemently.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_396" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_397">
               <note type="label">whom</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Because I was the woman who.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_398" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_399">
               <note type="label">think well of</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Trust in, have faith in.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_400" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_401">
               <note type="label">alway</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Always, ultimately (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>alway</term>, adv.1</ref>). Repeated twice in quick succession for its only appearance in this play.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_402" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_403">
               <note type="label">helper</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Auxiliary, one who assists (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>helper</term>, n.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3291" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3292">
               <note type="label">For he … men</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Edward has always been kind to me, even though the world is fickle and men change quickly. Edward’s neglect in providing for her after his death contradicts this kindness somewhat.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_404" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_405">
               <note type="label">fickle</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>False, deceitful, treacherous</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>fickle</term>, adj.1.a</ref>). Secondary meaning of changeable and inconstant by noting her enemies may reverse course.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_406" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_407">
               <note type="label">want</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Insufficiency (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>want</term> v.I.2.c</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_408" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_409">
               <note type="label">oppress</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Distress, afflict, weigh down (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>oppress</term>, v.2.b</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_410" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_411">
               <note type="label">at your dispose</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Yours to control as you see fit (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>dispose</term> n.3</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_416" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_417">
               <note type="label">think … money</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Have remembered the money you owe me.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3293" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3294">
               <note type="label">With thanks … for.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Morton offers gratitude, not financial interest: the Citizen refuses more promises in lieu of his payment.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_418" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_419">
               <note type="label">But sir, … marvel</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The Citizen reacts negatively to Morton’s request to bear with him, perhaps with a non-verbal or physical cue. This provokes Morton’s immediate accusation of greed in the face of uncertainty.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_420" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_421">
               <note type="label">uncertain</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Subject to doubt</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>uncertain</term>, adj.3.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_422" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_423">
               <note type="label">our own</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The direction of our future. The Citizen assumes Morton means his personal fortune.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_424" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_425">
               <note type="label">quittance</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Discharge of debt by word of mouth before a witness (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:BARE1">Baret</ref>, <term>quittance</term>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3295" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3296">
               <note type="label">Where nothing … right</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">When there is no money, not even the king could demand payment. Proverbial: <quote>you cannot get blood from a stone</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:KELL4">Kelly 227</ref>, <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:TILL1">Tilley W107</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_428" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_429">
               <note type="label">And I … pardon</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Each favor is fictional, but are representative of Shore’s wife reputed kindness.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_430" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_431">
               <note type="label">Now, Mistress … you?</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Despite noting his debt, Morton’s question is unavoidably ghoulish, knowing the king is dead. This is the first instance of Shore’s wife as a public spectacle.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_432" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_433">
               <note type="label">try</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Test the quality of (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>try</term>, v.7.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_434" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_435">
               <note type="label">Citizen</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">This speech is originally assigned to Morton, but the reference to a son is persuasive enough to correct this to the Citizen, the only character to mention a son (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3766 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3767"/>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_436" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_437">
               <note type="label">Gramercies</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Thanks (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:FLOR1">Florio, <term>Ringratiamenti</term></ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_438" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_439">
               <note type="label">good father</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Polite address, which suggests (along with his reference to a son) that the Citizen is older than the others.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_440" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_441">
               <note type="label">The better … he</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">He’s all the better thanks to you.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_442" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_443">
               <note type="label">bear us company</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Come with us to form a sort of procession.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3297" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3298">
               <note type="label">thinks … coming</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The reunion between Shore’s wife and Hastings has been delayed due to Edward IV’s illness.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_446" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_447">
               <note type="label">huffer</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Boaster, swaggerer, hector (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>huffer</term>, n.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_448" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_449">
               <note type="label">but by … leave</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">If I may apologize for my impertinence (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>leave</term>, n.1 and P.1.a</ref>). Spoken out of Shore’s wife’s earshot.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3299" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3300">
               <note type="label">maim … credit</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Grave damage (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>maim</term>, v.2</ref>) to her standing or reputation (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>credit</term> n.I.1a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_450" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_451">
               <note type="label">ace … maw</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">A trump card in a trick-taking game of chance (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT3"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>maw</term> n.4.1a, hist</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">A now-rare card game, often referred to as <quote>five finger</quote>. As a trick-taking game, maw depends on the luck of the cards dealt, and the ways in which suits are stolen from opposing players. The ace of hearts was maw’s third trump card behind the five and jack, so the Citizen suggests Shore’s wife has allied herself to the next most powerful man in the <quote>deck</quote>, after losing her first two trumps in William Shore and Edward IV (Parlett, Historic Card Games).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_452" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_453">
               <note type="label">even … bake</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Their circumstances will be shaped by their own actions. Compare <quote>as you bake, so shall you brew</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:TILL1">Tilley B654</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_454" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_455">
               <note type="label">an</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">If.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_456" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_457">
               <note type="label">cold customers</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Poor debtors, people of questionable morality unwilling to pay.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3301" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3302">
               <note type="label">Mass</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">By the mass, a mild curse.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_458" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_459">
               <note type="label">meet … better</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Discover my other debtors are also unwilling to pay.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_460" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_461">
               <note type="label">keep … household</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Go greatly into debt due to unpaid loans.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_466" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_467">
               <note type="label">The hour … absence</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Given the time of day, leave me alone.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_468" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_469">
               <note type="label">charge</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Duty, task, responsibility (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>charge</term>, n.II.13.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_470" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_471">
               <note type="label">Renowned … worthy</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Sycophantic endorsement of Richard’s right to be the protector.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_472" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_473">
               <note type="label">far deserves … king</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Is much worthier to be the king.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_476" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_477">
               <note type="label">govern</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Take responsibility for, protect (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>govern</term>, v.1.a</ref>) but secondarily, control and discipline (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>govern</term>, v.1.b</ref>). Catesby hints at how proper control of the young king will benefit Richard.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_478" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_479">
               <note type="label">young</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The young king’s youth is a sticking point, given the turmoil (and war) that surrounded the last child king, Henry VI.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_480" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_481">
               <note type="label">Plantagenet’s</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">My father’s inherited birthright.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_482" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_483">
               <note type="label">but his son</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The rule of male primogeniture was customary in England based on the statutes of Common Law, but was not formalized until the reign of Henry VII. The flexibility in inheritance processes (given multiple claims from both sides) mean Richard’s contradiction, where he supports the king’s son right to inherit and then stakes his own right, demonstrates the fluidity of these claims.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_484" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_485">
               <note type="label">And who, … brother?</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard knows he has slipped in the line of succession and bemoans the laws which disadvantage him. Arguably, as his father negotiated his own right to the throne with Henry VI, Richard believes there are loopholes.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_486" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_487">
               <note type="label">bridle</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Curb, check, restrict (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>bridle</term>, v.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3303" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3304">
               <note type="label">Principality</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">The rank of a prince, supreme authority (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>principality</term>, n.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_488" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_489">
               <note type="label">the title … god</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Churchill observes the similarity between this line and 1 Tamburlaine’s <quote>To be a king is half to be a god. / A god is not so glorious as a king</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:CHUR5">481</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_490" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_491">
               <note type="label">valiant</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Bold, brave, courageous (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>valiant</term>, adj.II.5.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3305" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3306">
               <note type="label">that in … riches</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Acts befitting the valiant.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_492" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_493">
               <note type="label">renown … soldier</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Fame, reputation, esteem for deeds of war (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>renown</term>, n.2.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3307" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3308">
               <note type="label">never … life</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Never offered or endowed but by the quality of deeds, and not revoked even in death.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_494" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_495">
               <note type="label">reaped … glory</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Collected, gathered (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>reap</term>, v.1</ref>) no possessions, only the esteem of others.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3309" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3310">
               <note type="label">becometh</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Suits, agrees with, recommends (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>become</term>, v.III.7.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_496" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_497">
               <note type="label">honor</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The inheritance Richard of York negotiated, only to be killed before he could reign.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_498" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_499">
               <note type="label">hazard</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Danger, jeopardy, peril (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:FLOR1">Florio, <term>Pericolo, Periclo</term></ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_500" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_501">
               <note type="label">brother’s sons?</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Whether he had completed his martial tasks for self-interest or for his house, Richard reasons that placing children as inheritors of his family legacy tarnishes the work undertaken.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_502" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_503">
               <note type="label">baser</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Less than, below (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>base</term>, adj.I.2.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_504" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_505">
               <note type="label">got</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Gained, acquired (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>got</term>, adj.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_506" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_507">
               <note type="label">hop … denies me</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Writhe after being beheaded, any who dare oppose him. Compare Shakespeare (see <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:LOUG2"><title level="m">2H6</title></ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_508" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_509">
               <note type="label">Have … sight</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Impediments dehumanized as logs, with specific reference to scripture: 
                  <cit><quote>suffer me to cast out the mote out of thine eye, and behold, a beam is in thine own eye? Hypocrite, first cast out that beam out of thine own eye, and then shalt thou see clearly to cast out the mote out of thy brother’s eye.</quote> 
                  <bibl>(<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:THEB6">GNV, Matthew 7:4–5</ref>)</bibl>
                  </cit> Essentially, Richard can now see clearly.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_510" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_511">
               <note type="label">shadow</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>To protect or shelter (a person or thing) from the sun</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>shadow</term>, v.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_510" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_511">
               <note type="label">shadow</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Dark foreboding.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The young king stands between Richard and the glory of the crown and casts a shadow. Further, the playwright makes good on Poetry’s promise of shadows (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_26 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_27"/>) (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:WALS2">Walsh 80</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_512" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_513">
               <note type="label">disinherit</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Were Edward V crowned, the heir presumptive would be his younger brother, the duke of York; were Edward V to have children, they would move ahead of Richard in the succession. Richard has a slender window of time to claim the throne before it is gone entirely.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_514" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_515">
               <note type="label">the yoke … brother</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The burden of Richard’s service for Edward IV. <quote>By metaphore it is a seruitude or a bon¬dage</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:LILY1">Lily, <term>Iugum, vertex, siue cacumen montis</term></ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">This is a similar sticking point in Shakespeare (see <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:JOWE5"><title level="m">R3</title> 1.3.119–123</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_516" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_517">
               <note type="label">subject</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Submissive; obedient</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>subject</term>, adj.I.3.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_518" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_519">
               <note type="label">withhold</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Restrain, dissuade, keep back (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>withhold</term>, v.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_520" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_521">
               <note type="label">as I … reign</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard recognizes the difference; as protector he rules England, but does not reign over it. He has control but desires the status (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3768 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3769"/>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_522" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_523">
               <note type="label">proudest</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Most valiant, bravest, mightiest (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>proud</term>, adj.II.6.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_524" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_525">
               <note type="label">sharpest shower</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Most sudden tempestuous downpour.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The rendering of this phrase in Q gives <quote>sharpest shoure</quote>, which might be easily misread as <term>sharpest hour</term>, or <gloss>most intense conflict</gloss>, in martial terms. There is no doubt that <quote>shower</quote> is correct, however, both in the reign/shower pun and in the prior use of this term (Glaser (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:GLAS1">56</ref>) records its use in a fifteenth century ballad <supplied>Index 5. Bodleian MS 3938</supplied>, for example) to describe a swift, violent cloudburst. Proverbially, however, <soCalled>the sharpest shower wears itself out soonest</soCalled>, meaning Richard also refers to the fleeting nature of his power. Literally, this can also be read in terms of a volley of arrows: a very sharp shower indeed.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3311" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3312">
               <note type="label">the babes … beds</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard proposes grisly fates for the seemingly disposable princes, or <quote>babes</quote>: target-practice for soldiers, food for fish, and fertilizer for flowerbeds. Hall notes a rumour on the boys’ resting-place: reportedly submerged in lead-lined coffins in <quote>a place called the Black-deeps at the Thames mouth, so that they should never rise up nor be seen again</quote> (<ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Hall#emdTTR3_Hall_p5">Hall</ref>). Hall’s detail is gleaned from John Rastell’s 1529 <title level="m">The Pastime of People or the Chronicles of Divers Realms</title> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:BULL3">Bullough 3.225</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_526" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_527">
               <note type="label">make them away</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Kill them.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_530" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_531">
               <note type="label">Page</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The style of speech here and in the following line are unusual for a stranger (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3770 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3771"/>). These lines are assigned to Percival in Q, but given Richard’s <quote>But what’s he with thee</quote>, I posit these are misattributed to Percival when they should be the Page’s lines (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3772 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3773"/>). Reassigning these lines to the Page means that Percival does not speak until invited (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3774 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3775"/>). The speech assignment of <quote>Perc</quote> is noted as irregular or doubtful by Greg (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:GREG11">1929, ix</ref>), Churchill agrees (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:CHUR5">420</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_534" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_535">
               <note type="label">shall be</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Is soon to come. The Page’s presumption indicates the plot has support.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_542" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_543">
               <note type="label">Exit Page</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Shifting the Page’s exit to this position means he reacts directly to Richard’s command.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_540" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_541">
               <note type="label">give place</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Get out.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3313" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3314">
               <note type="label">animates</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Fills with boldness, encourages (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>animate</term>, v.I.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_546" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_547">
               <note type="label">Rise, … fall</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Further to Richard’s rejection of hell and damnation, self-reassurance over his plot (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3776 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3777"/>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_552" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_553">
               <note type="label">devise</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Invent.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The scheme against the boys is new. Richard’s amazement at Buckingham’s support fortifies his belief in the scheme.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3315" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3316">
               <note type="label">sets abroach</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Proclaims (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:FLOR1">Florio, <term>Intimare</term></ref>), makes public (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>abroach</term>, adv.1.b</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_554" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_555">
               <note type="label">laugh … change</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Not literal laughter.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard refers to a Tudor characterization of Fortune as laughing at humanity, as we see in More’s Fortune Verses: <quote>Fortune at them laughs; and in her throne, / Amid her treasure and wavering riches, / Proudly she hovers as Lady and Empress</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:MORE2">121–123</ref>). For further discussion of Fortune’s laughter, see <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:WARD7">Allyna E. Ward’s <title level="a">Fortune Laughs and Proudly Hovers</title></ref>.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard acknowledges the fickleness of Fortune and the changes she enacts but will take his chances if they progress as he anticipates. As Ribner notes, <quote>Richard III, the villain, never calls upon God for assistance, or attributes events to the will of Providence. He relies entirely on himself, and it always upon fortune that he calls for aid</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:RIBN1">84</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3317" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3318">
               <note type="label">be … may</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Whether or not that’s so (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>may</term>, v.1.3.b</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_556" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_557">
               <note type="label">I will … colours</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">I am afraid of no enemy or opponent (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>colour</term>, n.III.20.b</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Colours refer to flags or ensigns of armies, and came to be understood as <soCalled>tricks</soCalled> or opposing schemes.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_558" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_559">
               <note type="label">ruth</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Compassion, or pity (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>ruth</term>, n.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_560" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_561">
               <note type="label">fame conquers death</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard looks ahead to chroniclers who will document his reign, but also the playwright and spectators who give him fame in this playhouse. Richard’s regular use of direct address suggests that he feeds off the audience and desires to ingratiate himself to them. Richard feeds off the audience’s energy, and takes their attention as approval for his actions. Later, the Page will point out the dilemma he identifies in his own (and the audience’s) collusion, also in direct address.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_568" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_569">
               <note type="label">long foes</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Rivals for a long time. Richard and Buckingham’s rivalry stretched to the reign of Henry VI, for Buckingham’s family links to the Woodvilles and distant claim to the throne. After Edward IV’s death, Buckingham initiated contact with Richard to secure his allegiance (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:DAVI11">Davies</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_564" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_565">
               <note type="label">Thy trust … lord</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">The trust Buckingham has in you.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_566" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_567">
               <note type="label">utter … unto thee</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Tell you everything I’m thinking about.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_570" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_571">
               <note type="label">allay</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>To bring down, overthrow (a person, nation, etc.); to reduce to submission</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>allay</term>, v.1.3</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_572" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_573">
               <note type="label">proud</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Haughty, arrogant, superior (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>proud</term>, adj.I.1.a</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Woodville social climbing through Edward IV’s wife was a common complaint.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_574" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_575">
               <note type="label">friend</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Political ally.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_576" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_577">
               <note type="label">grace</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Favour, regard, goodwill (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>grace</term>, n.I.2.b</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_578" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_579">
               <note type="label">uttermost</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Outermost, limits (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>uttermost</term>, adj.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3319" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3320">
               <note type="label">whate’er … devise</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Whatever his plan.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Because Richard has already decided the only course is to kill the boys, it is telling that he suggests Buckingham’s input is welcome. Buckingham does not believe himself a pawn. The providence Richard thanks comes in the form of Buckingham’s suggestion, and by assenting he secures his loyalty (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3778 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3779"/>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_580" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_581">
               <note type="label">prince</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Buckingham is only concerned with King Edward V, although obviously if the young king were to miscarry, his brother would be the next target. At this stage the bastardy slur has not been formulated.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_582" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_583">
               <note type="label">might do well</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">May be effective.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_584" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_585">
               <note type="label">our purpose</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard has a larger plan than simply separating the boys from their relatives, but is happy to share, or credit Buckingham with, the initial idea.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_586" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_587">
               <note type="label">he</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">The young king.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_588" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_589">
               <note type="label">instant</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Event, occasion.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The young king’s arrival in London, not the coronation.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_590" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_591">
               <note type="label">so play … part</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Self-conscious theatricality is a feature of Richard’s view of himself.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard’s <soCalled>role</soCalled> will be significant not solely in the separation of the boys and their uncles, but also in the aftermath to become king: a notable metatheatrical reference.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3321" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3322">
               <note type="label">more … look for</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard declares his ambition clearly here: he wishes to be king and is unwilling to accept less.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_592" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_593">
               <note type="label">hairbreadth</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Width of a hair, an infinitesimally small space (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>hairbreadth</term>, n.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_594" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_595">
               <note type="label">Adjudge thou</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">You be the judge; You determine the meaning.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard has just declared his ambition, if in oblique terms, preferring to claim the idea is Buckingham’s. Further, Richard’s refusal to mention his ambition in front of Percival demonstrates his care not to be accused of treason and his distrust of Buckingham.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_596" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_597">
               <note type="label">it</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The actor might play this moment in multiple ways, such as terrified of disagreeing with Richard, or in knowing acceptance, which reflects Richard’s charm and influence.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_598" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_599">
               <note type="label">satisfy</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Furnish with proof, convince (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>satisfy</term>, v.I.5</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_600" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_601">
               <note type="label">word of mouth</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Spoken in formal or informal discourse, in this instance to keep the plan secret in case letters are intercepted.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_602" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_603">
               <note type="label">brave</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Courageous, daring, worthy (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>brave</term>, adj.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_606" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_607">
               <note type="label">footmen</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Foot soldiers (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>footmen</term>, n.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3323" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3324">
               <note type="label">lord chamberlain … Hastings</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Both references to the same man: William, Lord Hastings held the position of lord chamberlain until his execution in June 1483. Churchill notes this line as evidence that the playwright was familiar with Hall’s Chronicle, carelessly transcribing <quote>Henry duke of Buckingham, and William lord Hastings, and lord Chamberlain</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:CHUR5">348</ref>) as though they are three separate people (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:CHUR5">405</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_608" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_609">
               <note type="label">Zounds</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">By God’s wounds (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>Zounds</term>, int.1</ref>), a mild expression of surprise.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_610" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_611">
               <note type="label">dares he trust</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard acknowledges that Hastings holds a strong affection for Edward IV and the princes, and thus is unlikely to follow Richard’s plan.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_614" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_615">
               <note type="label">as his … life</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">As much as he trusts himself.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_616" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_617">
               <note type="label">secret</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Reserved, <quote>not given to indiscreet talking</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>secret</term>, adj.2.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_618" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_619">
               <note type="label">warrant</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Assure, guarantee (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>warrant</term>, v.4.e</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_620" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_621">
               <note type="label">weighty</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Of great gravity</quote>, serious, momentous (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>weighty</term>, adj.3.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_622" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_623">
               <note type="label">slipped</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Passed over, neglected, overlooked (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>slip</term>, v.I.i.7.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_624" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_625">
               <note type="label">funeral</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Decorum dictates Richard be in mourning for his brother’s death; hastening to Buckingham might provoke suspicion.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3325" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3326">
               <note type="label">screen … fire</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">A household fixture which shields the grate from splattering fire into the room, and reduces the intensity of heat (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>screen</term>, n.I.1.a</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Early modern household floors were covered with dry rushes, easily ignited. Richard’s subterfuges both shield and protect him from heat. In this metaphor, the <soCalled>heat</soCalled> refers to the risk of exposure or discovery that might disrupt Richard’s plan.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_626" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_627">
               <note type="label">strengthen myself</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Improve my claim to the throne.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_628" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_629">
               <note type="label">controversy</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Argument, contention (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>controversy</term>, n.1.a</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard’s claim that Edward’s previously contracted marriage made his marriage invalid, and disinherited his children. Technically, Richard’s claim is legally sound (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:CRES1">Cressy 306–307</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_630" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_631">
               <note type="label">kindred</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard looks to manipulate what is between his nephews and their claim to the throne, rather than engendering conflict between the kin of Edward IV (Richard himself) and Elizabeth’s family.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_632" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_633">
               <note type="label">in hucksters’ handling</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Likely to be roughly used or lost; beyond the likelihood of recovery (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>huckster</term>, n.3</ref>). A huckster is a mercenary petty profiteer.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_634" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_635">
               <note type="label">they not … friends</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">His retinue are not firm allies.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_636" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_637">
               <note type="label">water … drown it</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The multitude of available Woodvilles is a strength Richard uses as a weapon, where mistrust and infighting will upset the balance.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_638" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_639">
               <note type="label">redouble</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Increase, intensify (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>redouble</term>, v.I.2</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The modern grammar would say <mentioned>redoubles</mentioned>, or perhaps a word is missing: <mentioned>may redouble</mentioned> would correct the grammar. This is one of several examples of faulty grammar throughout the play: grammatical issues crop up in early modern English as used idiosyncratically by speakers in this work, specifically in subject-verb agreement. We have not corrected grammar lapses unless they make meaning too hard to comprehend for modern readers.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_642" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_643">
               <note type="label">Fortune</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard’s reference to Fortune echoes Shore’s wife’s reference (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_292 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_293"/>). Richard welcomes the turn of the wheel, having spent his time at the bottom before he moved to the top. Even if he falls—and Richard acknowledges this is likely—the infamy of the rise assures immortality.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_644" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_645">
               <note type="label">world report</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">In the account of citizens and the memory of chroniclers.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_646" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_647">
               <note type="label">vassals</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Servants, lowest class citizens subordinate to everyone else and no opinion worth having (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>vassal</term>, n.2.b</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3327" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3328">
               <note type="label">it is enough</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard doesn’t retain this humble desire throughout—as soon as he achieves his aim he works to ensure he maintains his position. The developing plot and modest goals distances him from Shakespeare’s Richard.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_648" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_649">
               <note type="label">Sirrah</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Diminutive for a young male servant. This can be used to speak to a man, expressing contempt (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>sirrah</term>, n.1.a</ref>), but as the Page is a boy of apprentice age (12–24 years), this is a proper form of address.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_650" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_651">
               <note type="label">court</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">General body of courtiers (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>court</term>, n.I.4.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_652" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_653">
               <note type="label">Joy, my lord</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Similar to Shakespeare’s scene where Buckingham gauges the appetite for Richard’s kingship (see <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:JOWE5"><title level="m">R3</title> 3.7.1</ref>), the Page seeks reactions to Richard as protector.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_654" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_655">
               <note type="label">murmur</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Discontent, muttered complaint, grumbling (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>murmur</term>, n.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_656" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_657">
               <note type="label">young king</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Edward V.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3925" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3926">
               <note type="label">A parlous … on</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">A dangerous (or perilous) issue (as in bone of contention) to chew on (or grind between the teeth) before coming to a conclusion.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3329" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3330">
               <note type="label">a rush … other</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">A bundle of dried plant stems tied together for various household purposes, like thatch, cleaning horses and dogs, chair seats, even cheap candles, if very tightly knit. But a single rush is worthless.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The closely interwoven Woodvilles are like a closely-knotted bundle of rushes, whose unity may be weakened by one loose knot. Richard looks to undo the knot of Woodville confederates. His apparently artless description of what he would do with them (feed them to the dogs and or set them on fire) is not proverbial so much as violent means to get rid of them.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3331" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3332">
               <note type="label">Duke … Wales</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Buckingham’s army rallies in support of Richard, but reports interpret their action as a power grab. Richard is happy to let it seem Buckingham aims at the crown, which diverts attention from his own ambitions. Churchill (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:CHUR5">406–407</ref>) notes Buckingham’s location in the Marches of Wales, a territorial name of the borderland between Wales and England, is specifically mentioned in Hall’s chronicle (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:CHUR5">347</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_658" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_659">
               <note type="label">shadow</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Remnant, one without substance (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>shadow</term>, n.II.6.g</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Repeated from Richard’s reference to impediments between him and the throne, Buckingham’s lack of military strength and lack of feasible claim recontextualize this fear (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_510 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_511"/>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3333" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3334">
               <note type="label">In trust … treason</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Often those worthy of the greatest trust are most likely to be betrayers (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:TILL1">Tilley T549</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_660" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_661">
               <note type="label">slippeth</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Moves quickly away.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3335" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3336">
               <note type="label">ill … tools</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Do not trifle with dangerous people and activities (proverbial, <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:TILL1">Tilley J45</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">For Richard, this includes princely matters. See also Greene: <quote>Take heede I say, it is ill iesting with edged tooles, and bad sporting with Kings</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:GREE8">Greene F1r</ref>). Similar to <soCalled>If you play with fire, you’ll get burned</soCalled>.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3337" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3338">
               <note type="label">strike … hot</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Take advantage of the situation (proverbial, <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:TILL1">Tilley I94</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3339" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3340">
               <note type="label">I’ll trust … him</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">A profound statement of distrust: <gloss>Once out of sight, any duke might plot any scheme against me</gloss>.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_664" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_665">
               <note type="label">your judgments</note>
               <note type="performance" resp="pers:MALO2">The Page speaks to the audience, tasking them to decide for themselves about Richard’s future. As Walsh notes, this is just one instance of direct address the Page employs: later (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3780 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3781"/>) he is a traditional chorus figure, delivering details about off-stage events (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:WALS2">84</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">There is a notable difference between the way that Richard constantly woos the audience, to draw them into his fantasies, and the Page’s stern caution that the audience is asked to interpret.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_666" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_667">
               <note type="label">wont</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Been in the habit or custom of (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>wont</term>, n.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_668" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_669">
               <note type="label">spider … fly</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The spider is a predator to the fly, and in this relationship, each man sees himself as the spider. Ultimately, as he will discover, Buckingham is the fly preyed upon by Richard’s spider.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_670" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_672">
               <note type="label">lord marquess</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Dorset.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3341" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3342">
               <note type="label">earls … Northumberland</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Westmorland did not fight at Bosworth but pledged loyalty to Henry VII after Richard’s death. Northumberland’s inaction at Bosworth is often claimed to be a reason for Richard’s defeat, susceptible to Richmond’s influence (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:ELLI5">Ellis</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_675" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_676">
               <note type="label">gear will cotton</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Matter will succeed, or go on (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>Cotton</term>, v.II.4</ref>). Compare <title level="m">Troublesome Reign of King John</title> (see <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:ANON4"><title level="m">TRKJ</title></ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_677" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_678">
               <note type="label">what do I</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">What am I doing.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_679" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_680">
               <note type="label">meddling</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Interfering, intervening (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>meddle</term>, n.</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3343" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3344">
               <note type="label">should … points</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Is better suited to helping my master undress (or untie his points, the ribbon or cord that attached hose to a doublet, or fastened a shoe (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>point</term> n.II.ii.23.a</ref>). The Page questions his aptitude for spying and scheming, when he feels like he should be doing standard servant’s tasks.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_681" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_682">
               <note type="label">beside</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">As a result, in the end.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3345" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3346">
               <note type="label">meddle … end</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The Page understands too much meddling can result in misfortune; he vows to remain separate to save himself.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_683" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_684">
               <note type="label">napping</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Unawares.</note>
                  <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2"><ref type="bibl" target="bibl:GREG11">Greg</ref> confirms this reading, which has its first vowel obscured and potentially can be read as <mentioned>nipping</mentioned> (sharp, stinging, curt <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>nipping</term>, adj.1</ref>), thus altering the meaning significantly.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_685" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_686">
               <note type="label">any words</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">A potential alternate reading on this phrase is <soCalled>my words</soCalled>, which helps clarify the sense of the line. This suggestion is offered with the acknowledgement that a typesetter could potentially mistake a scribe’s <q>m</q> for <q>an</q>, hence altering the line.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3347" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3348">
               <note type="label">my tongue … mouth</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">I may say something out of turn to cause trouble.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_693" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_694">
               <note type="label">Haute</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Q and all subsequent texts list this character as <soCalled>Hapce</soCalled>, but this clearly refers to Elizabeth Woodville’s uncle, Sir Richard Haute. He is silent in this scene.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_695" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_696">
               <note type="label">Edward V</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">As Greg notes (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:GREG11">1929, ix</ref>), Q calls the young king <quote>King</quote> or <quote>Kng</quote> in speech headings, to reflect his newly-acquired (if not ceremonially confirmed) title. Edward IV is also called <quote>King</quote> in Q speech headings in his single scene, which in this edition is corrected to <quote>Edward IV</quote> for clarity’s sake (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3782 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3783"/>). This edition defers to <quote>Edward V</quote>, which leaves little doubt about the identity. Edward IV refers to his son as <quote>young king</quote> on four occasions, but for the sake of clarity we defer to his title (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3784 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3785"/>). Another option is to call him <soCalled>Prince</soCalled>, but since we do not meet the character until after he has inherited the crown (although never to see his coronation), Edward V is more apt.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_697" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_698">
               <note type="label">Right-loving</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Honest, worthy.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_699" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_700">
               <note type="label">company</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Body of accompanying armed figures (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>company</term>, n.4.b.i</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_701" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_702">
               <note type="label">mother hath written</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">More reports Richard managed to persuade Elizabeth to write a letter to her son which dismissed his retinue (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_More#emdTTR3_More_p8">Sir Thomas More, Undersheriff of London</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_703" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_704">
               <note type="label">convenient</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Suitable, appropriate (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>convenient</term>, adj.3.b</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Repeated below (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3786 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3787"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_705" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_706">
               <note type="label">dismiss</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Disperse, disband (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>dismiss</term>, v.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_707" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_708">
               <note type="label">train</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Retinue, company (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:BARE1">Baret, <term>Company: societie, fellowship</term></ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Wilson notes connections between this speech and Shakespeare (see <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:JOWE5"><title level="m">R3</title> 2.2.120</ref>), including repeated words <quote>train</quote>, <quote>malice</quote>, <quote>green</quote>, and <quote>break</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:WILS15">301</ref>), an element Greg suggests as evidence of Shakespeare’s inspiration by this play (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:GREG12">1955, 80–81</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_709" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_710">
               <note type="label">for fear</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Lest, in case (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>fear</term>, n.3.b</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_711" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_712">
               <note type="label">Northampton … receive us</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Northampton is a halfway point between Ludlow Castle and London, and as it was not heavily populated (no more than several thousand), a large retinue could have drained resources.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The Woodville family manor was in Grafton Regis, 8 miles south of Northampton, which explains familiarity between Rivers and the Host (see <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:JOWE5"><title level="m">R3</title> 1.3.119</ref>). The decision to dismiss the train grew from Richard’s reassurance that meeting at Stony Stratford (5 miles from Grafton Regis) will be beneficial; evidence suggests Rivers and Richard were previously friendly, so Rivers had little reason to fear. The necessity (<quote>feigned</quote>, according to Hall) of splitting the train between the towns of Northampton and Stony Stratford indicates a large retinue, threatening to Gloucester. Wilson (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:WILS15">302</ref>) notes this detail, which is absent from Shakespeare but builds on a similarly-phrased passage from More (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_More#emdTTR3_More_p8">Sir Thomas More, Undersheriff of London</ref>), is directly from Hall:  
                  <cit><quote><supplied>the Woodvilles</supplied> brought the young king toward London with a sober company in great haste (but not in good speed) till he came to Northampton, and from thence he removed to Stony Stratford. On which day. the two dukes and their bend came to Northampton, feigning that Stony Stratford could not lodge them all.</quote> 
                  <bibl>(see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Hall#emdTTR3_Hall_anc_93">The Union of the Two Noble and Illustre Families of Lancaster and York</ref>)</bibl></cit></note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_713" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_714">
               <note type="label">again</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Furthermore.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_715" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_716">
               <note type="label">come … blood</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard’s appointment was unpopular with the Woodvilles, who correctly feared loss of influence. The young king appears aware of this tension, and is anxious not to antagonize his uncle Gloucester.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_717" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_718">
               <note type="label">my words … one</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">My words agree with my mother’s letters.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_719" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_720">
               <note type="label">myself give consent</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Agree to this course of action.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_721" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_722">
               <note type="label">show</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Present, offer (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>show</term>, n.I.i.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3349" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3350">
               <note type="label">league … green</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Pact of alliance is fresh and new.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Rivers’ phrasing is generous and suggests equal truce, when Lancastrian leaders were executed in the aftermath of the Battle of Tewkesbury and other loyalists were pardoned. This could well have ended the Wars of the Roses, but the death of Edward IV meant those pardoned Lancastrians saw a new opportunity to stake their claims.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_723" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_724">
               <note type="label">little cause</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">The smallest, merest incident.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_725" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_726">
               <note type="label">variance</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Strife, contention, brawling (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:THOM6">Thomas, <term>Concertātĭo</term></ref>). Used later in relation to Richard and Buckingham (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3788 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3789"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_727" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_728">
               <note type="label">requisite</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Necessary, compulsory (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>requisite</term>, adj. and n.</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_729" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_730">
               <note type="label">up</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote><supplied reason="editorial">R</supplied>isen in rebellion</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>up</term> adv. 2.10.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_731" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_732">
               <note type="label">Marches of Wales</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The border counties in the west of England, close to Wales, where Buckingham had allies. He would later attempt to rouse these allies for his failed rebellion (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:DAVI11">Davies</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_733" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_734">
               <note type="label">for what … not</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The alliance between Richard and Buckingham is unnerving to the Woodvilles, as these men held open enmity prior to Edward IV’s death.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_735" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_736">
               <note type="label">boldly</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Without hesitation; assuredly</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>boldly</term>, adv.3</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_737" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_738">
               <note type="label">do as … good</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Do what you think is best.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3351" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3352">
               <note type="label">Why, my … obey</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">These lines are probably spoken in a private conference, out of the young king’s earshot. Talk of treason (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3790 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3354"/>) and possession of the young king’s body is unlikely to inspire the boy with confidence in them (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3791 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3792"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3353" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3354">
               <note type="label">king’s … traitor</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Vaughan and Rivers quibble on Richard’s mobilization: Vaughan believes Richard armed to protect the king, while Rivers considers it treason.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_739" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_740">
               <note type="label">in charge</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Under control, safely protected (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>charge</term>, n.II.12.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_741" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_742">
               <note type="label">care</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Worry, doubt, fear (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>care</term>, n.2</ref>). Richard later uses this word in fear of repercussions (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3793 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3794"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_743" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_744">
               <note type="label">they the authority</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Gloucester has final say over the decisions the young king makes. Although the Woodvilles supervise the physical presence of the king, their power is minimal, and the young king, without his protector, is merely a figurehead.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_745" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_746">
               <note type="label">misdoubt</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Suspect, mistrust (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>misdoubt</term>, n.1</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">If Rivers identifies Gloucester a foe, he also suspects his ally, Buckingham, is similarly minded.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_747" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_748">
               <note type="label">conference</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Parlay, counsel (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>conference</term>, n.4.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_749" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_750">
               <note type="label">hear</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Find out.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">This word is re-used in the next scene (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3795 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3796"/>) as the Page forces the Host to spy on (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>hear</term>, v.10.a</ref>) the Woodvilles, using their tactic against them.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_751" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_752">
               <note type="label">pretense</note> 
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Intentions, reasons (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>pretence</term>, n.2</ref>). Note how this word is used in a different sense by Richard at <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2167"/>.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_753" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_754">
               <note type="label">be good</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Be honorable, loyal, supportive.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_755" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_756">
               <note type="label">make return … them</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Catch up with us along with them.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_757" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_758">
               <note type="label">come … speed</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Hurry to us with information.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_759" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_760">
               <note type="label">my sister</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Historical inaccuracy: while Sir Richard Grey is often (including by Shakespeare) characterized as one of the young king’s uncles, he was Elizabeth Woodville’s son, so the young king’s half-brother.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3355" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3356">
               <note type="label">For my … obey</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Grey’s loyalty is the group’s downfall. Unable to identify the weakness in his plan, Grey’s prime justification is the word of the Mother Queen and young king.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_761" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_762">
               <note type="label">If it … grace</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Spoken deferentially to the young king.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3357" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3358">
               <note type="label">Exit Rivers</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">By shifting this stage direction, the young king may personally say farewell to his uncle.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3359" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3360">
               <note type="label">my father’s years</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Edward IV lived to only 41 years of age. The young king’s youth is emphasized by his idealization of this age as a long, full life.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3361" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3362">
               <note type="label">God … may</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">If God be willing.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_765" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_766">
               <note type="label">root … sown</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Uncover this mistrust and enmity rife.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_767" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_768">
               <note type="label">weary</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Regretful, remorseful, dispirited (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>weary</term>, v.I.1.b</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_769" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_770">
               <note type="label">mischiefs</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Evils, wickedness (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>mischief</term>, n.III.5</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_771" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_772">
               <note type="label">king-like resolution</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Wise and proper judgment.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">A passing hyperbolic connection between Edward V and the wisdom of King Solomon. Later, Henry VII is compared to Solomon (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3127 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3128"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_773" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_774">
               <note type="label">toward</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Promising, willing, apt (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>toward</term>, adj.3</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_775" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_776">
               <note type="label">forward</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Inclined, committed (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>forward</term>, adj.3.c</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3363" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3364">
               <note type="label">whose … among us</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Who will, God willing, reign prosperously for many years.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_777" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_778">
               <note type="label">forward</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The young king wittily re-associates Vaughan’s word with their onward progress to London.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_4012" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_4013">
               <note type="label">Host</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Q renders this character as <quote>Oste</quote> both in speech headings and text. This might imply a lower-class accent in the treatment of his name, although Rivers also uses this same word. This is most logically an elision of <soCalled>Host</soCalled>.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3365" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3366">
               <note type="label">amazed</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Stunned, stupefied, bewildered (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>amazed</term>, adj.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_787" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_788">
               <note type="label">mad</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Bewilder, stupefy, daze</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>mad</term>, v.2</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_789" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_790">
               <note type="label">altogether</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Entirely, completely; wholly</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>altogether</term>, adv.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_791" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_792">
               <note type="label">because</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>In order that</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>because</term>, adv.2</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_795" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_796">
               <note type="label">sumptuous</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Costly and magnificent</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>sumptuous</term>, adj.2</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_797" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_798">
               <note type="label">used friendly</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Treated amicably (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>friendly</term>, adv.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3367" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3368">
               <note type="label">possible … be—</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Greg notes this as an irregular reading (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:GREG11">1929, ix</ref>) as Q provides no end stop to this line. This phrase is acceptable when punctuated, but without the period Greg questions whether there is a word missing or an interruption is implied. In this case, an em-dash is here adopted to indicate interruption, based on the host’s anxious energy.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_799" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_800">
               <note type="label">an</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">If.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_803" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_804">
               <note type="label">several</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Separate, distinct</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>several</term>, adj.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_807" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_808">
               <note type="label">villain</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Rascal, a base, vile, abject, scurvy fellow, a scoundrel (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:FLOR1">Florio, <term>Vigliacco</term></ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_811" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_812">
               <note type="label">good old earl</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Rivers was only 43 years old, although at that time, when lifespans were considerably shorter, he would have been considered more of an elder statesman at that age. Rivers has stayed frequently at this inn, well known by the Host who is described as an <quote>old Host</quote> at his entrance, which suggests that the Host is the elder of the two, although this casting choice changes the dynamic between the two. A younger Host means he betrays a man he has known his entire life; an elder Host may have seen Rivers grow up. For the consideration of Rivers as <quote>good old earl</quote> at 43 years old, Churchill notes examples from contemporary plays, including <title level="m">Edward III</title>, <title level="m">3 Henry 6</title>, and <title level="m">Selimus</title>, where the designation of advanced age to a younger man was calculated to increase pathos (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:CHUR5">426–427</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_813" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_814">
               <note type="label">an I do</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">If I do.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_817" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_818">
               <note type="label">no remedy</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">No solution, alternative (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>remedy</term>, n.P.1.d</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_829" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_830">
               <note type="label">masters</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">The audience.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Walsh notes: 
                  <cit><quote>the host confronts the playgoers by imputing to them a false perception of the world. In essence, he says, <q>you think it’s like this, but really, it’s like that</q>, a challenge to playgoers to consider his ethical dilemma in relation to King Richard’s rise to power.</quote> 
                     <bibl>(<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:WALS2">84</ref>)</bibl></cit></note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_831" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_832">
               <note type="label">troublesome vocation</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Distressing task of betrayal.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_833" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_834">
               <note type="label">crept into</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Unexpectedly stumbled or fell into.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_835" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_836">
               <note type="label">fair halter</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Sturdy noose (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>halter</term>, n.2.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_841" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_842">
               <note type="label">Mother Queen</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Modern parlance would describe the mother of the current monarch as <soCalled>Queen Mother</soCalled> (an informal title most recently held by Elizabeth Bowes Lyon <supplied>1900–2002</supplied>), but this play describes Elizabeth Woodville, widow of Edward IV, as <quote>Mother Queen</quote>, to emphasize her maternal importance to this narrative.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Elizabeth took sanctuary with seven of her children (including Princess Elizabeth and Richard, duke of York), at Westminster Abbey after Edward V was seized by Gloucester and Buckingham. This silent scene dramatizes their flight, potentially greeted by the archbishop of York.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3369" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3370">
               <note type="label">sanctuary</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">A church or other sacred place in which, by the law of the mediæval church, a fugitive from justice, or a debtor, was entitled to immunity from arrest (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>sanctuary</term>, n.II.5.a</ref>). To indicate this space, a symbol might be incorporated, such as a large cross, or the assistance of an archbishop guiding them into safety (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:MCMI1">McMillin and MacLean 131</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Similar to those in plays like <title level="m">The Famous Victories of Henry the Fifth</title>, <title level="m">The Troublesome Reign of King John</title>, and <title level="m">Three Lords and Three Ladies</title>, the scene follows an Ancient Roman pantomime tradition of organizing <quote>important effects around visual emblems</quote> to convey information without words (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:MCMI1">McMillin and MacLean 133</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_847" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_848">
               <note type="label">Earl … chamber</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Where available, Rivers might speak from the upper stage, and call out from an opening down as Richard and Gloucester enter below. This efficiently conveys his confinement while his enemies are at liberty below. On tour, this would require adjustment where there is no available window or balcony. This might include a prison behind a central panel, or a small window in a stage door, or the upper stage, or a separate mansion that incidentally could also be used for the bed. This stage direction reflects a moment in Baldwin’s poem in <title level="m">The Mirror for Magistrates</title> which notes that Rivers <quote>opened the window to look out</quote> where he saw <quote>the streets each were beset</quote> around his inn (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Rivers#emdTTR3_Rivers_anc_49">How Sir Anthony Woodville was Imprisoned</ref>; <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Rivers#emdTTR3_Rivers_anc_51">How Sir Anthony Woodville was Imprisoned</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3371" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3372">
               <note type="label">Ho, mine … key?</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">While there is a case to be made for lines in Rivers’ first speech to be presented as verse—which might indicate a heightened tone as he realizes he has been imprisoned—the prose structure also reflects his disordered confusion and reflects his sudden loss of status. This moment of realization also appears in Baldwin’s poem in <title level="m">The Mirror for Magistrates</title>: <quote><q>How so</q>, quoth I, <q>the dukes are gone their ways?</q> / <q>Th’have barred the gates, and borne away the keys</q></quote> (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Rivers#emdTTR3_Rivers_anc_53">How Sir Anthony Woodville was Imprisoned</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3373" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3374">
               <note type="label">chamberlain</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Attendant at a nobleman’s bedchamber (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>chamberlain</term>, n.1.a</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">No character has this name in the dramatis personae; it refers to either an unseen servant of the Host’s house or an unspecified attendant to Rivers.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_853" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_854">
               <note type="label">Rivers seems … off-stage</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Rivers sees Richard and Buckingham off-stage before the audience does. Rivers would likely look out of an opening in the upper stage, as Richard and Gloucester enter on the stage below.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_855" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_856">
               <note type="label">salute</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Pay respects to (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>salute</term>, v.3</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_857" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_858">
               <note type="label">envy</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Dislike, disapprove of (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>envy</term>, v.2.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_863" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_864">
               <note type="label">Good morrow</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Rivers calls off-stage to attract Richard and Buckingham, thus lowering his status by appealing for aid. His immediate use of Richard’s new title demonstrates his humility and reflects the corresponding moment from More: <quote><supplied>Rivers</supplied> determined, upon the surety of his own conscience, to go boldly to them and inquire what this matter might mean</quote> (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_More#emdTTR3_More_anc_335">Sir Thomas More, Undersheriff of London</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_865" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_866">
               <note type="label">our good cheer</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Our excellent food and drink, as well as pleasant company.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard, Buckingham, and Rivers dined together the previous night, as Baldwin notes in The Mirror for Magistrates: 
                  <cit><quote>They supped with me, propounding friendly talk / Of our affairs, still giving me the praise: / And ever among the cups to me ward walk: / <q>I drink to you, good coz</q>, each traitor says: / Our banquet done, when they should go their ways, / They took their leave, oft wishing me good night, / As heartily as any creature might.</quote> 
                     <bibl>(see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Rivers#emdTTR3_Rivers_anc_55">How Sir Anthony Woodville was Imprisoned</ref>)</bibl></cit></note>
           </note>
            
           

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_867" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_868">
               <note type="label">agèd head</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Rivers was a little more than a decade older than Richard. This insult carries the secondary meaning of a man attached to the former generation, thus behind the times.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_869" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_870">
               <note type="label">Like Judas</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard associates Rivers’ place at their table with Judas Iscariot at the last supper: <quote>Then Judas which betrayed him, answered, and said, Is it I, master? He said unto him, Thou hast said it</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:THEB6">GNV, Matthew 26:25</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3375" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3376">
               <note type="label">Like Judas … laugh</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">As Richard becomes more poetic in his condemnation of Rivers and all traitors, he switches for these eight lines into rhyming couplets.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_871" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_872">
               <note type="label">thou admitted wast</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">You were invited.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_873" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_874">
               <note type="label">heavens … ills</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">God stopped you from harming us.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_875" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_876">
               <note type="label">in this plight</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">In this peril: locked inside his chamber.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_877" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_878">
               <note type="label">Griev’st thou</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Are you dismayed, upset.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_879" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_880">
               <note type="label">sway</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Have influence, or control (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>sway</term>, n.I.5</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_881" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_882">
               <note type="label">he was</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">He who was the man nominated.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_883" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_884">
               <note type="label">to make … away?</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">To murder us?</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_885" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_886">
               <note type="label">ringleader</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Chief author, first beginner, headman (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:THOM6">Thomas, <term>Princeps</term></ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_887" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_888">
               <note type="label">must … realm</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard accuses Rivers of wanting to influence the young king and the nation, a role which would necessitate Richard’s removal.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3377" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3378">
               <note type="label">Nay, overboard … helm</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Through nautical language, Richard positions himself as a captain who guides the ship of the realm, removes disloyal shipmates, and revels in his ability to steer policy.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3379" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3380">
               <note type="label">weed you … roots</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Remove you individually like nuisance plants, destroy you like worthless husks of threshed grain (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>chaff</term>, n.1.a</ref>), I’ll tear (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>rend</term>, v.1.a</ref>) your family out so thoroughly you cannot recover.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">This second set of metaphors turns agricultural. Richard identifies traitors as weeds in England’s garden which must be taken, destroyed like worthless chaff, and swears to tear up Rivers’s family by the very roots. The use of the word stock holds multiple meanings in this context: Richard allies them with a useless tree stump (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>stock</term>, n.I.1a</ref>) to be torn up, but also threatens Rivers’s bloodline, as in farming, stock evokes the seeds (and animals) to breed the next year’s crop and plan for the future. This also links to the meaning of family (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_73 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_74"/>), line of descent (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>stock</term>, n.I.3a</ref>), and to tree imagery used by Shore’s wife (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_388 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_389"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3381" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3382">
               <note type="label">that yet … laugh</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Which still mocks at me while the family remains alive.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3383" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3384">
               <note type="label">Alas good … been</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">These lines are set as verse in Q, but do not scan. Up until this point, Rivers speaks in prose; by continuing in prose, Rivers humbles himself before choosing to match Richard’s heightened verse speech in reaction to Richard’s dismissal.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_889" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_890">
               <note type="label">my prince</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Edward V, the young king.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_891" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_892">
               <note type="label">exclaim … sort</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Cry out so loudly in this manner.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_893" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_894">
               <note type="label">false report</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Rumor, innuendo.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_895" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_896">
               <note type="label">proudest … crew</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Bravest member of your retinue.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Rivers attempts to ingratiate himself by echoing Richard’s maritime imagery, to limited effect.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_899" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_900">
               <note type="label">numb</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Lacking feeling or sensation (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>numb</term>, adj.1.b</ref>) but exaggeratedly due to the feebleness of his age.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_901" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_902">
               <note type="label">his tongue … young</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">He brags and negotiates as if he were a younger man.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_905" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_906">
               <note type="label">Whenas</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Seeing that, inasmuch as (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>whenas</term>, adv.2.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_907" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_908">
               <note type="label">packing</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Setting, pricking of cards, essentially, cheating (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:FLOR1">Florio, <term>Interzamento</term></ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_909" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_910">
               <note type="label">Upbraid</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Reproach, reprove, censure</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>upbraid</term>, v.I.2.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3385" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3386">
               <note type="label">Upbraid you … run</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">As Rivers defends himself, he heightens his speech into rhyming couplets to echo the strategy Richard used to accuse him. Aside from an abcb sequence, this section is an extended run of couplets (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3797 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3798"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_911" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_912">
               <note type="label">to your grace</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Against Richard.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_913" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_914">
               <note type="label">I record</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">I remember, I recall (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>record</term>, v.II.4.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_915" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_916">
               <note type="label">progeny</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Family, issue (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>progeny</term>, n.1.a</ref>). Rivers also defends his family’s reputation.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_917" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_918">
               <note type="label">glass</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">A magic mirror, a crystal, used in magic art (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>glass</term>, n.II.9.a</ref>). Staring into such a magic mirror was said to allow users to see the past or the future.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3387" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3388">
               <note type="label">France … Irish … Scotland</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Rivers was a well-decorated soldier: serving in Brittany in 1472, with Edward’s invasion of France in 1475, and was one of the principal commanders in Gloucester’s successful 1482 campaign in Scotland (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:HICK3">Hicks</ref>). Rivers’s proximity to Richard in the Scottish campaign perhaps offers eyewitness evidence to support this isolated claim that Richard cowardly avoided scars in battle. There is no evidence to suggest that Rivers or Gloucester served in Ireland, but during his lifetime the primary English military intervention in Ireland comprised the defense of The Pale, the English-controlled area that surrounded Dublin.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3389" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3390">
               <note type="label">When thou … rust</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">This is Rivers’s first loss of control. He insults Richard for what he believes is cowardice in war, as evidenced by his lack of injuries and rusty armor. There is no evidence Richard avoided war, and his reported valor at Bosworth directly contradicts this statement (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:HORR2">Horrox</ref>). The image of Richard’s rusted armor is echoed in Shakespeare (see <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:JOWE5"><title level="m">R3</title> 3.5.1.s.d.</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_921" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_922">
               <note type="label">far … kin</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Irrelevant to old biases or familial relationships.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Rivers notes they swore fidelity to Edward IV without concern to past enmity, but now Richard appears to cast judgment based on old rancor.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_923" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_924">
               <note type="label">the oath</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Rivers was not present at Edward’s death, and Richard swore no oath there. This oath is a secondhand report, not a witnessed event. The reference is to Edward’s deathbed suggests the dying king’s plea that Dorset and Hastings <quote>be unto <supplied>the young king</supplied> as you have been to me</quote> (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_266 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_267"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_925" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_926">
               <note type="label">our prince’s</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">King Edward IV’s.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_927" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_928">
               <note type="label">now</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2"><ref type="bibl" target="bibl:BOSW2">Boswell</ref> added the word <quote>not</quote> to this line because he believed that neither the meaning nor the verse scanned properly without it. However, Rivers certainly takes the opportunity to speak his mind, and a slight revision in <quote>But time permits now nevertheless to tell thee all my mind</quote> scans as a fourteen-syllable line.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_929" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_930">
               <note type="label">tell … mind</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Speak plainly to you.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_931" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_932">
               <note type="label">for fear</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Because others are afraid of your violence and intimidation.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_935" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_936">
               <note type="label">Let commons … hand</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Let the people or citizens decide what they want. Rivers warns treason against the young king will not stand.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_937" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_938">
               <note type="label">whom</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Commons, common people, citizens.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_939" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_940">
               <note type="label">in words … you</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">In language as eloquent as yours.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3391" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3392">
               <note type="label">My lords … quail</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">This line sequence has been adjusted to maintain the rhyme structure in context: the internal abcb rhyme emerges with this rearrangement and helps with the clarity of the speech.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_941" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_942">
               <note type="label">set to sale</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Open to all, expose for scrutiny (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>sale</term>, n.2.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_943" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_944">
               <note type="label">faith … prince</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">A reminder that Richard accuses Rivers of treason against the young king, not simply of enmity to Richard and Buckingham. In this sense, Rivers is entitled to indignation.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_945" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_946">
               <note type="label">quail</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Waste away, decline, wither (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>quail</term>, v.I.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_947" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_948">
               <note type="label">none … can do</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">If no one can show proof.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_949" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_950">
               <note type="label">protector</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">This phrase is certainly spoken cynically, given how Rivers judges Richard. Rivers now openly questions the efficacy of Richard’s protection.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_951" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_952">
               <note type="label">injur’st</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Slander, insult (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>injure</term>, v.2</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_953" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_954">
               <note type="label">as judges … are</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">You will condemn me here and now, with an emphasis on the illegality of their proceedings.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_955" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_956">
               <note type="label">taking no remorse</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Allowing no pity, compassion (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>remorse</term>, n.5</ref>) to extenuate the case.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3393" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3394">
               <note type="label">law. In justice</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Tried fairly by the laws of the land.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_959" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_960">
               <note type="label">cooling card</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Words to dampen passion or enthusiasm (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>cooling</term>, adj.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_961" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_962">
               <note type="label">fast</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Trapped, fixed, under control (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT3"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>fast</term> v.1.1a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_963" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_964">
               <note type="label">cut him off</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Stop his mouth, prevent him from speaking.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_965" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_966">
               <note type="label">Injurious</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Willfully wrong, harmful (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>injurious</term>, adj.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_967" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_968">
               <note type="label">I hardly … given</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">I can barely stand to listen to these accusations you have made.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_969" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_970">
               <note type="label">with my … touch</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Now that my integrity has been called into question.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_971" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_972">
               <note type="label">thy ruth</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Your contrition, repentance; remorse (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>ruth</term>, n.2</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_973" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_974">
               <note type="label">Officers … Rivers</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Q gives no stage direction to indicate officers enter to arrest Rivers, but given that he begins the scene locked behind a door, and Richard then makes specific reference to where he should be taken after he exits, officers must be in his train. Potentially, they could accompany Richard and Buckingham at the beginning of this scene, and stand silently as a sign of intimidation. The officers in the train offer security, particularly since the <quote>jostling</quote> episode with Grey in the following scene.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_975" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_976">
               <note type="label">Pomfret Castle</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">A contemporary elision of Pontefract Castle, Wakefield, where Rivers and Grey were held and executed.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_977" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_978">
               <note type="label">secretly</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Out of sight.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3395" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3396">
               <note type="label">as you … deal</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Await my command on how you should proceed.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_979" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_980">
               <note type="label">garrison</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Troop of soldiers (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>garrison</term>, n.4.a</ref>): the group Buckingham mustered from the Marches of Wales.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_981" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_982">
               <note type="label">band</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The numbers in a <quote>band</quote> of soldiers is unclear, but as the term is used in scripture: <quote>Then the soldiers of the governor took Jesus into the common hall, and gathered about him the whole band</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:THEB6">GNV, Matthew 27:27</ref>), this would equate to a cohort of 400–600 soldiers. Richard takes no chances Rivers may be freed.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_983" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_984">
               <note type="label">common jail</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Rivers is not sent to the relative comfort of the Tower of London, but the notorious underground dungeons at Pontefract.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_985" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_986">
               <note type="label">I know … mind</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">I know what you plan to do.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3927" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3928">
               <note type="label">God bless … protect</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Prayer for his half-brothers: Rivers had only one illegitimate child of his own; the children he prays to protect and bless are the princes in the Tower. Characterizing these as figures he leaves behind indicates the protector’s role he has assumed in lieu of Richard.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_987" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_988">
               <note type="label">marks</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Targets an archer aims at (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>mark</term>, n.VI.23.a</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Dorset uses similar imagery with Hastings (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_201 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_202"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_989" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_990">
               <note type="label">rid … right</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Deprive them of their inheritance.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_991" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_992">
               <note type="label">Farewell, sweet England</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Rivers is only transported some 150 miles further north, but knowing Pontefract’s bloody reputation, he embraces his likely death.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_993" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_994">
               <note type="label">leads the way</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Rivers physically takes charge and exits with some dignity. His acceptance of death presages he will be first in a procession of deaths at Richard’s hand. This short line indicates Rivers’s strength and stoicism, and suggests an actor’s pause at its end.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_995" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_996">
               <note type="label">thrall</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Bondage, servitude, captivity (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>thrall</term>, n.I.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_997" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_999">
               <note type="label">fear them</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Fear for them.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1000" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1001">
               <note type="label">be sure</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Surely. Rivers also warns that Richard <quote>take note</quote> because the injustice meted out to him will eventually find and punish his captors.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1004" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1005">
               <note type="label">hoist … serves</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Make the most of this momentum (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:TILL1">Tilley S23</ref>). See also <soCalled>make hay while the sun shines</soCalled>. A return to nautical imagery, as Richard looks to take advantage of Rivers’s capture before his confederates discover the trick.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1006" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1007">
               <note type="label">hot beginning</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Passionate first attack (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>hot</term>, adv.2</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1008" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1009">
               <note type="label">straightly</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Directly, immediately (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>straightly</term>, adv.2</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1010" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1011">
               <note type="label">laid close</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Watched and guarded by soldiers; originally a nautical term: maneuvered one’s ship alongside (another) for the purpose of boarding or fighting (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>lay</term>, v.I.5.b and v.II.11.b</ref>). In terms of a highway, the implication is preparation for ambush.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1012" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1013">
               <note type="label">suffered</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Compelled, forced, persuaded (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>suffer</term>, v.I.8</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1014" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1015">
               <note type="label">pretense</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>An assertion of a right, title, <gap reason="sampling"/> a claim</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>pretense</term>, n.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1016" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1017">
               <note type="label">bewrayed</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Exposed, discovered, revealed (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>bewray</term>, v.6</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1018" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1019">
               <note type="label">shoot him through</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Kill him.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Presumably Richard believes any who resist the lord protector’s authority is an enemy worthy of execution.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1020" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1021">
               <note type="label">post-horse</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">A fast horse kept for messengers and travelers (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>post-horse</term>, n.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1022" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1023">
               <note type="label">Stony Stratford</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">A small town in Buckinghamshire where Edward V rested the night before arriving in London for his coronation.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1024" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1025">
               <note type="label">such grace</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Such a prayer or blessing before dinner.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Metaphorically, Richard plans to ingratiate himself with the young king and his retinue, rather than immediately make further arrests.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1034" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1035">
               <note type="label">discomfort</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Dismay, upset (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>discomfort</term>, v.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1036" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1037">
               <note type="label">heaviness</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Displeasure, anger</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>heaviness</term>, n.1.c</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1038" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1039">
               <note type="label">so great … grace</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">As important a responsibility as the young king represents.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1040" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1041">
               <note type="label">cannot hear</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Have not heard.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3397" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3398">
               <note type="label">at some words</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Having an angry, contentious argument (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title>, <term>word</term>, n.I.9.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1042" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1043">
               <note type="label">fear</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Feel apprehensive.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The optimistic young king has much to feel apprehensive about: not only does he mourn his father’s death and feels nervous about his coronation and new responsibility, but he has clearly noticed his uncles on both sides of his family squabbling and maneuvering.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1044" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1047">
               <note type="label">sweet … grape</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Young wine from a superior grape.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Grey feels fortified by the young king’s words, which he claims would revive a man half-dead.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1048" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1049">
               <note type="label">of such … prince</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">From a prince of your quality.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1050" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1051">
               <note type="label">careless … soever</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Unconcerned about bad luck or accidents, no matter their peril.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1052" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1053">
               <note type="label">likelihoods</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Probabilities, reports.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard commanded the roads be guarded closely to prevent messengers, but as Haute knows of Buckingham they were clearly spotted.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1054" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1055">
               <note type="label">not … far</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Will soon be here.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1056" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1057">
               <note type="label">entertain</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Receive, host (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>entertain</term>, v.III.6.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1058" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1059">
               <note type="label">courtesy</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Hospitality, politeness (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>courtesy</term>, n.1.b</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3399" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3400">
               <note type="label">prince’s … own</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Haute is aware of the sensitivity of this visit and urges Grey to offer Richard kindness to ensure their own safety and a smooth coronation.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1062" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1063">
               <note type="label">hardly</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">With great difficulty (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>hardly</term>, adv.5.b</ref>); but also, cued by quick repetition (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3799 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3800"/>) to contrasting meaning of severely, unfairly (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>hardly</term>, adv.3</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1064" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1065">
               <note type="label">merry countenance</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Happy demeanor, pleasant show.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1058" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1059">
               <note type="label">courtesy</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The young king repeats the term as the way Richard should be treated, reversed to consider Richard’s appearance as a courtesy to his nephew’s new status (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1058 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1059"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1066" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1067">
               <note type="label">have made haste</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Have arrived in a swift fashion (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:THOM6">Thomas, <term>Cĕlĕro</term></ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3401" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3402">
               <note type="label">looked … yet</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Did not expect you so soon.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1068" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1069">
               <note type="label">humble duty</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard offers deference to the young king, necessary before he can separate his rival from Grey and the remainder of his retinue.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1070" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1071">
               <note type="label">redouble</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Reflect, re-echo</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>redouble</term>, v.III.9.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3403" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3404">
               <note type="label">on afore</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Go ahead in advance of the main group (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>afore</term>, adv.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3405" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3406">
               <note type="label">keep your rooms</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Go to your chambers.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Quoted from More’s description of this moment: <quote>go afore, gentlemen and yeomen, keep your rooms</quote> (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_More#emdTTR3_More_anc_337">Sir Thomas More, Undersheriff of London</ref>). There is no indication that the train actually exits, because of Grey’s and Buckingham’s scuffle and the swift arrests of the Woodvilles.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1075" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1076">
               <note type="label">Buckingham … Grey</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The deliberateness of Buckingham’s accusation makes it more reasonable to believe he is the aggressor here, and justifies the officer remaining on stage after they have been ordered to their rooms. Buckingham’s action has historical precedent (as noted by <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:CHUR5">Churchill, 405</ref>), recorded by Hall that <quote>there within <supplied>the</supplied> kynges presence they picked a quarel to the lord Richard Grey</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:HALL11">349</ref>). The tenor of the scene changes significantly from this point, heightening the danger for the Woodvilles. Alternately, an actors’ choice could be to set Grey as the aggressor, which would indicate his disdain for Richard’s faction, but this sets Buckingham as the victim in the exchange and justifies his reaction. In any case, the jostle draws the lines of enmity between the factions, and by claiming self-defense in front of the young King, Buckingham has set the next phase of Richard’s plan in motion.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1077" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1078">
               <note type="label">jostle</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Collide with, push, shove (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>jostle</term>, v.I.2.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1079" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1080">
               <note type="label">more than needs</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Uncalled for.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1081" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1082">
               <note type="label">inward envy</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Hidden enmity, unspoken hatred.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard uses a term which Rivers has just professed to himself, which confirms Richard’s accusation (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_857 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_858"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1083" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1084">
               <note type="label">will burst out</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard calls on Grey’s undisguised animosity as an excuse to question his integrity and to position himself and Buckingham as more reliable advisors to the king.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1085" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1086">
               <note type="label">the king’s blood</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Blood relative of the king.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Grey is also of the king’s blood, as his half-brother, but Richard emphasizes his nearer blood connection.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1087" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1088">
               <note type="label">rubbed</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Irritated, agitated (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>rubbed</term>, adj.2</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1089" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1090">
               <note type="label">venomous rashness</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Injurious (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>venomous</term>, adj.1</ref>) recklessness (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>rashness</term>, n.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1091" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1092">
               <note type="label">venomous sore</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Festering wound.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Repetition emphasizes his feelings, making it clear to the audience and the characters present that battle lines are being drawn, and that niceties have been abandoned (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1089 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1090"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1093" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1094">
               <note type="label">remove … flesh</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Cutting away gangrene.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard likens the Woodvilles to a gangrenous limb best removed before the rest of the body is poisoned.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1095" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1096">
               <note type="label">dislike thy abuse</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Object to your behavior.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1097" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1098">
               <note type="label">combat</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Duel for satisfaction of my honor.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3407" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3408">
               <note type="label">an it … grace</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">If it please the king.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1101" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1102">
               <note type="label">attach</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Take custody of (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>attach</term>, v.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3409" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3410">
               <note type="label">conveyed … Scots</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Redirected funds from the treasury to Scottish factions allied to England.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">More reports Grey was accused, along with Dorset and Rivers, of having: 
                  <cit><quote>entered into the Tower of London, and thence taken out the king’s treasure, and sent men to the sea. All which things, these dukes wist well, were done for good purposes and necessary by the whole council at London.</quote> 
                  <bibl>(see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_More#emdTTR3_More_anc_339">Sir Thomas More, Undersheriff of London</ref>)</bibl></cit> In the aftermath of the 1482 capture of Berwick-upon Tweed (in Northumberland, as opposed to North Berwick in Fife, Scotland), the English-funded support of the Duke of Albany arose as a sticking point politically, even though Richard was directly involved. Churchill questions whether Grey could possibly have been involved in this scheme (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:CHUR5">431</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1105" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1106">
               <note type="label">currying favor</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Ingratiating yourself, seeking preferment (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>curry</term>, v.5.b</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1107" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1108">
               <note type="label">thinks … hid</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Wants to cover it up.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1109" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1110">
               <note type="label">authority</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Like a power of attorney, a legal tool to govern and make decisions for (<gloss>protect</gloss>) a minor or unfit adult.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The movement of the young king without Richard’s presence undermined the protector, which he remedied by intercepting the train.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1111" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1112">
               <note type="label">in the … you</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Regardless of the things you do against me.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1113" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1114">
               <note type="label">competitor</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Confederate, partner, associate (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>competitor</term>, n.2</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3411" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3412">
               <note type="label">till … place</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Until we have time to hold a formal trial. However, Rivers and Grey were convicted without trial.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1117" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1118">
               <note type="label">general … you all</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">The distribution of these funds to the Scots was agreed upon by the privy council, a fact Richard conveniently omits.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3413" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3414">
               <note type="label">hands … discharge</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Signatures as proof of the execution of my duty in delivering the funds (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>discharge</term>, v.3.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1119" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1120">
               <note type="label">yet as … right</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Legal only if your accusations were true.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1121" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1122">
               <note type="label">presumption</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Confidence, arrogance (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>presumption</term>, n.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1125" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1126">
               <note type="label">secretly</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard uses the same term to describe the arrest of Rivers (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_977 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_978"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1127" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1128">
               <note type="label">coronation</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard is unclear about whose coronation he means: the young king may presume his own, but to his arrested uncles, they may wonder whether Richard means his own. The audience may also interpret this to mean Richard’s.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">This is yet again a hot issue on the stage and foments the king’s outburst, creating a dramatic stage picture.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1131" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1132">
               <note type="label">consent</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Agreement, authority (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>consent</term>, n.4</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The trump card that Richard holds is that as Protector, he is responsible for a minor who has no legal status to consent, so in effect, the young king’s consent is dictated by Richard. Again, this triggering word will elicit different reactions from the assembled lords: some of sympathy, some admiring his courage, some annoyed by his prattle. As the idealistic young king speaks, the body language and reactions of the older men with him will speak volumes to the audience.</note>

           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1133" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1134">
               <note type="label">loving kindred</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">These accusations are a clear surprise to the young king, who has only seen his family members as a positive influence.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1135" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1136">
               <note type="label">give aim at</note> 
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Stand idly by (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>aim</term>, n.P.2</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Field notes that <quote>to give aim was to stand within a convenient distance from the butts, to inform the archers how near their arrows fell to the mark</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:FIEL2">Field 27</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3415" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3416">
               <note type="label">Ah, Edward … rule</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">In Edward’s first crisis of policy, he wishes either for early death or more time to grow up and learn to make such decisions, a response which emphasizes his youth.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1137" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1138">
               <note type="label">Edward</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">The young king.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1139" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1140">
               <note type="label">enjoy my kingdom</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Take advantage of being king.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1141" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1142">
               <note type="label">entreat</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Plead, beg, intercede (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>entreat</term>, v.II.7.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3417" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3418">
               <note type="label">for all … own</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">I cannot speak for the other Woodvilles, but in regard to Lord Grey, why would he need to steal money, when he has a great deal of his own wealth?</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1143" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1144">
               <note type="label">perilous</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Terrible, formidable (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>perilous</term>, adj.2</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1145" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1146">
               <note type="label">promotion … equals</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Preferment instead of others equally deserving; or advancement to greater responsibility over his peers, or over other peers. However, Richard disputes Grey as a real <term>peer</term> or lord of ancient heritage.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1147" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1148">
               <note type="label">his betters</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Those more highly ranked than he, from an older peerage.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Even though Grey is son to the Mother Queen, she herself is not of royal blood. Richard again undermines Grey’s status as a peer, seeing him as a social-climber or power-seeker.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3419" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3420">
               <note type="label">secrecy</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Hidden information, conspiracy.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1149" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1150">
               <note type="label">subtle</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Deceptive, crafty, treacherous (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>subtle</term>, adj.I.2.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3421" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3422">
               <note type="label">babes … child</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Two open references to the young king’s inexperience and youth; Richard therefore sees him as unqualified to speak on policy.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1151" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1152">
               <note type="label">use you as</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Treat you like.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1153" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1154">
               <note type="label">consult … matters</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Have discussions and make decisions about important topics.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1155" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1156">
               <note type="label">prejudicial</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Disadvantageous, harmful (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>prejudicial</term>, adj.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1157" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1158">
               <note type="label">determination</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Settlement of the matter (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>determination</term>, n.2.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1159" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1160">
               <note type="label">just recompense</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Reasonable satisfaction, reparation (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>recompense</term>, n.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1161" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1162">
               <note type="label">true subject</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Loyal adherent.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3423" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3424">
               <note type="label">I having … father</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard trumps the young king’s protest by relying on the trust Edward IV placed in him.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1163" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1164">
               <note type="label">as … good</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">To the extent I think appropriate.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1165" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1166">
               <note type="label">Ay me, … king</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">The young king refers to himself.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1167" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1168">
               <note type="label">warrant</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Guarantee (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>warrant</term>, v.3.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1169" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1170">
               <note type="label">answer … disgrace</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Grey is confident this injustice will be reversed, and Richard will be punished.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1173" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1174">
               <note type="label">untimely</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Premature, ill-timed (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>untimely</term>, adj.1.d</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1177" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1178">
               <note type="label">an’t</note> 
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">If it.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1179" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1180">
               <note type="label">by the way</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">On the journey.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1181" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1182">
               <note type="label">trusty</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Reliable, trustworthy (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>trusty</term>, adj.2.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1183" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1184">
               <note type="label">about you</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">To attend on you.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1185" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1186">
               <note type="label">parley</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Negotiation, conversation (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>parley</term>, n.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1187" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1188">
               <note type="label">Richard</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard’s final line co-opts Buckingham’s proclamation of Edward V to claim his own kingship. His aside connects with the audience and shares his satisfaction that all major obstacles have fallen away. Here Richard plays the righteous uncle in earshot of the other characters on stage, but gleefully shares his delight with the audience.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1195" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1196">
               <note type="label">May … grace</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">A deferential phrase spoken on seven occasions throughout this play, always in the tone of placation or inquisition. Of these seven, three instances occur in this scene, all spoken (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3801 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3802"/>) to the Mother Queen within 20 lines (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3803 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3804"/>), which indicates the Mother Queen’s agitation. Three of the other uses are spoken in fear to Richard.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1197" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1198">
               <note type="label">show to</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Share with.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3425" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3426">
               <note type="label">copartners</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Equals, sharers (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>copartner</term>, n.3</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1199" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1200">
               <note type="label">expect … dead</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Look forward, not backwards (proverbial, <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:TILL1">Tilley D126</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Elizabeth’s philosophy on grief has little effect on the Mother Queen but will be perceptive as they discover more family members murdered.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1203" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1204">
               <note type="label">estate</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>State or condition in general, whether physical, mental, moral</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>estate</term>, n.I.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1205" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1206">
               <note type="label">esteem and regard</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Love and care for.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3427" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3428">
               <note type="label">when I … dreadful</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The Mother Queen acknowledges she is beset by nightmares of a desolate future. Shakespeare uses dream imagery for Richard prior to battle (see <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:JOWE5"><title level="m">R3</title> 5.4.88.s.d.-5.4.156</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1209" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1210">
               <note type="label">league broken</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Compact or pledge disregarded.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1211" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1212">
               <note type="label">like importance</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Equal prominence.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1213" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1214">
               <note type="label">aged</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Elizabeth Woodville was 36 when Edward died, old for her era and especially in comparison to her children.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">While this seems unusually cruel and hyperbolic to see a woman of 36 call herself aged, in the early modern era, she would have been considered older than she would today. Very few women, except for the wealthy and pampered (such as Elizabeth I and Bess of Hardwick) lived beyond childbearing years into menopause or post-menopause.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1217" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1218">
               <note type="label">disgraced</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Shamed, eclipsed (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>disgrace</term>, v.2.a</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The Mother Queen puns on being called <quote>your grace</quote> to highlight her awareness that her authority as a royal mother has been destroyed.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3429" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3430">
               <note type="label">bishop’s palace</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The now-traditional seat of the archbishop of York, Fulham Castle, was not so designated until the eighteenth century. York’s seat at this time was Cawood Castle in West Yorkshire, which served as Thomas Rotherham’s home and is recorded to have hosted Richard of Gloucester, but this castle is nowhere near London. This palace is York Place, the archbishop’s London residence, which was acquired by Henry VIII in 1530 and incorporated into the palace at Whitehall.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1227" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1228">
               <note type="label">which … well</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Who clearly have his best interests at heart.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3431" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3432">
               <note type="label">archbishop</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">In Q speech headings, the archbishop of York is called <quote>Cardinal</quote>. While this is a valid title for some archbishops, it was not accurate for Thomas Rotherham, then archbishop of York. Greg persuasively suggests the archbishop has been mistaken for the archbishop of Canterbury, Cardinal Bourchier (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:GREG11">1929, xi</ref>); I have emended all SD references to the cardinal.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3433" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3434">
               <note type="label">heavy news</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Anticipated sorrow.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Having heard of Rivers and Grey, the Mother Queen’s next logical conclusion is that her son has been murdered.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3435" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3436">
               <note type="label">Draw home</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Draw back your bow to let your arrow fly.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The first of three archery references in quick succession (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3805 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3806"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1237" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1238">
               <note type="label">hit the mark</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Come to the point (archery).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3437" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3438">
               <note type="label">A happy … by</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The Mother Queen’s third archery reference: an opportune gust of wind to redirect the flight of an arrow is a stroke of good luck. Links to the mark, or target, which she assumes is the death of her son, but happy luck has spared him (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1237 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1238"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3439" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3440">
               <note type="label">one letter</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">This letter is not the same one the archbishop speaks of later (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3807 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3808"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1241" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1242">
               <note type="label">longs</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Desires, yearns, wishes (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <ref>long</ref>, v.II.6.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3441" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3442">
               <note type="label">Content … be so</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The archbishop’s tone turns from request to command at this point, which offers the actor choice about whether this task is difficult for the archbishop, or if he truly believes Richard’s intentions good.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3443" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3444">
               <note type="label">thee among … enterprise</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The Mother Queen’s shock over the archbishop’s inclusion in the plot shows her canniness, knowing her trust in his office normally would be convincing enough. The betrayal here is palpable.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1247" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1248">
               <note type="label">bedfellow</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Companion, friend (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:THOM6">Thomas, <term>Sŏcia</term></ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">At this time, bedsharing was common from poor to elite families, even for strangers in inns, because beds were in short supply, and in an age of uninsulated homes and scarcity of firewood, two or more to a bed was warmer. The idea of <soCalled>privacy</soCalled> was not yet fully developed.</note>
           </note>
       
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1249" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1250">
               <note type="label">miscarry</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Be lost, perish, die (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:THOM6">Thomas, <term>Pĕreo</term></ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1251" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1252">
               <note type="label">laid … charge</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Fall on my conscience.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1253" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1254">
               <note type="label">drifts</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Aims, intentions (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>drift</term>, v.5</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1255" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1256">
               <note type="label">pretend</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Offer, propose (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>pretend</term>, v.2.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1257" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1258">
               <note type="label">tomorrow</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">In this timeline, the young king’s coronation is the next day, and re-assures the Mother Queen that their absence will be short. Historically, after Edward V entered London on 4 May 1483 the coronation was postponed to 22 June. He was joined by the duke of York on 16 June; the boys were rarely heard from again after Richard was crowned on July 6. Italian Friar Dominic Mancini wrote in the summer of 1483 that the boys were held in <quote>inner apartments of the Tower</quote> that summer, and <quote>day by day began to be seen more rarely behind the bars and windows</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:MANC1">113</ref>). Edward V was regularly attended by a doctor who ministered to him as one who expected death. By the end of that summer, the boys vanished from sight, assumed murdered.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1261" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1262">
               <note type="label">Upon my honor</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Spoken to the Mother Queen to demonstrate his helplessness in this matter; the archbishop’s message is no request but a command.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1263" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1265">
               <note type="label">ambushed nobles</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Concealed, waiting (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>ambushed</term>, adj.2</ref>) group of men.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">McMillin and MacLean note the silently amassed ambushing nobles, wherein <quote><supplied>no</supplied> stage direction reveals this silent ambush, but it is clearly in place and visible by the time the Archbishop changes his tone</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:MCMI1">131</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1266" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1267">
               <note type="label">by fair means</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">With free will, without complaint.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1268" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3933">
               <note type="label">Enter Catesby … armed</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The entry of these threatening men justifies the Mother Queen’s expression of fright for herself and her children. She is probably hiding her children behind her at this point.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1270" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1271">
               <note type="label">break sanctuary</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Granted sanctuary at Westminster Abbey, the Mother Queen is right to be shocked that Richard disregards the law which allowed her up to 40 unmolested days (or even potentially an indefinite period) under sanctuary clauses set out in English common law. Richard’s use of the archbishop to invite the Duke of York from sanctuary demonstrates his awareness of the optics of violating this trust.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1272" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1273">
               <note type="label">rebels</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Those unwilling to pay homage to the rightful king (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>rebel</term>, adj.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1274" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1275">
               <note type="label">you shall rather</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">You are going to have to.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1276" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1277">
               <note type="label">Why, madam, … sanctuary?</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">An insulting question from an archbishop, who is supposed to be the one to offer sanctuary without question. His hypocrisy, invisible to young York, is obvious to the Mother Queen and probably to Elizabeth as well.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1278" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1279">
               <note type="label">high time</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Not a moment too soon (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>high</term>, adj.III.16.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1280" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1281">
               <note type="label">trow</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Believe, trust (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>trow</term>, v.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1282" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1283">
               <note type="label">heavy case</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Sad state of affairs.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3445" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3446">
               <note type="label">where cutthroats, … be</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Sanctuary was often used (and abused) by common criminals, who claimed sanctuary but continued committing crimes under its protection. The Mother Queen’s claim against persecution is the reason sanctuary existed at the time. The provision was gradually eroded in scope until it was abolished entirely in 1624 by King James I.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1284" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1285">
               <note type="label">bankrupts</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Persons unable to pay their debts (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>bankrupt</term>, n.I.1.b</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1286" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1287">
               <note type="label">If … persuade you</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The archbishop tries once more to convince the Mother Queen to let the boy go freely, because he sees the potential damage Richard may do.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3447" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3448">
               <note type="label">Hold, take … come</note>
               <note type="textual" resp="pers:MALO2">These lines are rendered as prose in Q even though they can be read as a rhyming couplet as the archbishop leaves. Given that the archbishop and duke of York speak in a brief couplet above, the verse reading here is an appropriate exit line at a moment of heightened emotion (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3227 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3442"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1292" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1293">
               <note type="label">have done</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Come to an agreement, made an end, concluded (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>do</term>, v.I.10.b</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1296" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1297">
               <note type="label">Catesby</note>
               <note type="textual" resp="pers:MALO2">It might appear unusual for Catesby to serve the archbishop, but he likely appears as insurance to make certain that the task is completed. Greg suggests that Messenger and Catesby were doubled (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:GREG11">1929, xii</ref>), and McMillin and MacLean propose that it was not necessarily Catesby that appears here, but a nameless Messenger character played by the same actor: 
                  <cit><quote>a scribe listening to dictation would have had to think for himself which of an actor’s several roles was not being spoken, and it seems virtually certain that he would sometimes get things wrong: Catesby one minute, a Messenger the next.</quote> 
                     <bibl>(<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:MCMI1">117</ref>)</bibl>
                  </cit> Regardless, Catesby’s presence here is logical enough to retain.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3449" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3450">
               <note type="label">come … company</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Here to accompany you to your brother.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3451" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3452">
               <note type="label">Exeunt omnes</note>
               <note type="performance" resp="pers:MALO2">As the group exits the stage, the armed guard accompanies the young Duke of York, along with the messenger, and archbishop.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3453" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3454">
               <note type="label">four watchmen</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">These men are introduced but stage directions are not given to provide them any explicit direction. McMillin and MacLean argue the watchmen carry out the actions as the Page describes them: 
                  <cit><quote>his narration is co-ordinated with a mime of the ruffians gathering on-stage, hearing their signal <supplied reason="editorial">see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3809 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3810"/></supplied> and breaking into the Court <supplied reason="editorial">see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3811 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3812"/></supplied> (off-stage) and then re-entering (as <q>other officers</q> <supplied reason="editorial">see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_s10_sd7"/></supplied>) with Hastings in their grasp. The staging suggests the slickness of Richard’s machinery. Committing the act is no more difficult than the Page’s naming of it, and there is no delay. The well-oiled machine works quietly, and there is no place it cannot reach.</quote> 
                  <bibl>(<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:MCMI1">132</ref>)</bibl></cit></note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3455" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3456">
               <note type="label">Why, … lord</note>
               <note type="performance" resp="pers:MALO2">The Page, here a traditional chorus figure, confides in the audience and offers insight into off-stage activities.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">References to Dr. Shaw and the public display at Baynard’s Castle places <quote>emphasis on how <supplied>Richard</supplied> achieves power through his manipulation of language and spectacle</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:WALS2">Walsh 85</ref>) as he invites the audience to see through the façade. The historical detail that the Page recounts is often out of order, much of which occurred after Hastings’ death, not before it.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1302" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1303">
               <note type="label">keeping company</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Spending time with such people.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3457" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3458">
               <note type="label">am I … company</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">A return to the Page’s doubtful speech, with fear his association with morally corrupt figures will lead to his downfall (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3815 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3816"/>). Given the opportunity to please Richard, however, the Page’s doubts seem to recede (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3817 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3818"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1304" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1305">
               <note type="label">by that means</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">By the same devious methods.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3459" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3460">
               <note type="label">instead … head</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Another reversal: the Page wishes the guilt for those executed (<term>headless</term>, beheaded) to settle (<term>light</term>) on Gloucester. Tasked with the play’s dirty work, the Page is openly concerned about his responsibility for any damage done.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3461" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3462">
               <note type="label">made … match</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Challenged a superior opponent; bitten off more than he can chew.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1308" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1309">
               <note type="label">blood … threatener</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Based on proverbial <soCalled>blood will have blood</soCalled> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:TILL1">Tilley B458</ref>); killing menaces the killer with retribution.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1310" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1311">
               <note type="label">makes havoc</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Brings devastation, destruction (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>havoc</term>, n.2</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1312" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1313">
               <note type="label">secretly … death</note> 
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Rivers and Grey were executed on 25 June 1483, days after the princes were secured, and two weeks prior to Richard’s coronation (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:HICK3">Hicks</ref>). That they died at Pontefract rather than formally charged and beheaded at the Tower denotes Richard’s priority for expedience.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1314" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1315">
               <note type="label">but mistrusteth</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Even slightly doubts to be loyal.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1316" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1317">
               <note type="label">hinderer</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Obstructer, impeder (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>hinderer</term>, n.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1318" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1319">
               <note type="label">proceedings</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Course of action (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>proceeding</term>, n.2.b</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1320" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1322">
               <note type="label">clapped up</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Locked up, held.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Q gives <quote>chopt up</quote>, a vivid image to imply mutilation of traitors’ bodies in prison, as Rivers and Grey have suffered. While this <soCalled>chopped</soCalled> image may imply gross brutality and slaughter of dissenters, this meaning is patently ahistorical. Some of Richard’s enemies were executed, but to intimate mass slaughter is another thing. <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:FIEL2">Field’s</ref> conjecture is far more palatable and implies the detention of opponents rather than their wholesale deaths. This reading depends on an implied compositor’s error, mistaking a <mentioned>la</mentioned> for a <mentioned>ho</mentioned>, an understandable error when reading secretary hand. The sense of the line is far clearer with Field’s reading.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1323" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1324">
               <note type="label">being but mistrusted</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Having done no more than seem untrustworthy.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Oxford joined with Clarence as traitors against Edward IV, so his arrest was prudent, and particularly justified in Oxford’s later escape and defection to Richmond.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1325" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1326">
               <note type="label">Hammes Castle</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">A now-demolished English fortress that lay to the south of Calais.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Historically, Oxford was a prisoner of Edward IV in Hammes Castle from 1475; he attempted escape at least once. Fearing his influence, Richard III ordered his return to the Tower in October 1483, but with his gaoler, Sir James Blount, he escaped to Richmond.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1327" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1328">
               <note type="label">Doctor Shaw</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Brother to Lord Mayor Edmund Shaw (Shaa), this refers to Doctor of Theology, Ralph Shaw, who preached a poorly-received sermon espousing Richard’s claim to the throne (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:TUCK3">Tucker</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1329" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1330">
               <note type="label">Paul’s Cross</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">An open-air pulpit near old St. Paul’s Cathedral.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Preachers delivered sermons at St. Paul’s Cross, and public officials (such as bailiffs) conducted public shaming (including that of Shore’s wife). The original St. Paul’s Cross was destroyed in 1643 during the English Civil War and was replaced with a Baroque sculpture of St. Paul in the early 20th Century.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1331" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1332">
               <note type="label">lord … aldermen</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">More recounts: 
                  <cit><quote>Then on the morrow after, the mayor with all the aldermen and chief commoners of the city, in their best manner appareled, assembling themself together, resorted unto Baynard’s Castle where the protector lay. To which place repaired also, according to their appointment, the duke of Buckingham with divers noble men with him, besides many knights and other gentlemen. And thereupon, the duke sent word unto the lord protector of the being there of a great and honorable company to move a great matter unto his grace.</quote> 
                  <bibl>(see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_More#emdTTR3_More_anc_341">Sir Thomas More, Undersheriff of London</ref>)</bibl></cit></note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1333" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1334">
               <note type="label">Baynard’s Castle</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard staged his wooing at Baynard’s Castle purposefully. His brother, Edward IV was crowned there, and being only a short distance from St. Paul’s, it was near to where his pro-Richard sermons were preached. The castle was destroyed in the Great Fire of London.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Shakespeare also makes note of Baynard’s Castle as the setting for Richard’s wooing, as a landmark familiar to London audiences and important for its strategic location.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1335" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1336">
               <note type="label">whole … upon him</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Entire kingdom under his influence.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1337" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1338">
               <note type="label">he refused</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard’s repeated refusal is dramatized in Shakespeare (see <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:JOWE5"><title level="m">R3</title> 3.7.95–244</ref>) and discussed in More: 
                  <cit><quote>When the protector had heard the proposition, he looked very strangely thereat and answered that all were it that he partly knew the things by them alleged to be true, yet such entire love he bear unto king Edward and his children, that so much more regarded his honor in other realms about than the crown of any one, of which he was never desirous, that he could not find in his heart in this point to incline to their desire.</quote> 
                  <bibl>(see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_More#emdTTR3_More_anc_343">Sir Thomas More, Undersheriff of London</ref>)</bibl></cit></note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1339" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1340">
               <note type="label">faintly</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Feignedly, deceitfully (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>faintly</term>, adv.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1341" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1342">
               <note type="label">gone about it</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Taken up the cause; ready to argue the merits of the case.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1343" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1344">
               <note type="label">Guildhall</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Equivalent to city hall; the hall of the Corporation of the City of London, used for municipal meetings, state banquets, etc. (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>guild-hall</term>, n.1</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Buckingham approached council at Guildhall with a retinue of knights and supporters to build Richard’s support. More records Buckingham’s speech, which was received stonily and prompted Buckingham to comment on <quote>marvelous obstinate silence</quote> (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_More#emdTTR3_More_anc_345">Sir Thomas More, Undersheriff of London</ref>). Consensus was reached only after several attempts. The timeline of Baynard’s Castle and Guildhall are here reversed.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1345" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1346">
               <note type="label">content thee</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Do not worry.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1347" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1348">
               <note type="label">warned</note> 
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Summoned, commanded (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>warn</term>, v.II.7.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1349" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1350">
               <note type="label">suffer</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Tolerate.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1351" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1352">
               <note type="label">partaker</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Sharer, participant (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>partaker</term>, n.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1353" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1354">
               <note type="label">mislike</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Dissension (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>mislike</term>, n.4</ref>), disagreement, perhaps violent.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1355" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1356">
               <note type="label">cast away</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Overthrown, ruined (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>cast</term>, v.III.18.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1357" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1358">
               <note type="label">my friend’s</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Catesby had a long association with Hastings, from his time as a young lawyer in the Inner Temple. Their professional and personal friendship was primary in the decision to send Catesby to sound Hastings out (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:HORR3">Horrox</ref>). Catesby discards his old friendship for Richard’s.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1359" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1360">
               <note type="label">a long sleeper</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">One who sleeps too much, now considered a symptom of depression; metaphorically. Richard describes himself as having a dull eye or ignoring certain signs of political unrest.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">It is in Richard’s best tactical interests that his enemies believe him to be moving slowly or unwarily, but it is highly unlikely that on such an important day that he overslept. This questionable detail about Richard’s sleep is repeated in More: 
                  <cit><quote>These lords so sitting together commoning of this matter, the protector came in among them, first about <supplied>nine</supplied> of the clock, saluting them courteously, and excusing himself that he had been from them so long, saying merrily that he had been asleep that day.</quote> 
                  <bibl>(<ref target="doc:emdTTR3_More#emdTTR3_More_anc_347">Sir Thomas More, Undersheriff of London</ref>)</bibl></cit>
                   Shakespeare uses the phrase <quote>a long sleeper</quote>: <quote>My noble lords and cousins all, good morrow, / I have been long a sleeper</quote> (see <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:JOWE5"><title level="m">R3</title> 2.4.23</ref>). Later, however, the Page notes that some believe Richard <quote>lieth never long enough abed</quote>, so it is made clear that this is a brazen ruse (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3819 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3464"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1363" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1364">
               <note type="label">appointed</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Authorized, charged (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>appointed</term>, adj.2</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1365" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1366">
               <note type="label">give diligent … upon</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Are awaiting his pleasure to see them.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1367" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1368">
               <note type="label">thy weapons</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">To call his allies to arms shows Richard expects a fight. We can assume the call to weapons includes the Page’s watchmen.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3463" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3464">
               <note type="label">his grace … abed</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The Page questions Richard’s claim for oversleeping, as a man too cunning to be so careless, to highlight the fact that Richard manipulates council (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3820 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3821"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1371" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1372">
               <note type="label">diverse of</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Different opinions expressed by (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>diverse</term>, adj.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1375" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1376">
               <note type="label">their best caps</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Their heads.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Here, Lord Stanley is one of Richard’s likely future victims; Richard later uses him as a useful pawn over Stanley’s step-son, Richmond.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1377" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1378">
               <note type="label">ruffians</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Villains, criminals, thugs (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>ruffian</term>, n.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3465" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3466">
               <note type="label">board</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Table.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1379" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1380">
               <note type="label">let slip</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Give a hint about what is about to happen.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3467" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3468">
               <note type="label">Let this suffice</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">He has been beaten enough.</note>
                  <note type="commentary">Richard’s need to call off the men who are violently pulling Hastings into the room suggests a striking, violent stage picture, where Hastings has chosen to fight his arrest.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3469" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3470">
               <note type="label">sorceress, … Wife</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard’s accusation was audacious, but none questioned him, as More notes: 
                  <cit><quote>Then said the protector: <q>Ye shall all see in what wise that sorceress and that other witch of her counsel, Shore’s wife, with their affinity, have by their sorcery and witchcraft wasted my body</q>. And therewith, he plucked up his doublet sleeve to his elbow upon his left arm, where he showed a wearish, withered arm and small, as if it was never other. And thereupon every man’s mind sore misgave them, well perceiving that this matter was but a quarrel, for well they wist that the queen was too wise to go about any such folly. And also if she would, yet would she of all folk least make Shore’s wife of council, whom of all women she most hated, as that concubine whom the king her husband had most loved. And also no man was there present but well knew that the his arm was ever such since his birth.</quote> 
                     <bibl>(see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_More#emdTTR3_More_anc_349">Sir Thomas More, Undersheriff of London</ref>)</bibl></cit></note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1383" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1384">
               <note type="label">famous strumpet</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Notorious whore.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1385" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1386">
               <note type="label">testimony</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Evidence (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>testimony</term>, n.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1387" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1388">
               <note type="label">If? Villain, … ands?</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">More reports this inciting incident:
                  <cit><quote><q>What?!</q> quod the protector. <q>Thou servest me, I ween, with <q>ifs</q> and with <q>ands</q>. I tell thee they have so done, and that I will make good on thy body, traitor</q>. And therewith as in a great anger, he clapped his fist upon the board a great rap. At which token given, one cried treason without the chamber. Therewith a door clapped, and in come there rushing men in harness, as many as the chamber might hold.</quote> 
                  <bibl>(see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_More#emdTTR3_More_anc_351">Sir Thomas More, Undersheriff of London</ref>)</bibl></cit> Shakespeare similarly uses <quote>if</quote> as a turning point (see <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:JOWE5"><title level="m">R3</title> 3.4.3-4</ref>), as does Dolman in <title level="m">The Mirror for Magistrates</title> (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Hast#emdTTR3_Hast_anc_31">How the Lord Hastings was Betrayed</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1391" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1392">
               <note type="label">short shrift</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Expedient confession of sins, last rites (before death).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3471" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3472">
               <note type="label">by the … Paul</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard’s evocation is reported in More (<quote><q>for by Saint Paul</q>, quod he, <q>I will not to dinner till I see thy head off</q></quote>, see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_More#emdTTR3_More_anc_353">Sir Thomas More, Undersheriff of London</ref>) and repeated in Shakespeare (<quote>Off with his head! Now by Saint Paul I swear, / I will not dine until I see the same</quote>, see <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:JOWE5"><title level="m">R3</title> 3.4.75–76</ref>). Such pious phrasing highlights his audacity.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1393" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1394">
               <note type="label">Sir Thomas</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Sir Thomas Brakenbury, lieutenant of the Tower. Sir Thomas is an ally to Richard who appears later, but is first used here as an arresting officer in addition to the four watchmen (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3822 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3823"/>). There is argument to be made that Richard refers to Sir Thomas Stanley, as he evokes his name in the following line, but if this were the case, it would be the only point where Stanley is so mentioned (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3824 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3825"/>). Logically, Brakenbury is the likely commander.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1395" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1396">
               <note type="label">suffer … speak</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Don’t let him utter a word.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1397" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1398">
               <note type="label">his broke head</note> 
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">A bloodied scalp, or face, or a bruise from a blow. There has been a struggle off-stage, and Hastings is brought in with an injury that Richard claims responsibility for.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">While Richard claims responsibility for Hastings’ injury, More records another option: <cit><quote>And another let fly at the lord Stanley, which shrunk at the stroke and fell under the table, or else his head had been cleft to the teeth; for as shortly as he shrank, yet ran the blood about his ears.</quote> 
                     <bibl>(see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_More#emdTTR3_More_anc_355">Sir Thomas More, Undersheriff of London</ref>)</bibl>
               </cit> More is the first to note Stanley’s injury at the council, a likely embellishment for the benefit of his descendant Lord Strange, Ferdinando Stanley (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:MANL1">Manley and MacLean 26</ref>). Stanley was not noted at the council prior to More and Vergil (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:VERG2">Vergil 182</ref>), but does feature in Dolman’s poem in The Mirror for Magistrates, where his injury is also noted: <quote>Laying at lord Stanley, whose brain he had surely cleft, / Had he not down beneath the table crept</quote> (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Hast#emdTTR3_Hast_anc_33">How the Lord Hastings was Betrayed</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1399" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1400">
               <note type="label">excuse</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Prevent his arrest.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1401" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1402">
               <note type="label">presently</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Immediately, instantly (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>presently</term>, adv.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1403" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1404">
               <note type="label">herald of arms</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Officer with the duty of royal proclamations (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>herald</term>, n.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1405" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1406">
               <note type="label">conspiring by witchcraft</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">The chief recorded charge against Hastings.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The proclamation following Hastings’s death was so detailed it aroused suspicion, as More notes: 
                  <cit><quote>Now was this proclamation made within <supplied>two</supplied> hours after that he was beheaded, and it was so curiously indited and so fair written in parchment in so well a set hand, and therewith of itself so long a process, that every child might well perceive that it was prepared before.</quote> 
                  <bibl>(see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_More#emdTTR3_More_anc_357">Sir Thomas More, Undersheriff of London</ref>)</bibl></cit></note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1407" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1408">
               <note type="label">listen after</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Look to hear about.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1409" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1410">
               <note type="label">success … duke</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Buckingham’s attempts to persuade the mayor and other councilors were poorly received, but necessary to endorse Richard as a preferable king.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1411" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1412">
               <note type="label">nearer the mark</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Closer to our goal.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Another repeated archery reference (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3826 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3827"/>; <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3828 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3829"/>): Richard notes they inch closer to their goal against fewer competitors.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1413" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1414">
               <note type="label">look … friend</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">After Hastings’s execution, Catesby was elevated to chancellor of the exchequer and the speaker of the house of commons (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:HORR3">Horrox</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1415" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1416">
               <note type="label">thy business</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">The task I have set for you.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1419" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1420">
               <note type="label">undone</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Destroyed, ruined (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>undone</term>, adj.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1421" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1422">
               <note type="label">grieves … rest</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard’s grief over his nephews appears feigned as he feels out the Page. Once disinherited, the princes in the Tower posed little threat beyond figurehead status for future rebels. Richard’s decision to kill them is here positioned as a heartbreaking dilemma and offers an actor’s choice if whether the grief played as sincere or not.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1423" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1424">
               <note type="label">of more … rest</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">The fate of the young princes in the Tower.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Shakespeare similarly dramatizes this dilemma: <quote>Ha! Am I king? Tis so, but Edward lives</quote> (see <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:JOWE5"><title level="m">R3</title> 4.2.14</ref>). Without this, his other crimes are for nothing.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1425" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1426">
               <note type="label">man</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">While the role of a page may appear to be a boy’s job, it was a kind of apprenticeship that could be held by a <soCalled>youth</soCalled> roughly between the ages of 12 and 22. The Page’s self-reference suggests he is old enough to consider himself a man and wishes for Richard to see him as one. The Page’s age in turn impacts the dynamic between the two, and his ongoing political savviness indicates that he is likely in the later years of his apprenticeship, engendering Richard’s reliance on his presence.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1427" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1428">
               <note type="label">willingness</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Positive disposition to serve (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>willingness</term>, n.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1429" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1430">
               <note type="label">reacheth the stars</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Is far beyond your ability.</note>
               <note type="commentary">Richard doubts the Page able to commit such a crime.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1431" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1432">
               <note type="label">good liking</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Esteem, trust.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1433" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1434">
               <note type="label">the state</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">The court, the kingdom (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>state</term>, n.II.ii.22.b</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richmond uses this term twice to describe his conquest (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3830 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3831"/>), including his final line (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3832 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3833"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1435" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1436">
               <note type="label">choke … gifts</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Overwhelm murderers with rewards.</note>
                  <note type="commentary">He demonstrates eagerness to be held in high esteem but with distance to protect himself.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3473" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3474">
               <note type="label">man</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard picks up on the Page’s desire to be seen as a man beyond his duties. Richard takes the word <mentioned>man</mentioned> to mean <soCalled>servant</soCalled> while the Page identifies it as a sign of maturity having reached an age of responsibility. A youth cannot be held responsible in the same way as an adult.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3475" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3476">
               <note type="label">I care … thee</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard’s reluctance to say the words even to his page betrays the magnitude of his decision, but also speaks to his mistrust of all, inciting open treason and promoting regicide.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1437" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1438">
               <note type="label">mean a man</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Low-born (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>mean</term>, adj.II.2.a</ref>) a servant.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1439" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1440">
               <note type="label">Zounds</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">By God’s wounds (mild profanity).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard’s immediate reaction is potentially in response to the Page’s betrayal of shock or surprise. Richard is aware that such an utterance is sufficient to seal his own death for treason, so clearly the Page has reacted in such a way that he does not feel confident in his admission.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1441" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1442">
               <note type="label">’tis out</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">I have spoken my secret.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1445" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1447">
               <note type="label">James Tyrrell</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Sir James Tyrrell, son of one of the conspirators beheaded for attempting to murder Edward IV, switched to the Yorkist side and later confessed to the murders of the princes in the Tower.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The Page’s recommendation of Tyrrell offers connection between this play and Shakespeare. While the Page does not appear in Shakespeare, a boy or page recommends Tyrrell (see <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:JOWE5"><title level="m">R3</title> 4.2.34–42</ref>). More reports Tyrrell’s confession and implication of one other murderer: <quote>both <supplied>Denton</supplied> and he were examined and confessed the murder in manner above written, but whither the bodies were removed, they could nothing tell</quote> (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_More#emdTTR3_More_anc_359">Sir Thomas More, Undersheriff of London</ref>). Vergil does not implicate a co-conspirator but adds some conscience and compulsion for the killer: <quote>James Tyrrell, who, being forced to do the king’s commandment, rode sorrowfully to London, and, to the worst example that hath been almost ever heard of, murdered those babes of the issue royal</quote> (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Vergil#emdTTR3_Vergil_anc_108">Anglia Historia</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1443" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1444">
               <note type="label">forwardness</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Readiness, eagerness, zeal (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>forwardness</term>, n.3</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1448" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1449">
               <note type="label">work</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Persuade.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1450" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1451">
               <note type="label">soon at night</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">This evening.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1452" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1453">
               <note type="label">reputation or calling</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Rank, station, occupation.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1454" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1455">
               <note type="label">I dare … bound</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">I stake my reputation.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1456" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1457">
               <note type="label">upon my credit</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">On my honor.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1458" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1459">
               <note type="label">circumspect</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Cautious, careful (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>circumspect</term>, adj.2.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1460" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1461">
               <note type="label">diligence</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Officiousness, willingness to please (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>diligence</term>, n.1.b</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1462" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1463">
               <note type="label">liberal</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Generous, freely giving (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>liberal</term>, adj.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1464" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1465">
               <note type="label">so good … lord</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard promises generosity: an ironic claim (as he hires a man to murder children) plain to the audience and the canny Page.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1466" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1467">
               <note type="label">goods be confiscate</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">More records: 
                  <cit><quote>Now then, by and by, as if it were for anger and not for covetise, the protector sent into the house of Shore’s wife (for her husband dwelled not with her) and spoiled her of all that ever she had, above the value of <supplied>two</supplied> or <supplied>three thousand</supplied> marks, and sent her body to prison</quote> 
                  <bibl>(see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_More#emdTTR3_More_anc_361">Sir Thomas More, Undersheriff of London</ref>)</bibl></cit></note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3477" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3478">
               <note type="label">bishop … penance</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The long-standing bishop of London, Thomas Kempe, was charged by Richard to apply this sentence, as More reports: 
                  <cit><quote>And for this cause (as a goodly continent prince, clean and faultless of himself, sent out of heaven into this vicious world for the amendment of men’s manners), <supplied>Richard</supplied> caused the bishop of London to put her to open penance, going before the cross in procession upon a Sunday with a taper in her hand.</quote> 
                     <bibl>(see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_More#emdTTR3_More_anc_363">Sir Thomas More, Undersheriff of London</ref>)</bibl></cit></note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1468" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1469">
               <note type="label">open penance</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Public shaming as expiation. This is dramatized later (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3834 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3835"/>), and would include <quote>going before the cross in procession upon a Sunday with a taper in her hand</quote> (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_More#emdTTR3_More_anc_365">Sir Thomas More, Undersheriff of London</ref>). See notes below (<ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1704 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1705"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3479" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3480">
               <note type="label">so bare … plague</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Leave her with nothing for that is what she has earned.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1470" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1471">
               <note type="label">straight proclamation</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Immediate announcement.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1472" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1473">
               <note type="label">none … relieve her</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">No one may help Shore’s wife.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1474" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1475">
               <note type="label">privy spies</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Secret watchers.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1476" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1477">
               <note type="label">beginning … famous</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Rise to prominence was so much talked about.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">See links to Shore’s wife’s talk of fame (<ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3836 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_297"/>) and Richard’s dismissal as a <quote>famous strumpet</quote> (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1383 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1384"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1478" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1479">
               <note type="label">infamous above all</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Notoriously shameful beyond any other. His word choice famous/infamous emphasizes the depth of her fall.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1480" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1481">
               <note type="label">win … forever</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">If the Page can successfully find a murderer, he will win Richard’s ongoing esteem, which is what the Page desires most at this point.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1486" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1487">
               <note type="label">Enter Shore’s Wife</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">It is significant that when Shore’s wife meets three men who appear in her first scene in the play none recognize her (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3837 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3838"/>). Her physical appearance has changed dramatically from her first scene, when she was comfortably maintained by Edward IV. She has completed open penance, is dirty, cast out in her shift, potentially disfigured, and so is almost unrecognizable (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3839 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3840"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1488" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1489">
               <note type="label">to the king</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">to Edward IV.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Shore’s wife is concerned about how slanders against her might affect her royal lover’s legacy.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1490" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1491">
               <note type="label">only … defame</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Sole stain of dishonor (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>defame</term>, n.1</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Shore’s wife claims that her family honor, heretofore spotless, but now rendered void, exhibits her as a shame to the nation.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1492" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1493">
               <note type="label">Aie</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">A wailing exclamation of resignation, surprise, regret, alarm	(<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>aie</term>, int.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1494" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1495">
               <note type="label">fair</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Beautiful, attractive.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1496" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1497">
               <note type="label">discipline before affection</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Self-control to be more valuable than lust.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1498" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1499">
               <note type="label">folly</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Foolishness (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>folly</term>, n.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3481" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3482">
               <note type="label">breach … suffered me</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">William Shore appears to have been a willing cuckold, likely due for the financial preferment his wife’s associations brought. More notes William Shore was <quote>an honest citizen, young and goodly and of good substance. But forasmuch as they were coupled ere she were well ripe, she not very fervently loved for whom she never longed</quote> (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_More#emdTTR3_More_anc_366">Sir Thomas More, Undersheriff of London</ref>). Shore’s impotence led to annulment in 1476, and her affairs with Edward IV and Hastings carried on through Shore’s lifetime. She sees now that everyone knew she was entrapped, including her husband, because neither of them could protest against the king alone. Heywood offers a sympathetic view of the Shores in <title level="m">Edward IV</title> where the play makes clear that both husband and wife are victims.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1500" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1501">
               <note type="label">it bootless … prick</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Senseless to fight against overwhelming power, whether in nature or in the social or political hierarchy (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:TILL1">Tilley F433</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Quoting scripture: <quote>And he said, Who art thou, Lord? And the Lord said, I am Jesus whom thou persecutest: it is hard for thee to kick against pricks</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:THEB6">GNV, Acts 9.5</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1504" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1505">
               <note type="label">hardly used</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Badly mistreated.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1508" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1509">
               <note type="label">which are … custody</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard has followed through with his promise to strip her of her belongings (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3841 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3842"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1510" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1511">
               <note type="label">succor</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Help, assist (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>succor</term>, v.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1512" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1513">
               <note type="label">comfortless</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Destitute, helpless, having nothing (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>comfortless</term>, adj.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1514" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1515">
               <note type="label">constrained</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Forced, compelled (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>constrained</term>, adj.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1516" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1517">
               <note type="label">restoring … lost</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The first of three references to Shore’s wife’s kindnesses: Lodowick’s lands are fictional, but the focus is the inability for any of her beneficiaries to return her favor (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3289 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3290"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1518" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1519">
               <note type="label">try him … anything</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Shore’s wife uses this exact phrase on each approach to her former friends, which establishes a cadence for her piteous appeals (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3843 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3844"/>; <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3845 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3846"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1522" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1523">
               <note type="label">estates</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Statuses, positions (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>estate</term>, n.II.3.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1524" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1525">
               <note type="label">changest … worst</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">As one previously attached to Hastings, Lodowick must feel exposed, but still has room to state his disbelief that good people around him seem to accept and embrace Richard despite his flaws.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1526" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1527">
               <note type="label">headless peers</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Executed nobles.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1528" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1529">
               <note type="label">furnish with</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Occupied by (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>furnish</term>, v.2.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1530" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1531">
               <note type="label">neither … minded</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Similar to complaints against the Woodvilles, this trade in half-truths against the followers of Richard slanders those in privileged positions, including Catesby, Brakenbury, and Lovell.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1532" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1533">
               <note type="label">hardly bewails</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Has barely had time to grieve.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1534" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1535">
               <note type="label">commons</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Common people, community (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>commons</term>, n.I.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1536" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1537">
               <note type="label">should be</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Have been. This also suggests the sense that they <soCalled>ought to be</soCalled> imprisoned, either for their safety or to prevent rebellion.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3483" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3484">
               <note type="label">imprisoned … forth again</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The princes’ transition from royal guests to prisoners was seamless because of the Tower’s multipurpose function. To stay in the Tower prior to happy events of state (such as a coronation or wedding) was common, and so it was simple to explain their presence. As a fortress, the Tower was essentially impossible for a prisoner to leave.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3485" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3486">
               <note type="label">But God … overthrown</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">May God protect those on the side of right, and may the rightful heirs not be entirely wiped out.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3487" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3486">
               <note type="label">right … overthrown</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Those who have the true right to the crown (i.e., Richmond) may not fail.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Lodowick’s editorializing on Richard’s actions is open treason, but he appears secure in solitude. Bezio notes this line as evidence that <title level="m">The True Tragedy</title> suggests the wars of the roses were a divine cleansing to pave the way for the accession of Henry VII (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:BEZI1">71</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1540" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1541">
               <note type="label">where … given</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Someone whom I have benefited.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3488" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3489">
               <note type="label">how innocently … witness</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">The speed of Hastings’ execution has shocked everyone, including the heavens.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Lodowick emphasizes Hastings’s goodness.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1544" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1545">
               <note type="label">relieve</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Help, assist.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1546" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1547">
               <note type="label">alms</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Charity, as food or money (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>alms</term>, n.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1548" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1549">
               <note type="label">chiefest … all</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">King Edward IV.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1550" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1551">
               <note type="label">forsook</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Denied all knowledge of (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>forsake</term>, v.1.b</ref>), abandoned.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1552" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1553">
               <note type="label">fact</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Crime.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3490" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3491">
               <note type="label">spoil for villains</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Prey for criminals.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1554" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1555">
               <note type="label">pity thee</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Condescend to help you.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1556" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1557">
               <note type="label">lands … gone</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The shuffling of land ownership between regimes meant, were it not for Shore’s wife, Lodowick would almost certainly have lost his land.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1558" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1559">
               <note type="label">so long … little</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Work so hard to ask for a small amount of help.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1560" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1561">
               <note type="label">but may … she</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">So far Lodowick has not recognized Shore’s wife. This lack of recognition, and his eventual realization, is the key theatrical moment here. Given the ragged state of Shore’s wife at this point, Lodowick may have avoided eye contact or physical interaction. The moment of recognition would be a striking shift from Shore’s wife’s first appearance, made vivid by Lodowick’s rejection and exit.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1562" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1563">
               <note type="label">Aside</note>
               <note type="performance" resp="pers:MALO2">Lodowick discusses Shore’s wife with the audience as a cautionary tale but does not speak to her again. The proclamation means Lodowick offers not a single word after discovering her identity, despite their past. Lodowick knows the personal risk he would assume if he spoke to her and clearly protects himself.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1564" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1565">
               <note type="label">in such credit</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Such a favorite of.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1566" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1567">
               <note type="label">but</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">That.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1568" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1569">
               <note type="label">there set … verse</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Lodowick resolves to use this matter as fodder for an epic or historical drama and demonstrates his opportunistic nature and his awareness of the tragedy he’s witnessed. It is metatheatrical and ultimately prophetic, given Shore’s wife’s appearance in this play as well as in works by Chute (1593), Drayton (1597), Heywood (1599), and Rowe (1714). Walsh suggests Lodowick’s plan reflects the content of Churchyard’s poem on Shore’s wife in The Mirror for Magistrates (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:WALS2">87</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1570" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1571">
               <note type="label">wonderful</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Awe-inspiring, incredible.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1572" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1573">
               <note type="label">yet stay</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Not only does Lodowick give no answer, but leaves abruptly, unwilling to be seen with her.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3492" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3493">
               <note type="label">Exit Lodowick</note>
               <note type="performance" resp="pers:MALO2">Lodowick’s exit is shifted from its Q position to here, to heighten his rejection. Shore’s wife appeals to him directly and still he chooses to shun her and gives the actor the opportunity to pause and make the decision to leave before he hurries out.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1576" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1577">
               <note type="label">adversity</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Misfortune (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:HOLL1">Hollyband, <term>Adversité</term></ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1578" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1579">
               <note type="label">have … done</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Is this my reward for the help I’ve given?</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1580" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1581">
               <note type="label">chiefest pomp</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Greatest glory.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1582" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1583">
               <note type="label">pleasure … suits</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Do good by my friends by presenting requests.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1584" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1585">
               <note type="label">swayed the sword</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Shore’s wife claims great influence in her ability to make policy and convince the king to decide in her favor.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1586" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1587">
               <note type="label">bountiful</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Generous (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>bountiful</term>, adj.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1588" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1589">
               <note type="label">mindful … poor</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">I still took time to remember the poor people.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1590" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1591">
               <note type="label">know … succor me</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Acknowledge our past relationship or help me.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1592" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1593">
               <note type="label">another</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">A mute citizen. The Citizen’s companion is a prop for the Citizen to speak to in indignation against Shore’s wife.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1594" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1595">
               <note type="label">No men, … orders</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The Citizen gives insight into the chaos created by the death of Edward IV, and the struggle between the lord protector and the Woodville kindred. He contrasts the fear in London prior to Richard’s proclamation, a perilous state of society demonstrated by the lessening of violence in the London streets since Richard became king, and peace proclaimed with Scotland.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1596" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1597">
               <note type="label">Thames</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The waterway was jammed with boats ferrying back and forth, indicating great activity.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1598" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1599">
               <note type="label">thwacked with ruffians</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Jammed, crowded (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>thwack</term>, v.3.d</ref>) with thugs (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>ruffian</term>, n.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1600" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1601">
               <note type="label">frays</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Fights, brawls (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>fray</term>, n.3.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1602" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1603">
               <note type="label">peace … years</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">This timeline is compacted: the treaty of Fotheringhay was signed 11 June 1482, prior to Edward IV’s death, as part of the English support of the Scottish pretender, Alexander, duke of Albany. This treaty saw agreement for the exchange of land and a promise for the marriage of one of Edward’s daughters to a Scottish prince, but this did not last. The <quote>six years</quote> is an exaggeration: both Hall and Holinshed list only three (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:CHUR5">Churchill 409</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1604" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1605">
               <note type="label">had … wise</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Should choose policy carefully.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1606" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1607">
               <note type="label">hedges … ears</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Be wary about what you speak, because spies are everywhere (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:TILL1">Tilley W19</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Compare Shakespeare (see <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:JOWE5"><title level="m">R3</title> 2.4.37</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1608" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1609">
               <note type="label">But here’s thou</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">What do you do here?</note>
               <note type="performance" resp="pers:MALO2">This could be played as a moment of recognition, or to state that she should not be begging in this place.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1610" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1611">
               <note type="label">neighbor</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">The Citizen’s companion.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1612" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1613">
               <note type="label">arrant quean</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Notorious (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>arrant</term>, adj.3.a</ref>) prostitute (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>quean</term>, n.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1614" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1615">
               <note type="label">charity</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Generosity, kindness.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1616" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1617">
               <note type="label">sprig … bough</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">A relative, or a person of the same <supplied>worthless</supplied> type.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1618" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1619">
               <note type="label">idle … housewife</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Worthless (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>idle</term>, adj.2.a</ref>) hussy (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>housewife</term>, n.2</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1620" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1621">
               <note type="label">could … acquaintance</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Must keep the company of.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1622" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1623">
               <note type="label">for her sake</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">For the memory of Shore’s wife.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">He is happy to give money to a friend of hers, but not directly to her.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1624" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1625">
               <note type="label">somewhat</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Something.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1628" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1629">
               <note type="label">Lie still, purse</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Stay closed. Give no money.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3494" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3495">
               <note type="label">for twenty … farthing</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Exchanged a very large sum for a very small sum. In calculating comparison, it would take 19,200 farthings to equal 20 pounds.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3496" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3497">
               <note type="label">hard</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Severe.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1632" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1633">
               <note type="label">minion</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Worthless one (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>minion</term>, n.I.3.b</ref>); originally the darling of a powerful person (French, mignon), but later contemptuous, especially for a homosexual <soCalled>toy boy</soCalled>—here relying on the metatheatrical fact that Shore’s wife was played by a boy-actor.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1634" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1635">
               <note type="label">shame</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">William Shore’s shame is often noted, but heavily influenced by Richard’s rhetoric.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1636" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1637">
               <note type="label">discredit</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Loss of reputation (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>discredit</term>, n.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3498" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3499">
               <note type="label">Lay … maintain you</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Get a job, feed yourself.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1638" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1639">
               <note type="label">choleric</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Irascible, hot-tempered, with an overabundance of choler or black bile (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>choleric</term>, adj.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1640" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1641">
               <note type="label">an</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">If.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The Citizen is not grateful for his son’s rescue and uses his anger about his son to justify not giving Shore’s wife anything.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1642" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1643">
               <note type="label">I would … hanged</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The Citizen reverses his thanks for sparing his son, which effectively removes Shore’s wife’s bargaining chip.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1644" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1645">
               <note type="label">quean</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Prostitute, whore (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>quean</term>, n.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1648" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1649">
               <note type="label">open shame</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Public disgrace.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1650" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1651">
               <note type="label">fact</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Crime.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1652" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1653">
               <note type="label">heinous</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Wicked, odious (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>heinous</term>, adj.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1654" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1655">
               <note type="label">pleasure me</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Make me feel happy.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1656" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1658">
               <note type="label">John … Lincoln</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">John de la Pole, 1st earl of Lincoln, was Richard III’s nephew and one of his most prominent supporters. Proclamation of Lincoln as Richard’s heir was never made formally, but after the April 1484 death of Richard’s only son, Edward, Lincoln was given the lieutenantship of Ireland to strengthen him as a preferable heir to Clarence’s son Edward, earl of Warwick. Lincoln maintained status after Richard’s death but died in 1487, a rebel at the battle of Stoke. The gossip of Lincoln as Richard’s heir is due to the ambiguous nature of the succession as rumored in the streets.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1659" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1660">
               <note type="label">some says</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Some go so far as to say.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1661" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1662">
               <note type="label">that … all</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Who backed Richard in everything.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Buckingham’s efforts in supporting Richard to the throne were motivated in part by promised honors and promotions, some of which were denied. Richard reneged on his promise to transfer Hastings’s property, the source of the cause of Buckingham’s malcontent. Shakespeare uses the withheld earldom of Hereford as the flashpoint (see <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:JOWE5"><title level="m">R3</title> 4.3.88</ref>), but this claim is historically inaccurate, as Buckingham had oversight over Herefordshire which was no longer an earldom (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:DAVI11">Davies</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3921" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3922">
               <note type="label">is rid</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Has ridden, traveled by horseback.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1663" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1665">
               <note type="label">Brecknock Castle</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Now known as Brecon Castle, Brecknock was controlled by Buckingham, who retired to this position to scheme against Richard.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1666" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1667">
               <note type="label">pull … usurper</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Overthrow the seizer of the throne without right.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1668" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1669">
               <note type="label">agree … will</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Reach whatever decision they want.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1670" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1671">
               <note type="label">the next … overseas</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">I’ll take the next ship to another country.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">As Richmond recounts (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3847 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3848"/>), and which the Page witnesses, a significant exodus of disaffected Englishmen left in the wake of Richard’s coronation (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3849 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3850"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1674" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1675">
               <note type="label">Morton</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">After Morton’s entrance in this scene, his first speech prefix is <quote>Mort.</quote> In his remaining three lines, this changes to <quote>Seru.</quote> As these two speech prefixes evidently indicate the same character, these have here been conflated.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3500" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3501">
               <note type="label">A fool, … enemy</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Morton notes that doing favors does not guarantee the same treatment in return, but her foolish behavior has spoiled her chances to rise again.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3502" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3503">
               <note type="label">my store … small</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">I don’t have very much money.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1676" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1677">
               <note type="label">part stakes</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Divide (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>part</term>, v.III.11.a</ref>) what we have evenly (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>stake</term>, n.1.d</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1678" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1679">
               <note type="label">I cannot … would</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">I am unable to do what I promised I would, or wish I could.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1680" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1681">
               <note type="label">should … enemy</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Spoken for the Page’s benefit but misunderstood by Shore’s wife as a change of heart. This suggests the actor does not convey his regret.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1684" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1685">
               <note type="label">would</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Wish I could.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1686" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1687">
               <note type="label">with all … heart</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Morton takes a risk to speak frankly to Shore’s wife, but the Page seems not to notice.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1688" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1689">
               <note type="label">yonder villain</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">The Page.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1692" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1693">
               <note type="label">but</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Although.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1694" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1695">
               <note type="label">fulsome and stinks</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Morally reprehensible and disgusting (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>fulsome</term>, adj.2.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1696" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1697">
               <note type="label">Why, hath … thee</note>
               <note type="performance" resp="pers:MALO2">This line changes depending on the actor’s emphasis: <quote><emph>hath</emph> he undone thee</quote> reads very differently to <quote>hath <emph>he</emph> undone thee</quote>, both of which imply she is to blame.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The Page comments on Shore’s wife’s hubris and her self-inflicted downfall, seemingly inevitable regardless of whether Richard intervened.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1698" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1699">
               <note type="label">naughty</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Morally corrupt (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>naughty</term>, adj.2.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1700" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1701">
               <note type="label">wantest maintenance</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Are lacking money.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1702" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1703">
               <note type="label">thy old trade</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Prostitution.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Shore’s wife’s reputation as a prostitute is chiefly apocryphal but was a common conception after her death.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1704" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1705">
               <note type="label">open penance</note>
               <note type="commentary" subtype="onlineOnly" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard notes Shore’s wife will do penance at Paul’s Cross (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1468 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3478"/>), so she is stripped of her finery and forced to progress through the square holding a taper, as specifically noted in The Mirror for Magistrates (477). As she took her shame, More notes:
                  <cit><quote>she went in countenance and pace demure so womanly, and albeit she were out all attire save her kirtle only, yet went she so fair and lovely, namely while the wondering of the people cast a comely rud in her cheeks (of which she before had been most miss), that her great shame won her much praise among those that were more amorous of her body than curious of her soul, and many good folk also, that hated her living and glad were to see sin corrected, yet pitied they more her penance than rejoiced therein, when they considered that the protector procured it more of a corrupt intent than any virtuous affection.</quote> 
                  <bibl>(see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_More#emdTTR3_More_anc_368">Sir Thomas More, Undersheriff of London</ref>)</bibl></cit> This play does not show the actual penance, only the aftermath: Heywood, however, did stage this scene in <title level="m">2 Edward IV</title>, with the stage direction <quote>Enter the two Parators, with Mistris Shore in a white sheet barefooted with her hair about her eares, and in her hand a waxe taper</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:HEYW8">4.3</ref>). Fleischer suggests she may have been branded on her forehead, with a <q>P</q> <quote>for peccata as in the Purgatorio, or for Penitent</quote>, or even <quote><q>A</q>, anticipating Hawthorne</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:FLEI1">137</ref>), although Henning questions whether branding was traditional (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:HENN1">Henning 89</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1706" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1707">
               <note type="label">holy whore</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Hypocrite who preaches scripture yet acts counter to her words.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1708" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1709">
               <note type="label">shall … done</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Will never be finished punishing you.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1710" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1711">
               <note type="label">faults … mine is</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Shore’s wife attacks the Page’s hypocrisy for daring to mock her faults when his are hidden beneath the surface. Fleischer (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:FLEI1">137</ref>) notes this line as evidence she has been branded with some symbol of her sin, but it more likely refers to her blushing face, or physical signs of her ordeal, as facial branding was not common.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3504" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3505">
               <note type="label">cannot … court</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The Page accuses Shore’s wife of not knowing her place, as she begs in the streets near the court.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1714" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1715">
               <note type="label">set away</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Removed or killed (done away with) (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT3"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>set</term> v.1.PV2 <q>to set away</q> 1</ref>.</note><!-- JENS1: See https://www.oed.com/dictionary/set_v1?tab=phrasal_verbs#23424095. -->
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1716" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1717">
               <note type="label">all whores … served</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">All prostitutes should be treated the same way.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1718" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1719">
               <note type="label">good</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Sarcastic, given the tenor of his previous lines.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1722" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1723">
               <note type="label">shameful</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Disgraceful, degrading (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>shameful</term>, adj.2</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1724" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1725">
               <note type="label">live … see</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Prophetic, even at her lowest ebb: Shore’s wife long outlived Richard and was still alive when More wrote his history. She is supposed to have died in 1527, 42 years after Richard, perhaps illustrating the restorative power of her penance and fall.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1726" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1727">
               <note type="label">wickedly</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Immorally (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>wickedly</term>, adv.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3506" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3507">
               <note type="label">And though … hurled</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">This speech-ending couplet places an identifiable end-stop on the scene, despite the fact that Shore’s wife has spoken primarily in prose throughout.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1734" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1735">
               <note type="label">with a letter</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Brakenbury has received word about Tyrrell’s task.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1732" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1733">
               <note type="label">Master</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Tyrrell was knighted by Edward IV after his service at Tewkesbury yet is not called <soCalled>Sir James</soCalled> in this play or in Shakespeare. His role as royal murder conspirator diminishes his knightly status.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1737" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1738">
               <note type="label">demand</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Ask (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>demand</term>, v.I.i.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1739" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1740">
               <note type="label">offence</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Harm, injury, damage (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>offense</term>, n.3.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1741" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1742">
               <note type="label">them both</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">The young king and the duke of York.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1743" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1744">
               <note type="label">I was … servant</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">This is a historical inaccuracy: Brakenbury was a loyal servant to Richard from at least 1477, appointed lieutenant of the Tower on Richard’s command in July 1483. At Tyrrell’s execution in 1502, it was stated Brakenbury refused to kill the boys, but it had little to do with Edward IV (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:HORR4">Horrox</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1745" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1746">
               <note type="label">give</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Permit, allow.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1747" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1748">
               <note type="label">you are … matter</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">You have nothing to fear, you are not implicated.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1749" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1750">
               <note type="label">leave it</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Forget about it.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1751" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1752">
               <note type="label">here with tears</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The first of several sentimental references to the emotional impact of the boys’ murder, Brakenbury demonstrates the fear he feels which forces him to surrender the boys to save his own life, an echo of the dilemma the old Host feels when asked to imprison Rivers.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1755" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1756">
               <note type="label">prevail</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Overpower, master (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>prevail</term>, v.3.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1759" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1760">
               <note type="label">But ho</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Are you there?</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1763" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1764">
               <note type="label">Myles Forrest</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Forrest is one of the two murderers of the boys in Shakespeare, as noted in both More (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_More#emdTTR3_More_p76">Sir Thomas More, Undersheriff of London</ref>) and Holinshed but he is an accessory in this play. The decision to use Forrest as an intermediary rather than murderer offers distance between the victims and their trusted attendant and might speak to how conflicted Brakenbury is over Forrest’s role.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1765" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1766">
               <note type="label">I spake of</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">In this long chain of command, Richard employs the Page, who engages Tyrrell, who speaks to Forrest about acquiring two men to do the crime. As such, if Slaughter and Denton are caught, there is no direct connection from them to the king. Such a hierarchy appears in Shakespeare’s <title level="m">2 Henry VI</title> (see <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:LOUG2"><title level="m">2H6</title></ref>), Peele’s <title level="m">The Battle of Alcazar</title>, and <title level="m">Thomas of Woodstock</title> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:FLEI1">Fleischer 240–241</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1767" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1769">
               <note type="label">Will Slaughter</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">A brutal name which signifies his occupation and his determination to carry it out, later observed by the young king.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1770" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1771">
               <note type="label">Jack Denton</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Denton’s name appears in multiple forms in this scene; here as <quote>Denten</quote> but later as <quote>Douton</quote>, with a speech prefix of <quote>Dout.</quote> (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1804 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1805"/>). This is likely a compositor’s error, with a turned letter <mentioned>n</mentioned> and a misreading of <mentioned>e</mentioned> for <mentioned>o</mentioned>.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1778" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1779">
               <note type="label">To make … folly</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">To talk about this too much would be foolish.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1780" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1781">
               <note type="label">resolute</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Certain, clear-headed, determined (upon an action) (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>resolute</term>, adj.6</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">This is in contrast to King Edward’s earlier usage (in the sense of constant, firm, steadfast) to describe ambition (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_177 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_178"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1782" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1783">
               <note type="label">delivered</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Presented, handed over (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>delivered</term>, v.II.11.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1784" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1785">
               <note type="label">cast away pity</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Forget about conscience.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1786" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1787">
               <note type="label">not so … favor</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Put the reward out of your mind.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1788" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1789">
               <note type="label">stern</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Severe, immovable (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>stern</term>, adj.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3508" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3509">
               <note type="label">’Tis not … about</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Will presents himself and Jack as experienced killers, but this is questionable, given Jack’s fear (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3851 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3852"/>).</note>
               <note type="performance" resp="pers:MALO2">An actor may play either or both of these characters as hardened killers, or braggarts.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1790" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1791">
               <note type="label">no bloodshed</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard’s command the boys’ blood not be shed is in part practical: less to clean and no incriminating evidence left. The reluctance to spill royal blood is a modicum of respect, also afforded Clarence, who was drowned rather than stabbed, and Hall’s chronicle notes, <quote>For James Tyrrell devised that they should be murdered in their beds, and no blood shed</quote> (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Hall#emdTTR3_Hall_anc_95">The Union of the Two Noble and Illustre Families of Lancaster and York</ref>)(<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:CHUR5">Churchill 378</ref>, <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:CHUR5">Churchill 405</ref>). Despite this stipulation, each killer’s suggestion involves bloodshed, a clue as to their intelligence.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1792" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1793">
               <note type="label">advises</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Recommendations (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>advise</term>, v.5.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1794" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1795">
               <note type="label">dags</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Heavy pistols (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>dag</term>, n.2.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1796" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1797">
               <note type="label">ready charged</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Loaded.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1798" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1799">
               <note type="label">suddenly</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Without warning.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1800" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1801">
               <note type="label">more … needs</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">More complicated than necessary (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:TILL1">Tilley A32</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1808" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1809">
               <note type="label">bring … both</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Bring up both killers to commit the murder after the boys are asleep, which allows the men to roll boys into the featherbeds and smother them.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1810" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1811">
               <note type="label">two feather-beds</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">More records use of bed-clothes and pillows: 
                  <cit><quote>Then all the other being removed from them, this Myles Forrest and John <supplied>Denton</supplied> about midnight (the sely children lying in their beds) came into the chamber, and suddenly lapped them up among the bedclothes—so bewrapped them and entangled them, keeping down by force the featherbed and pillows hard unto their mouths, that within a while, smored and stifled, their breath failing, they gave up to God their innocent souls into the joys of heaven, leaving to the tormentors their bodies dead in the bed</quote> 
                  <bibl>(see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_More#emdTTR3_More_anc_370">Sir Thomas More, Undersheriff of London</ref>)</bibl></cit></note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1812" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1813">
               <note type="label">Exit Tyrrell</note>
               <note type="textual" resp="pers:MALO2">Q’s stage direction complicates the later removal of the princes’ bodies from the stage, but also provides him deniability about his role in the murders.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3510" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3511">
               <note type="label">sorrow … myself</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The young king’s youthful wisdom recalls the proverbial <quote>out of the mouths of babes and sucklings hast thou ordained strength</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:THEB6">GNV Psalms 8:2</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1816" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1817">
               <note type="label">whom our … left</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The young king comes close to criticizing his father’s judgment but concludes Richard’s slacking of duty is responsible.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1818" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1819">
               <note type="label">digress from duty</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Depart from what he had sworn to do.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1820" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1821">
               <note type="label">know … cause</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Can think of no good reason.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1822" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1823">
               <note type="label">detain</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>To hinder; to delay</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>detain</term>, v.5</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1824" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1825">
               <note type="label">prelates</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">High clergy, bishops (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>prelate</term>, n.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1828" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1829">
               <note type="label">melancholy</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Sullen, sad, depressed (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>melancholy</term>, adj.3.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1830" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1831">
               <note type="label">garden</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Tradition says the princes were held in the White Tower at the centre of the Tower, and so they had a view of the Tower Green below.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1832" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1833">
               <note type="label">Did the king?</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">That was done by the king?</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3512" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3513">
               <note type="label">am I … king</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">He is not yet crowned, but he was proclaimed successor after Edward IV’s death. As far as he knows, he is king in all ways except for personal power held in trust by his uncle, and does not know of Richard’s campaign against his legitimacy. note a similar revelation in Shakespeare (see <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:JOWE5"><title level="m">R3</title> 3.5.8–10</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1834" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1835">
               <note type="label">would have said</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Meant to say.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3514" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3515">
               <note type="label">enjoy … liberty</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">A line indebted to Hall: <quote>the prince sore abashed began to sigh and said: alas, I would mine uncle would let me have my life although I lose my kingdom</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:HALL11">Hall 378</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1836" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1837">
               <note type="label">so</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">If only.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1838" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1839">
               <note type="label">clean discharged</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Removed from his position permanently.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1840" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1841">
               <note type="label">new … laws</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Proverbial (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:TILL1">Tilley L446</ref>), suggesting that people newly in power tend to change the system to suit themselves.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">This reflects the Citizen’s <quote>No men, no laws, no princes, no orders</quote>: activity and changes are as unnerving as the anticipation the Citizen notes (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1594 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1595"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1842" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1843">
               <note type="label">who are they</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Even as Slaughter and Denton stand aside, the king sees and reacts to them, and in turn, the murderers may hear and react to the king’s dismay.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1844" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1845">
               <note type="label">ghastly looks</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Frightening demeanors.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1848" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1849">
               <note type="label">starts</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Flinches or recoils; startles; stares in horror (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>start</term>, v.I.8.a</ref>), all involuntary movements of distaste or fear.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The young king’s physical reaction to Will Slaughter’s name is unmistakable and encourages sympathy for his gentle nature.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1850" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1851">
               <note type="label">walk up</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Forrest’s invitation suggests he takes the boys upstage, or potentially to the possible discovery space, hidden by a tapestry.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1856" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1857">
               <note type="label">see</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Imagine.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1858" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1859">
               <note type="label">moan</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Entreaty (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>moan</term>, n.1.b</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1860" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1861">
               <note type="label">ta’en … hand</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Agreed to do it.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1862" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1863">
               <note type="label">are you faint-hearted</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Timid, cowardly.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Slaughter’s mockery matches the conversation between Clarence’s murderers in Shakespeare (see <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:JOWE5"><title level="m">R3 </title> 1.4.104–135</ref>), where one assailant’s fear is subdued by the other.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1864" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1865">
               <note type="label">A little thing</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Such provocation.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1866" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1867">
               <note type="label">anon</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Forthwith; instantly</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>anon</term>, adv.3.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1868" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1869">
               <note type="label">feels me?</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Reacts to my touch?</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Slaughter revels in the thought that if the young king was startled by the mere sound of his name, the boy will be truly shocked when he feels Will’s wrath, which demonstrates his true cruelty.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1872" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1873">
               <note type="label">at rest</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Asleep.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1874" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1875">
               <note type="label">Moving … boys</note>
               <note type="performance" resp="pers:MALO2">There are multiple ways this scene may be staged, depending on the venue. If a discovery space is available, a bed might be pushed out in view of the audience. Simpler venues might just have an area where the sleeping boys lie upstage. In either case, the boys are in view of the spectators, slightly obscured by upstage positioning. The struggle would certainly have happened in view.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1878" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1879">
               <note type="label">hear</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Forrest hears the sounds of the struggle and little drowsy cries as the boys are killed.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1882" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1883">
               <note type="label">calling from upstage</note>
               <note type="performance" resp="pers:MALO2">While there is no prescribed stage direction that suggests where the boys are killed, it is likely the murder occurs upstage, which makes the act more distant from the audience, but still within their direct view. Forrest’s distance is intentional so as to not be a witness, but he can still hear what is happening. The on-stage murder is designed to be partially seen by the audience, and it is up to the actors to decide how much the boys struggle or resist, although from Denton’s aggressive commentary, it is not a peaceful death. The title-page reference to <quote>Wherein is shown <gap reason="sampling"/> the smothering of the two young princes</quote> leaves little doubt the violent act is in view.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1884" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1885">
               <note type="label">boots not</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Avails or helps nothing (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>boot</term>, v.1.3.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1886" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1887">
               <note type="label">cry again</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">It is in Denton’s and Slaughter’s best interests to stifle further cries, lest they are discovered. At this point the boys are struggling for their lives, potentially calling for Forrest’s aid, thrashing, kicking, attempting to run away, or reaching out for one another. They are no match for the larger men, but they have made enough of a commotion that their murderers need to cover the boys’ faces to end it all.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1890" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1891">
               <note type="label">heap of stones</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">More notes Tyrrell <quote>caused those murderers to bury them at the stair-foot, meetly deep in the ground, under a great heap of stones</quote>, source for this citation (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_More#emdTTR3_More_anc_372">Sir Thomas More, Undersheriff of London</ref>). In 1674, demolition of an old section of the White Tower uncovered two small skeletons, thought to be the princes. Charles II interred the bodies in Westminster Abbey under this assumption (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:HORR5">Horrox</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1896" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1897">
               <note type="label">chronicles … mention</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The location of the burials are indeed lost to time, as More notes: <quote>their bodies cast God wot where, by the cruel ambition of their unnatural uncle and his despiteous tormentors</quote> (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_More#emdTTR3_More_anc_374">Sir Thomas More, Undersheriff of London</ref>). Later chroniclers like Holinshed and Hall follow More, which renders this line accurate.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1898" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1899">
               <note type="label">kingly thanks</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Preferment, privilege.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3516" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3517">
               <note type="label">with … dagger drawn</note>
               <note type="commentary" subtype="onlineOnly" resp="pers:MALO2">The last time we met Buckingham, his last line was <quote>God save the king</quote> in deference to Richard (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3853 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3854"/>). A great deal has changed since that entrance: his next three mentions refer to his role in the arrest of the Woodville faction (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3855 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3856"/>), then his efforts to proclaim Richard king (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3857 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3858"/>), and then finally to his rebellion and flight to Wales (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3859 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3860"/>). Historically, the Duke of Buckingham became disaffected with Richard in July 1483 after being denied access to Hastings’ estates. Bishop John Morton, Buckingham’s prisoner at Brecknock, took advantage of this disenchantment in October 1483 by persuading him to support the Beaufort-Woodville conspiracy, designed to place Richmond on the throne. By October 11 Richard was aware of Buckingham’s defection and subsequent raising of a rebel army in the Marches of Wales. Buckingham’s rebellion failed due to the lack of loyalty his mercenary army showed, and inclement weather that scattered his forces. After this failure, he went into hiding, relying on his former servant, Ralph Banastre, who we see in this scene after Banastre’s betrayal (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:DAVI11">Davies</ref>). The transition from <quote>God save the king</quote> to the desperation of threatening his close servant’s life shows the magnitude of his fall.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1904" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1905">
               <note type="label">save my life</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Spare me.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3518" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3519">
               <note type="label">unjustly betrayed me</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Ralph Banastre initially assisted Buckingham after the latter was declared a rebel fugitive. Buckingham stayed at Banastre’s home in Wem, Shropshire, but Banastre betrayed him for financial gain (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:DAVI11">Davies</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3520" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3521">
               <note type="label">proclamation … grace</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">As Buckingham attempted to rouse allies, he was declared a traitor, which implicated any who associated with him.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1908" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1909">
               <note type="label">lucre</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Financial gain, money.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3522" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3523">
               <note type="label">spends … master</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Dedicates his life to supporting his master’s cause.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1912" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1913">
               <note type="label">Buckingham … Banastre</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Buckingham’s attack is fruitless: Ellis suggests Banastre was lauded for his role (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:ELLI2">100</ref>), although, as discussed below, the Herald’s order that he be arrested reflects the cost of his treason as reported by Holinshed (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Hol#emdTTR3_Hol_p1">Chronicles of England, Scotland, and Ireland</ref>) and Hall (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Hall#emdTTR3_Hall_p6">The Union of the Two Noble and Illustre Families of Lancaster and York</ref>).</note>
               <note type="performance" resp="pers:MALO2">This is a vivid stage picture, with the desperate Buckingham ready to murder his servant for his betrayal, only to be prevented by the intervention of the Herald. This turn in fortunes and violent act would have a stunning effect on the audience, as well as on Buckingham himself.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1916" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1917">
               <note type="label">’rest</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Arrest.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3524" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3525">
               <note type="label">bloodsucker</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Parasite (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>bloodsucker</term>, n.1.a</ref>), <quote>murderer</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>bloodsucker</term>, n.2</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1918" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1919">
               <note type="label">held</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Beheld.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1920" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1921">
               <note type="label">put … besides</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Buckingham’s role in the princes’ death is omitted. Shakespeare has Buckingham hesitate to help (see <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:JOWE5"><title level="m">R3</title> 4.2.24–26</ref>), but here he is entirely innocent. Historically, Buckingham is implicated: one suggests the boys were <quote>put to death in the Tower of London be the vise of the duke of Buckingham</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:GAIR1">Anonymous, Historical, 588</ref>), although his involvement is lessened in Vergil and More (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:DAVI11">Davies</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3526" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3527">
               <note type="label">bishop of Ely</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">In Buckingham’s custody, Morton came into his captor’s good graces, and convinced him to support Richmond. After Buckingham set out to raise support, Morton fled to Brittany and left Buckingham to Richard.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1924" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1925">
               <note type="label">All</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Buckingham’s supporters.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The noise that Buckingham’s rescuers would have made would have been considerable. With six actors shouting, and using their swords, bucklers, and daggers to bang on their armor to make a racket, there would have been an impressive cacophony as they attempted to prevent his arrest. We don’t know the identity of these men, but they are loyal to Buckingham, likely equipped in advance of joining the Welsh against Richard.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1926" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1927">
               <note type="label">give me … speak</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Let me say something.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1930" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1931">
               <note type="label">bringing in</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Helping to elevate.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3528" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3529">
               <note type="label">Henry, … Richmond</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Henry Tudor, earl of Richmond, was the final Lancastrian claimant to the English throne, a great-great-great grandson to Edward III through his mother, Margaret Beaufort. He inherited the title of the earl of Richmond from his father, who died before his birth. After the accession of Edward IV in 1462, Henry Tudor was sent to be brought up in Wales, where he spent much of his youth. After his uncle Henry VI reclaimed the throne briefly in 1470, Richmond was predicted to be a future king, but the short-lived Lancastrian readeption meant Richmond was forced to flee to France to avoid capture. He landed in Brittany and was well received by François II, duke of Brittany, who remained a steadfast supporter, partly for the preferment he anticipated were Richmond to claim the throne. After a failed invasion in October 1483, Richmond landed in Wales in August 1485, where he defeated Richard III at the Battle of Bosworth, outside Leicester. He was proclaimed King Henry VII on 22 August 1485, was crowned on 30 October 1485, and married the Princess Elizabeth of York on 14 January 1486. He died on 21 April 1509.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The first mention of Richmond, as Bezio notes, <quote>follows almost immediately upon the heels of the murder of the two princes in the Tower, textually situating him as Edward V’s heir</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:BEZI1">72</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1932" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1933">
               <note type="label">ere long</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Very soon.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1934" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1935">
               <note type="label">Milford Haven</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">This encompasses the Milford Haven Estuary Waterway in Pembrokeshire, on the southwest coast of Wales.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1936" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1937">
               <note type="label">aid of … Welsh</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richmond’s Welsh support is outlined below (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3861 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3862"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1938" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1939">
               <note type="label">lawful king</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Richmond.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Buckingham’s treasonous statement declares Richard’s rule unlawful. This <quote>contrasts with Richard’s usurpation, and even Richard acknowledges Richmond’s right</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:BEZI1">Bezio 72</ref>; see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3863 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3864"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1940" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1941">
               <note type="label">this</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">King Richard, but likely directed at Richard’s herald.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1942" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1943">
               <note type="label">amain</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Hence with full speed (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>amain</term>, adv.2.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1944" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1945">
               <note type="label">the man … reave</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">The one who is destined to relieve (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT3"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>reave</term> v.1.2a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1946" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1947">
               <note type="label">yoke</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Burden of servitude</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>yoke</term>, n.IV.11</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The same term Richard uses when describing his service to his brother (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_514 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_515"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1948" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1949">
               <note type="label">home</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Grave.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">This anticipates Richard’s similar phrasing in threatening Richmond (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2308 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2309"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1952" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1953">
               <note type="label">given to</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Won by.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1954" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1955">
               <note type="label">to’fore</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Previously, beforehand, earlier</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>tofore</term>, adv.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3530" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3531">
               <note type="label">as promise … passed</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Betrothal was earlier passed or consented to by Edward IV.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richmond’s mother petitioned for marriage to Elizabeth during Edward IV’s lifetime. After Richard III took the throne, his opponents’ appetite grew for the potential in Richmond’s marriage to Elizabeth.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1956" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1957">
               <note type="label">While then</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Until that time.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1960" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1961">
               <note type="label">meaning good</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Intention pure.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1962" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1963">
               <note type="label">raise</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Elevate, crown.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1964" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1965">
               <note type="label">were smothered</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">We have no real sense when the boys died but, given that fugitive Buckingham knows of their fate, this scene occurs some weeks later. The boys’ death may be the reason for Buckingham’s flight, given his potentially being named an accessory to the crime. Buckingham was involved with the boys’ removal from their uncles, and did nothing to prevent their deaths.</note>
           </note>
            
           <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1968" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1969">
               <note type="label">vaunt</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Praiseworthy, commending himself openly or giving a good account of his behavior (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>vaunt</term>, v.3.a</ref>).</note>
              <note type="commentary">Buckingham congratulates himself for being no part of child-murder.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1970" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1971">
               <note type="label">altogether innocent</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Buckingham’s second protestation seems genuine in grief for the boys. As a close advisor to Richard, Buckingham, if he truly had no idea about the plot, shows Richard’s devious secrecy.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1974" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1975">
               <note type="label">child … thee up</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Banastre was a gentleman of good family and may have been trained as a child and teenager with Buckingham has many noble or gentry children were traded around as part of their education. In the history of the village of Wem, Banastre is remembered as having <quote>been tenderly brought up by Humphrey Stafford, the great Duke of Buckingham, who loved, favored, and trusted him above all his servants</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:GARB1">Garbett 363</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1976" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1977">
               <note type="label">curse of Buckingham</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Buckingham curses Banastre as Buckingham’s Ghost curses Richard in Shakespeare (see <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:JOWE5"><title level="m">R3</title> 5.4.147.s.d.–5.4.156</ref>). Banastre was rewarded Buckingham’s Kent estate (Yalding Manor), which he later re-gifted back to Henry VII, which might suggest prosperity resulted from his actions, but chroniclers note Banastre’s misfortune after his betrayal. Holinshed records that: 
                  <cit><quote>shortly after <supplied>Banastre</supplied> had betrayed the duke his master; his son and heir waxed mad, <supplied>and</supplied> so died in a boar’s sty; his eldest daughter of excellent beauty, was suddenly stricken with a foul leprosy; his second son marvelously deformed of his limbs, and made lame; his younger son in a small puddle was strangled and drowned; and he being of extreme age, arraigned, and found guilty of a murder, and by his clergy saved. And as for his thousand pounds, k<supplied>ing</supplied> Richard gave him not one farthing, saying that he which would be untrue to so good a master, would be false to all other: howbeit some say that he had a small office or a farm to stop his mouth withal.</quote> 
                  <bibl>(see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Hol#emdTTR3_Hol_anc_134">Chronicles of England, Scotland, and Ireland</ref>)</bibl>
                  </cit>This account is replicated by Hall (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Hall#emdTTR3_Hall_anc_97">The Union of the Two Noble and Illustre Families of Lancaster and York</ref>), and also appears in Sackville’s entry in <title level="m">The Mirror of Magistrates</title> (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Buck#emdTTR3_Buck_anc_43">The Complaint of Henry Duke of Buckingham</ref>). Sackville, in particular, adds prophetic details of Banastre’s future to Buckingham’s curse. The consequences of Banastre’s actions (and Buckingham’s curse) are clearly emphasized.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1980" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1981">
               <note type="label">vengeance</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Personal retribution (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>vengeance</term>, n.2.a</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The first use of this word since the ghost’s <quote>Vendicta</quote> (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_19 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_20"/>), it will be quickly repeated in the next scene by Richard (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3865 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3866"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1982" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1983">
               <note type="label">mischiefs</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>A misfortune, a calamity</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>mischief</term>, n.I.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1984" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1985">
               <note type="label">light … thine</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Descend on you and your supporters (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>light</term>, v.1.II.7</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1986" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1988">
               <note type="label">Ixion … wheel</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">In Greek mythology, Ixion, king of Thessaly, whose lust for Hera offended Zeus, was cast into the sky bound to a spinning, winged wheel of fire. Buckingham wishes greater torments on Banastre than Ixion endured. According to the accounts in Holinshed (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Hol#emdTTR3_Hol_p1">Chronicles of England, Scotland, and Ireland</ref>), Hall (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Hall#emdTTR3_Hall_p6">The Union of the Two Noble and Illustre Families of Lancaster and York</ref>), and in Sackville’s <title level="m">Mirror for Magistrates</title> entry (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Buck#emdTTR3_Buck_anc_43">The Complaint of Henry Duke of Buckingham</ref>), Buckingham’s wish may have been answered.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1993" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1994">
               <note type="label">let me</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Allow them to take me.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3929" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3930">
               <note type="label">My lord … Banastre</note>
               <note type="performance" resp="pers:MALO2">The final moment in this scene is one of great tension as the two sides face off, with Buckingham and Banastre between them. The Herald’s apology demonstrates his understanding of the difficult task he has been given, and also works to pacify Buckingham’s supporters. While Buckingham’s men may still have their weapons raised, the Herald’s men are no longer on the attack. Banastre’s arrest may be a further concession to Buckingham’s followers: the actors have the decision to make here whether Banastre is arrested by the Herald’s men or if he is handed over to Buckingham’s followers.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1999" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2002">
               <note type="label">King Richard, crowned</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard has come from his coronation, replicated in Shakespeare (see <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:JOWE5"><title level="m">R3</title> 4.2.1</ref>). This is the first reference to Richard as king in stage directions; he likely wears the crown here. While a king may not necessarily wear his crown in daily use, the change in Richard’s status for the sake of the audience would require its presence. Given that Richard is coming directly from his coronation, this is a logical addition which makes it clear that he has ascended to king, without having to state it.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2005" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2006">
               <note type="label">ventured</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Risked.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2007" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2008">
               <note type="label">friends</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Former allies (Buckingham), family members (Clarence, the princes), relations by marriage (Rivers, Grey).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2009" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2010">
               <note type="label">fearful</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Terror-inspiring (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>fearful</term>, adj.I.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2011" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2012">
               <note type="label">severe judge</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">God of <soCalled>Last Judgment</soCalled>.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard is beset with guilt he must explain in the afterlife.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2011" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2012">
               <note type="label">severe judge</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">The fact a damnèd judgment craves a crime which demands punishment in hell.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">This suggests the proverbial <quote>blood will have blood</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:TILL1">Tilley B458</ref>), also cited in <title level="m">Macbeth</title> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:JOWE8">3.4.120</ref>). This also suggests the earlier <quote>blood is a threatener</quote> (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3867 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3868"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2013" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2014">
               <note type="label">crown … wear</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Symbol of kingship that was once easy to support.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">As he rose in power, Richard saw the crown as a symbol of his right, and the valuable stones which comprise it as reflective of his gains. Now that he wears it, his burden of criminal actions weighs heavily on his conscience.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2015" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2016">
               <note type="label">Enchased</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Decorated, ornamented (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>enchase</term>, v.2.I.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3532" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3533">
               <note type="label">raging … on me</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Angry demons have transferred their dreadful spirits through hell to infuse them in me.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2019" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2021">
               <note type="label">Stygian lakes</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">In Greek mythology, fiery lakes of the Styx, the river over which Charon must ferry the shades of the dead before they settle in the underworld.</note>
               <note type="textual" resp="pers:MALO2">Q shows <quote>studient</quote>, which suggests a typesetter’s or scribal error, while Boswell proposed this correction. To retain <quote>studient</quote>, or conscientious, studious (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>studient</term>, adj.1</ref>) removes connection with the lakes Richard’s tormentors inhabit.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2022" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2023">
               <note type="label">addressed</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Directed (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>address</term>, v.I.1</ref>); prepared (for a particular purpose) (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>address</term>, v.II.12.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2024" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2052">
               <note type="label">If’t … good. Catesby</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">This series of eight lines in Q has over-long lines and awkward speech patterns, which suggests Richard’s thought processes fragment through prose as he struggles to communicate, even with himself.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3534" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3535">
               <note type="label">i’this extremity</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Facing <quote>the utmost penalty</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>extremity</term>, n.3.b</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The verse breaks down as Richard considers how to proceed with his unfamiliar burden of conscience. This disruption reflects Richard’s flagging inner confidence.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2028" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3536">
               <note type="label">E’en repent</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Should I ask for forgiveness?</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2032" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2033">
               <note type="label">thy righteous god</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard turns on the audience to mock their faith and ridicules the idea of asking for mercy.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2034" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2035">
               <note type="label">Ha, repent</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard’s reversed repentance is shorter than its equivalent in Shakespeare (see <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:JOWE5"><title level="m">R3</title> 5.4.157–202</ref>). In this case, Richard laughs at the idea in barely two lines.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2036" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2037">
               <note type="label">list</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Choose, desire (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>list</term>, v.1.3</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2038" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2040">
               <note type="label">Thy god … mine</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">The god you worship is not the god I worship.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2043" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2044">
               <note type="label">pace</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Measure (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>pace</term>, v.2</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2045" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2046">
               <note type="label">valance</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Protection, barrier (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>valance</term>, n.1.2.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2047" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2048">
               <note type="label">Soul … body</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">So deep in blood, Richard chooses certain damnation by staying his course.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2049" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2050">
               <note type="label">That’s good</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">I have decided.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3538" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3539">
               <note type="label">troubles … overcomed</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard’s need for reassurance and his growing sense he himself may be England’s biggest problem demonstrates his paranoia and jumpiness. Field notes that the clumsy final word is <quote>an ancient participle of come</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:FIEL2">Field 47</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2061" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2062">
               <note type="label">thou points … me</note>
               <note type="performance" resp="pers:MALO2">Catesby does not necessarily physically point (although that offers comic opportunities): Richard accuses him of equivocating.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2063" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2064">
               <note type="label">else not</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">No one.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2065" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2066">
               <note type="label">Salisbury</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Buckingham was executed here on 2 November 1483 in the public marketplace. He requested audience with Richard in the hopes of assassinating him, but was refused (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:DAVI11">Davies</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Holinshed records: <quote>when <supplied>Buckingham</supplied> had confessed the whole fact &amp; conspiracy, upon All-Soul’s Day, without arraignment or judgment, he was at Salisbury in the open market place, on a new scaffold beheaded and put to death</quote> (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Hol#emdTTR3_Hol_anc_136">Chronicles of England, Scotland, and Ireland</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3540" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3541">
               <note type="label">to be … head</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard mocks Buckingham’s support of Richmond’s claim to the throne.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2069" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2070">
               <note type="label">if ’a do</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">If he does.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2071" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2072">
               <note type="label">fames</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">notoriety.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Greg (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:GREG11">1929, ix</ref>) lists this as a doubtful reading, and proposes Field’s conj. <quote>flames</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:GREG11">48</ref>) as an alternative, but the logic of <q>outlive me in flames</q> is spurious as it proposes damnation for Buckingham. The Ransom text is damaged on this line, which makes clarity difficult.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2073" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2074">
               <note type="label">he hops … head</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The action of a dead chicken. Buckingham lost his head for treason before he could enact any of his plans and repeats his earlier phrasing (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_506 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_507"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2075" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2076">
               <note type="label">no force</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">No matter (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>force</term>, n.1.III.20.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2077" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2078">
               <note type="label">Richmond</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">The future Henry VII.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard is conscious of Richmond’s right to the throne by family, marriage and battle, and the audience would be well aware of his historical importance. Richard’s first mention of his opponent comes only 60 lines after Buckingham’s first (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3528 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3529"/>). Once an irritant, he is becoming a major problem, particularly as nobles continue to defect.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3542" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3543">
               <note type="label">Brittany … duke</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">After defeat at Tewkesbury, remaining Lancastrians crossed the channel to the court of Duke François II of Brittany. François recognized the political advantages of Richmond’s cause, hosted him in Rennes for over a decade, and supported both invasion attempts.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2079" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2080">
               <note type="label">conspires</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Actively plots.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2081" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2082">
               <note type="label">persuades</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Convinces (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>persuade</term>, v.I.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2083" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2084">
               <note type="label">lineally descended</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richmond’s claim was valid, as great-great-great-grandson of Edward III through his mother, Margaret Beaufort. Richard notes a connection through Richmond’s grandmother, Catherine of Valois, widow of Henry V, dependent on marriage rather than blood.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2087" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2088">
               <note type="label">hath right</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Has a claim.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2089" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2090">
               <note type="label">what thinkst thou</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">What is your impression?</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2091" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2092">
               <note type="label">doth deserve</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Has earned, is worthy.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2093" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2094">
               <note type="label">commend</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Praise, extol</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>commend</term>, v.3.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2095" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2096">
               <note type="label">as good … foe</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Catesby confesses that one so esteemed as Richmond would be a valuable ally.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2097" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2098">
               <note type="label">due … traitor</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">The inevitable fate of any who dare to rebel or betray; that is, beheading, if not hanged, drawn, and quartered.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3544" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3545">
               <note type="label">strengthening … title</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Improving of his claim. Marrying Elizabeth takes Richmond’s claim from tenuous to impressive.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2099" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2100">
               <note type="label">concluded</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Determined, settled</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>concluded</term>, adj.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2101" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2102">
               <note type="label">all the … Brittany</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">This timeline is compacted: Catesby says Buckingham died the day before (November 3) but Richmond declared his intent to marry Elizabeth at Rennes on December 25. Richmond’s allies saw his announcement of intention as constituting a strong claim on the throne.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2103" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2104">
               <note type="label">there it goes</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">You have proven my point.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3546" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3547">
               <note type="label">A marriage … blood</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Faux-proverbial:  a marriage undertaken for the wrong reasons will end badly. Richard’s phrasing is unique to this play.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2105" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2106">
               <note type="label">accursed</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Damnable, hated (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>accursed</term>, adj.2</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2109" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2110">
               <note type="label">bewitch</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Influence with magic, injure by devilish means (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>bewitch</term>, v.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2111" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2112">
               <note type="label">perilous birds</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Dangerous exiles. Richard continues the avian metaphor from the <quote>hatching</quote> conspiracies manifested by the <quote>flight</quote> of so many enemies to Richmond’s side.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2113" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2114">
               <note type="label">weal</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Happiness, prosperity</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>weal</term>, n.1.2.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3548" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3549">
               <note type="label">earl … nobility</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richmond has formed an army with a growing list of defectors and prepares to invade.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2115" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2116">
               <note type="label">aid in France</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richmond also spent time in the French court after Pierre Landais turned on him in 1484 and attempted to extradite him to England at Richard III’s request. Richmond evaded Landais and found the support of the young French king, Charles VIII, who provided troops and resources for Richmond’s invasion (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:GUNN1">Gunn</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2117" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2118">
               <note type="label">rescued in Brittany</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">François II, the Duke of Brittany, sheltered Lancastrian exiles in exchange for political favor.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3550" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3551">
               <note type="label">But all … rescue</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard’s phrasing indicates a growing panic that he cannot seem to control. Run-together statements that begin with <quote>but</quote> indicates that he is beginning to piece together the full picture and negotiates with himself as he leaps from conclusion to conclusion. His phrasing makes clear that he is losing his grip on the situation.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2119" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2121">
               <note type="label">escape from Landais</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Pierre Landais, who appears briefly in the following scene, was treasurer to François II, duke of Brittany, and negotiated with Richard to surrender Richmond (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2314 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2315"/>). Before Landais could complete the transaction, Richmond escaped to France. In this play, Landais’ treachery does not undermine their relationship.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2122" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2123">
               <note type="label">ended all</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Solved the problem before it began.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2124" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2125">
               <note type="label">disgrace</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Landais’ treason infuriated the ailing Breton duke François II, who had appointed him proxy ruler as he recovered. Landais was exiled (then executed) for his efforts. In reality, Landais died a month prior to the Battle of Bosworth, but he remains in this play as a key link to Brittany.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3552" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3553">
               <note type="label">biting dogs … curs</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard likens Richmond’s followers to dogs; the biting dogs are the ones who are actively supporting Richmond, including his French allies, while the sleeping curs are Richmond’s allies in England who are waiting for his arrival before they declare their intentions. Richard is aware of how much ground he is losing.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2126" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2127">
               <note type="label">wake … foe</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Arouse the English enemy.</note>
               <note type="commentary">Brittany’s gamble was considerable, and its hope for nationhood would have been demolished had Richard defeated Richmond and taken revenge for their support. Instead, Brittany held a powerful ally in Henry VII.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2128" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2129">
               <note type="label">evil … war</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Traitorous actions justify the punishments that follow.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2130" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2131">
               <note type="label">spurs</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Motivations (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>spur</term>, v.1.I.2.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2132" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2133">
               <note type="label">Stanley</note>
               <note type="textual" resp="pers:MALO2">Spelled as Standley in Q and all subsequent editions, but universally corrected for this edition.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2134" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2135">
               <note type="label">father-in-law</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Stepfather</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>father-in-law</term>, n.2, now arch. and hist.</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Stanley was married to Margaret Beaufort, Richmond’s mother, in 1572, when Richmond was 15 years old.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2138" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2139">
               <note type="label">guilty death</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">A traitor’s execution.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3554" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3555">
               <note type="label">letters … embassage</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Stanley did not travel to Brittany but was suspected of receiving communications from Richmond and his allies.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2140" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2141">
               <note type="label">George</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">George Stanley was 25 at Bosworth, but given the tenor of his lines, he was played by one of the boy-actors who performed as princes. Roberts-Smith has argued for the casting of the company’s youngest boy, to heighten sympathy (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:ROBE6">2012, 198</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2144" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2145">
               <note type="label">for that … received</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">I have sent as much as I have received; in other words, nothing.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2146" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2147">
               <note type="label">I do … mistrust</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">I am not worried about.</note>
               <note type="commentary">Stanley may claim he felt Richard means George.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2148" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2149">
               <note type="label">he</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Richmond.</note>
               <note type="commentary">Richard is yet to use his name but won’t let Stanley quibble.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2150" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2151">
               <note type="label">nobility</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Defector lords.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3556" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3557">
               <note type="label">nor willingly … causes</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Accounts vary on Stanley’s loyalty to his king and son-in-law; his political indecision played out at Bosworth, where he (reportedly) waited to decide what side to join. This wavering offers a rich source of subtext for any actor.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2154" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2155">
               <note type="label">golden … eloquence</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard mocks Stanley’s evasive answers and eloquent speech.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3262" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3263">
               <note type="label">out of … England</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">An asynchronous link to an earlier conversation; Richard claims Stanley did not tell him Richmond went to Brittany, which occurred a decade prior.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2156" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2157">
               <note type="label">pass over</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Go into exile; also cross the channel.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2158" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2159">
               <note type="label">but</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Only.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2160" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2161">
               <note type="label">fine-colored tale</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Wittily-constructed lie.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2164" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2165">
               <note type="label">whereas you mistrust</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Even if you do not believe.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_4041" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_4042">
               <note type="label">at his</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">At the time of his.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2168" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2169">
               <note type="label">was I … council</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Stanley emphasizes his loyalty to Edward IV at the time Richmond fled, so he was not party to his step-son’s plans.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2170" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2171">
               <note type="label">she</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Margaret Beaufort, Richmond’s mother.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2172" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2173">
               <note type="label">relieve … help</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Margaret’s role in Richmond’s rise was well known, and so Stanley does not attempt to suggest otherwise, but claims she offered such support.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2174" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2175">
               <note type="label">sufficiency</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Personal wealth (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>sufficiency</term>, n.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3558" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3559">
               <note type="label">furnish … munition</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard has no proof Stanley funded Richmond but is happy to accuse.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2176" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2177">
               <note type="label">deserts</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Consequences, rewards (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>desert</term>, n.1.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2178" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2179">
               <note type="label">repair</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Reason for travelling.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3560" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3561">
               <note type="label">Cheshire … Lancashire</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Stanley owned estates (Tatton Park, Cheshire and Lathom House, Lancashire) close enough to the coast to justify Richard’s suspicion.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2180" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2181">
               <note type="label">posts pass invisible</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Messages be sent without being noticed.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2182" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2183">
               <note type="label">or else</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">And then I would have to.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2184" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2185">
               <note type="label">intolerable foe</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Richmond.</note>
               <note type="commentary">Richard says if Stanley is able to pass messages (and military intelligence) to his step-son, the threat of Richmond’s influence will become too great to tolerate.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2186" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2187">
               <note type="label">I will not</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">I do not want.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2190" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2191">
               <note type="label">but</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Except.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2192" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2193">
               <note type="label">noisome</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Harmful, injurious, noxious</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>noisome</term>, adj.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2194" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2195">
               <note type="label">pledge</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Surety</quote>, guarantee (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>pledge</term>, v.1.c</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2194" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2195">
               <note type="label">pledge</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Hostage.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">This word occurs four times within fourteen lines and emphasizes the lengths to which Richard will go to frighten him into submission (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2194 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2195"/>; <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3869 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3870"/>; <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3871 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3872"/>; <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3873 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3874"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3562" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3563">
               <note type="label">leaving me here</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard’s imprisonment of George was reported by Holinshed: 
                  <cit><quote>For the lord Stanley was afraid, least if he should seem openly to be a fautor or aider to the earl his son in law, before the day of the battle, that king Richard, which yet utterly did not put in him diffidence and mistrust, would put to some cruel death his son and heir apparent George lord Strange, whom king Richard (as you have heard before) kept with him as a pledge or hostage, to the intent that the lord Stanley his father should attempt nothing prejudicial to him.</quote> 
                  <bibl>(see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Hol#emdTTR3_Hol_anc_138">Chronicles of England, Scotland, and Ireland</ref>)</bibl></cit></note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3564" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3565">
               <note type="label">that … should be</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">I will kill if you betray me.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3566" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3567">
               <note type="label">Advise … cause</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">I must decide what do for my private plan.</note>
               <note type="commentary">Stanley is caught in a dilemma: he must maintain his conspiracy to support Richmond, but at the same time work out a plan to deceive Richard and save George.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2200" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2201">
               <note type="label">faith be kept</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Do as I have promised.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2204" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2205">
               <note type="label">proffer</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Proposal</quote>; perhaps, challenge (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>proffer</term>, n.1</ref>), since neither man trusts the other.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3568" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3569">
               <note type="label">set … defense</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard allows Stanley his liberty with assurance of obedience. Richard takes a calculated risk to keep Stanley as his ally.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2212" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2213">
               <note type="label">stay the hindrance</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Limit the damage (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>hindrance</term>, n.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2214" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2215">
               <note type="label">prevent … power</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">End his campaign with your loyal soldiers.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Vergil reports <quote>about 3.M. were <gap reason="sampling"/> at the battle <supplied>of Bosworth</supplied>, under the conduct of William <supplied>Stanley</supplied></quote>, or three thousand men (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Vergil#emdTTR3_Vergil_anc_110">Anglia Historia</ref>). Stanley’s army nearly doubled Richmond’s, and Richard hoped Stanley would overwhelm Richmond before Bosworth.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2216" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2217">
               <note type="label">of my life</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">On my honor.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2218" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2219">
               <note type="label">otherwise</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>In any other way</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>otherwise</term>, n.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2220" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2221">
               <note type="label">shall … will</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Will be disastrous for you if I do.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2230" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2231">
               <note type="label">letters</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">The stage picture would suggest an emotional embrace between Stanley and the small boy, an affecting image that Richard appears not to understand.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Stanley’s moment of farewell is elaborate enough that Richard suspects he is passing information, or retrieving letters held by the boy for safety.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2232" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2233">
               <note type="label">I have done</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">I am finished (embracing my son).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2234" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2235">
               <note type="label">second … sweet</note>
               <note type="performance" resp="pers:MALO2">An additional embrace is justified.</note>
               <note type="commentary">Stanley believes this the last time he will see George, a sign he has resolved to sacrifice his son.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2236" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2239">
               <note type="label"><supplied>To an attendant</supplied></note>
               <note type="performance" resp="pers:MALO2">Catesby is the only named member to appear in Richard’s court so far in this scene, but he is not available to take George Stanley to prison. A member of Richard’s unnamed retinue as described at the beginning of the scene will take him away.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2240" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2241">
               <note type="label">prison</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard is unequivocal about George’s fate, and immediately sheds the illusion he will care for George until Stanley’s safe return.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3570" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3571">
               <note type="label">prick … dam</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Injuring the child will also hurt the parent.</note>
               <note type="commentary">Faux-proverbial; having George in custody is as effective as directly wounding his father, or, more accurately, his mother, Margaret Beaufort, mother to both George and Richmond.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2244" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2245">
               <note type="label">so excellent</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">I like very much.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3572" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3573">
               <note type="label">Lord … Queen</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The first mention of Lovell, one of Richard’s advisors, and reportedly his closest friend (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:HORR6">Horrox</ref>). Lovell has been sent to sound out the Mother Queen on a proposition of marriage to the princess.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Churchill notes that the act of sending Lovell to the Mother Queen (not a nameless messenger as noted in the chronicles) matches with the same action in Legge. As Churchill points out, in <title level="m">Richardus Tertius</title>, Lovell is Richard’s appointed wooer (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:CHUR5">479</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2246" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2247">
               <note type="label">in good time</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">A colloquial greeting, loosely meaning <soCalled>Lovely to see you</soCalled>.</note> 
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Also: <soCalled>speak of the devil</soCalled>. McMillin and MacLean refer to this as the <quote>see, my lord, where he comes</quote> phenomenon, to announce the next scene’s content before showing the scene, which they characterize as <quote>the Queen’s Men telling the <q>truth</q> at their worst</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:MCMI1">134–135</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2250" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2251">
               <note type="label">suit</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Petition, <gap reason="sampling"/> entreaty</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>suit</term>, n.I.4.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2252" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2253">
               <note type="label">strange</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Distant</quote>, unwilling to concede (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>strange</term>, adj.11.b</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3574" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3575">
               <note type="label">she quickly … consent</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">It appears the Princess’s consent (agreed to by the Mother Queen) was feigned.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2" subtype="onlineOnly">Holinshed records: 
                 <cit><quote><supplied>t</supplied>he messengers, being men both of wit and gravity, so persuaded the queen with great and pregnant reasons, &amp; what with fair and large promises, that she began somewhat to relent, and to give to them no deaf ear; insomuch that she faithfully promised to submit and yield herself fully and frankly to the king’s will and pleasure.</quote> 
                    <bibl>(see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Hol#emdTTR3_Hol_anc_171">Chronicles of England, Scotland, and Ireland</ref>)</bibl>
                 </cit> Ultimately, however, <quote>all men and the maiden herself <supplied>Princess Elizabeth</supplied> <gap reason="sampling"/> detested and abhorred this unlawful, and in manner unnatural copulation</quote> (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Hol#emdTTR3_Hol_anc_173">Chronicles of England, Scotland, and Ireland</ref>). As Edward IV’s children were disinherited for their father’s prior verbal engagement with Lady Eleanor Talbot, this commitment was likely sufficient for Richard’s needs.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2256" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2257">
               <note type="label">leave sanctuary</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Holinshed blames Richard’s messengers for Elizabeth’s decision to leave sanctuary: <cit><quote>And so she putting in oblivion the murder of her innocent children, the infamy and dishonor spoken by the king her husband, the living in adultery laid to her charge, the bastarding of her daughters; forgetting also the faithful promise and open oath made to the countess of Richmond, mother to the earl Henry, blinded by avaricious affection, &amp; seduced by flattering words, first delivered into King Richard’s hands her five daughters, as lambs once again committed to the custody of the ravenous wolf.</quote> 
                     <bibl>(see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Hol#emdTTR3_Hol_anc_169">Chronicles of England, Scotland, and Ireland</ref>)</bibl></cit></note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2258" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2259">
               <note type="label">Be careful … it</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Treat this with great caution.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3576" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3577">
               <note type="label">such … forever</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard correctly identifies Elizabeth as the key to Richmond’s hopes. Richard notes if Richmond can win Elizabeth, he and his heirs will be assured of a successful future.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2262" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2263">
               <note type="label">Nottingham</note>
               
               <note type="commentary" subtype="onlineOnly" resp="pers:MALO2">A city in the Midlands region, which lays 128 miles north of London, and served as a strategic meeting place given its position at a ford over the Trent River. While Nottingham is closer to London than to Scotland, the relative median point made this a logical parley location. This reference compacts the timeline. Consecutive entries in the Acta Regia for September 1484 records <quote>A Treaty of Truce for three Years betwixt England and Scotland; dated September the 20th as above <supplied>meaning, at Nottingham</supplied></quote>. The following entry records the agreement: <quote>ANOTHER for the 1606–1607 Marriage of the Prince of Scotland with Anne of Suffolk; dated September the 21st, as above</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:RAPI1">32</ref>). These treaties were agreed on September 20 and 21, 1484. Catesby notes Buckingham was executed the day before, on 3 November 1483, or ten months prior.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2266" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2267">
               <note type="label">Gog’s</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">God’s (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>Gog</term>, n.1.2</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">This corruption allowed the speaker to blaspheme without using God’s name, and was common in early modern drama. Łodej identifies 215 instances of variants on <quote>gog’s</quote> in plays during the 15th and 16th centuries (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:ODEJ1">372</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2268" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2269">
               <note type="label">greet</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Respectfully hail (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT3"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>greet</term> v.1,3a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3578" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3579">
               <note type="label">Scottish … Rosa</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">The prince of Rothsay and Anne de la Pole, here nicknamed <quote>Rosa</quote> for her adoption of the title <quote>princess of Rothsay</quote> on her betrothal (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:CHUR5">Churchill 452</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Hall notes this alliance was concluded for the benefit of Richard’s sister Anne and the advancement of her line (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:HALL11">Hall 401</ref>). Rothsay was the future King James IV of Scotland, making this connection potentially profitable, but after Richard’s death, the engagement was voided (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:HALL11">Hall 400</ref>), and Anne became a nun. James IV married Henry VIII’s sister Margaret Tudor.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2270" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2271">
               <note type="label">you give … that</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Allow me to decide whether I will share that with you.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2274" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2275">
               <note type="label">somewhat … besides</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">More to tell.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2276" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2277">
               <note type="label">confer</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Agree (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>confer</term>, v.5.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3580" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3581">
               <note type="label">Captain … Castle</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">The son of Walter Blount, 1st Baron Mountjoy, James Blount was commander of the English fortress of Hammes Castle in Calais. Hammes was one of a group of surrounding fortifications which defended Calais and maintained English garrisons and prisoners (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:GRUM1">Grummitt 64</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Blount was Oxford’s jailer at Hammes Castle in Calais. Blount became disaffected with Richard’s rule, and when the like-minded Oxford was commanded to return to England, Blount saw the opportunity to travel with Oxford in order to join up with Richmond.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2280" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2281">
               <note type="label">I take … leave</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">As the bearer of bad news, it is not surprising the messenger tries to exit immediately before he bears Richard’s wrath.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2282" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2283">
               <note type="label">betrayed</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Proven himself disloyal (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>betrayed</term>, adj.1</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary">Blount, as commander of Hammes Castle in Calais, was officially aligned with Richard, but switched to support Richmond.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2284" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2285">
               <note type="label">rebel</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Resist, oppose</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>rebel</term>, v.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3582" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3583">
               <note type="label">prison … pleasures</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">A source of Richard’s paranoia is the defection or rebellion of those he thought loyal. The ease with which Oxford and Blount took advantage of political orders to leave Calais and the exodus to Richmond represented shifting ground below his feet.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2286" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2287">
               <note type="label">complex</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Taking into possession, or laying hold of the kingdom.</note>
               <note type="textual" resp="pers:MALO2">Q has Conflex, a difficult word to justify in this context. In Latin, as a noun <term xml:lang="la">complexus</term> means <gloss>close grip (of an enemy)</gloss>, whereas <term xml:lang="la">confligo</term>, <term xml:lang="la">conflixi</term>, <term xml:lang="la">conflictum</term> means to be in conflict, struggle, fight. Other alternatives considered include <term>conflict</term>, or <gloss>struggle with (an enemy)</gloss> and <term>conflux</term>, meaning <gloss>flow or pour together</gloss>, but neither of these provides a superior reading.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2288" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2289">
               <note type="label">unresisted</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Uninterrupted (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>unresisted</term>, adj.2</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3584" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3585">
               <note type="label">How are … swords</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard knows that, since his own allies betray him, he cannot overcome Richmond.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2290" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2291">
               <note type="label">subversion</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Overthrow, <quote>deposition</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>subversion</term>, n.1.c</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2292" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2293">
               <note type="label">sack</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Plunder, destruction (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>sack</term>, n.2.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2294" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2295">
               <note type="label">of his</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">With an army led by Richmond.</note>
               <note type="commentary">Shakespeare similarly dismisses Richmond’s army (see <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:JOWE5"><title level="m">R3</title> 5.5.43-70</ref>). Field suggests this might be a point of corruption (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:FIEL2">Field 54</ref>) but it is possible to make sense of it as it stands.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2296" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2297">
               <note type="label">neither … shall</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">None of these things will happen.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3586" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3587">
               <note type="label">arm … enemies</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Fight alongside those loyal to me and we will destroy the traitors.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2300" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2301">
               <note type="label">beard</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Defy</quote>, rebuke, thwart (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>beard</term>, v.3</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2302" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2303">
               <note type="label">but one</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Only Richmond concerns Richard, as his last rival for power.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2304" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2305">
               <note type="label">his power … weak</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">He has a small, unimpressive army.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2306" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2307">
               <note type="label">melody</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">The sound of <soCalled>singing</soCalled> bullets in a barrage of gun-fire, alluding to the superior weaponry of Richard’s forces.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2308" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2309">
               <note type="label">his longest home</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">His grave.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2318" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2319">
               <note type="label">England’s</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">In fact, the landing was at Milford Haven, Wales, subsumed into England, but the prince of Wales, heir to the English throne, had been invested separately since 1301.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2320" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2321">
               <note type="label">blissful isle</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Blessed <gap reason="sampling"/> sacred, holy</quote> island (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>blissful</term>, adj.3</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richmond first attempted to invade England in late 1483, but a series of mishaps prevented his landing. This scene depicts his August 1485 first contact with British soil, in Milford Haven, Wales.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2322" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2323">
               <note type="label">forwardness</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Furtherance or advancement (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>forwardness</term>, n.2.b</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2324" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2325">
               <note type="label">sole</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">As brother and uncle to kings and son to a claimant, Richard had a stronger claim, which Richmond dismisses. Henry VI’s death made Richmond head of the Lancastrian line, and his engagement to Elizabeth offered a strengthened claim in the union of a Lancastrian and a Yorkist.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2326" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2327">
               <note type="label">but usurps</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Merely <quote>claim<supplied>s</supplied> <supplied>it</supplied> unduly as <supplied>his</supplied> own</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>usurp</term>, v.I.4.b</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2328" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2329">
               <note type="label">tyranny</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Arbitrary or oppressive exercise of power</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>tyranny</term>, n.3.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2330" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2331">
               <note type="label">succor</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Furnish with military assistance</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>succor</term>, v.2</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2332" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2333">
               <note type="label">guiltless blood craves</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">The blood of the innocent dead demands or importunes.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2334" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2335">
               <note type="label">harmless</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Free from guilt; innocent</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>harmless</term>, adj.3</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2336" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2337">
               <note type="label">countrymen</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Welshmen, and by extension, Britons.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richmond is one of the few kings of England born in Wales, less than nine miles from his landing at Milford Haven. Henry V was also born in Wales, in Monmouth.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2338" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2339">
               <note type="label">dismayed</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Overwhelmed with fear, <gap reason="sampling"/> appalled</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>dismayed</term>, adj.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3588" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3589">
               <note type="label">Our quarrel’s good</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Richmond’s cause is valid and legitimate (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>quarrel</term>, n.2.2.c</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2340" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2341">
               <note type="label">God</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Vergil notes Richmond’s piety: 
                  <cit><quote>he freely gave his help to divine matters, attended services when they were held, and was never prevented from this observance by any press of business or lack of time. He attentively heard Mass twice or thrice daily, and often listened to sermons, assiduously gave charity to the poor, and indeed did so secretly.</quote> <bibl>(<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:VERG2">Sutton, ed. 50</ref>)</bibl>
                  </cit> These actions explain his regular evocation of God.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2342" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2343">
               <note type="label">dangers</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Evil<supplied>s</supplied> that threaten</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>danger</term>, n.4.b</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2346" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2347">
               <note type="label">fear … foes</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Military desperation. Without Stanley’s army, Richmond was outnumbered two to one (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3875 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3876"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2348" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2349">
               <note type="label">daunted</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Dispirited; overcome with fear</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>daunted</term>, adj.2</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2350" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2351">
               <note type="label">attempts</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Efforts to accomplish what is uncertain or difficult (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>attempt</term>, v.I.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2352" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2353">
               <note type="label">Thy foot … shore</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Oxford’s loyalty to Richmond has roots in their Lancastrian origins. Oxford and Blount’s meeting Richmond in Britain is historically inaccurate.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2354" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2355">
               <note type="label">plights</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Undertakes an obligation, pledges his loyalty (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>plight</term>, n.1.3</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2356" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2357">
               <note type="label">underta’en</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Taken in hand; enterprised</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>undertaken</term>, adj.2</ref>). Presumably Oxford’s choice to join Richmond’s cause is a death sentence if the invasion fails to defeat Richard.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2358" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2359">
               <note type="label">resolution</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Removal of doubt</quote>, <quote>certainty, positive knowledge</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>resolution</term>, n.1.III.12.a and n.1.III.12.b</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2360" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2361">
               <note type="label">conqueror</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>One who subdues or subjugates a nation</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>conqueror</term>, n.1.a</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">This is likely not a coincidental link to William the Conqueror, given their similar vectors of conquest across the channel to subdue Britain. Similarly, this phrase helps to consciously elevate Richmond from one with a tenuous claim on the crown to a glorious conqueror.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2362" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2363">
               <note type="label">field</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Battlefield</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>field</term>, n.1.I.ii.6.a</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richmond, determined to win in battle to prove his worth militarily, marched on London to force Richard into combat. He was the last king of England to succeed by such means.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2364" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2365">
               <note type="label">Or lose … right</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Or die in the pursuit of a just cause.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Oxford notes the potential of Richmond’s martyrdom as secondary to the glory of his victory.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2366" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2367">
               <note type="label">right</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Legal or moral entitlement for an action (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>right</term>, n.II.9.d</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary">Oxford’s repetition emphasizes Richmond’s claim.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2368" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2369">
               <note type="label">Maugre</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>In spite of, notwithstanding</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>maugre</term>, prep.1.b</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2370" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2371">
               <note type="label">Richard’s brood</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard’s allies, prideful peacocks (proverbial, <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:TILL1">Tilley P157</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary">Oxford casts doubt on their substance: stylish and showy but holding no fear.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2372" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2373">
               <note type="label">cousin</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Friend, intimate, familiar acquaintance (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>cousin</term>, n.2.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2374" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2376">
               <note type="label">straight to arms</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Immediately to battle.</note> 
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Having landed at Milford Haven, Richmond’s retinue was not under direct threat: as Vergil notes: 
                  <cit><quote>he came unto Wales the 7th day after, a little before sunset, where, entering the haven called Milford, and forthwith going a-land, he took first a place the name whereof is Dale, where he heard that certain companies of his adversaries had had their stations the winter bypassed to have kept him from landing. From thence departing in the break of day he went to Haverford, which is a town not <supplied>ten</supplied> miles from Dale, where he was received with great goodwill of all men.</quote> 
                     <bibl>(see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Vergil#emdTTR3_Vergil_anc_112">Anglia Historia</ref>)</bibl>
                  </cit> By calling the men immediately to arms, even though they were on friendly ground, the playwright compacts time and suggests the battle is near.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3590" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3591">
               <note type="label">God … for us</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Battle cry of the Hundred Years’ War started by Edward III, Richmond’s ancestor. Edward III joined his order of the garter to St. George as an emblem of England.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Beyond the British battle-cry (as used in many history plays including <title level="m">Henry V</title>), Oxford also pairs St. George and God to evoke Richmond’s divine right, and likens Richard to the kind of dragon St. George was supposed to have slain. England is overrun by a monster, and bringing the conquering Richmond to slay him (notwithstanding that Richmond was Welsh, itself represented by the red dragon), calls the hearers to order.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2379" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2380">
               <note type="label">perform</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Accomplish what one <gap reason="sampling"/> has undertaken</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>perform</term>, v.I.2.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3592" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3593">
               <note type="label">valor</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Worth or worthiness</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>valour</term>, n.1.b</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">In fact, the long-exiled Richmond had had little opportunity to show his valor in times past: Bosworth was his first battlefield engagement. He was, however, raised in martial environments, including time spent with the earls of Pembroke (Jasper Tudor and William Herbert), and in his exile in Brittany and France, he would have been exposed to training in horsemanship, hand-to-hand combat, fencing, and military strategy.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3594" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3595">
               <note type="label">unfeignèd</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Sincere, genuine, true</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>unfeigned</term>, adj.1</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Landais refers to the feigned love that characterizes the followers of Richard, given his general unpopularity in Tudor depictions. For example, schoolmaster William Collingbourne nailed a mocking poem to the door of St. Paul’s: <quote>The Cat <supplied>Catesby</supplied>, the Rat <supplied>Ratcliffe</supplied>, and Lovell our dog, / Rule all England under an hog <supplied>Richard</supplied></quote> which, according to Holinshed, <quote>caused Collingbourne to be abbreviated shorter by the head, and to be divided into four quarters (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Hol#emdTTR3_Hol_anc_168">Chronicles of England, Scotland, and Ireland</ref>).</quote> This <soCalled>gang of four animals</soCalled> suggests Richard’s inner circle was reputed as small.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2383" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2384">
               <note type="label">Queen Mother</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The only instance in the play in which the Mother Queen, Elizabeth Woodville, is referred to as <quote>Queen Mother</quote> (for metrical purposes). The Mother Queen has not yet consented that Richmond marry Princess Elizabeth, a major key to preventing any further dissent from Yorkists.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2385" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2386">
               <note type="label">peers have promised</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">On Christmas Day, 1483, Richmond swore publicly to marry Elizabeth of York before the gathered lords (or peers) who, endorsed and supported this means of unifying the houses.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">As reported by Holinshed: 
                  <cit><quote>In the which season the feast of the Nativity of our savior Christ happened, on which day all the English lords went with their solemnity to the chief church of the city, and there each gave faith and promise to other the earl himself first took a corporal oath on his honor, promising that incontinent after he should be possessed of the crown and dignity of the realm of England, he would be conjoined in matrimony with the lady Elizabeth daughter to king Edward the fourth.</quote> 
                     <bibl>(see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Hol#emdTTR3_Hol_anc_166">Chronicles of England, Scotland, and Ireland</ref>)</bibl></cit></note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2387" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2388">
               <note type="label">Edward’s … day</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Landais retrofits the coronation of Edward—obviously a dark day for Lancastrians—by noting that without it, there could be no new alliance between Richmond and Elizabeth. The presence of <mentioned>Edward</mentioned> in this moment is potentially confusing, given the focus on Richmond, soon to become Henry VII. A change from <mentioned>Edward</mentioned> to <mentioned>Richmond</mentioned> might smooth an audience’s understanding of what coronation we mean, but also removes the texture involved with acknowledging the young king’s short reign. Thanks to Jenny Parr for a suggestion of how <mentioned>Richmond</mentioned> might be a logical update in performance.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2391" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2392">
               <note type="label">kind</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Having a claim or right by birth or inheritance; legitimately entitled</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>kind</term>, adj.I.3.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2393" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2394">
               <note type="label">deal</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Manage, restore proper rule.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richmond promises a different style from his predecessors: 
                  <cit><quote>based on the English tradition of limited participatory monarchy. <gap reason="sampling"/> Richmond swears to uphold the laws of the realm, eliminate threats to national stability, and protect the commonwealth provided that the nobles and commons uphold their promise to support his bid for the throne.</quote> 
                     <bibl>(<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:BEZI1">Bezio 72</ref>)</bibl></cit></note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2395" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2396">
               <note type="label">savage</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Uncultivated, rugged, inhospitable (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:THOM6">Thomas, <term>Fĕrăbītĕs</term></ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3596" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3597">
               <note type="label">brambles, … sprigs</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Literally, prickly fast-spreading shrubs; metaphorically, snags, delays, and difficulties, particularly seen as foreign plants choking out the native flora. Sprigs are small decorative treesthat might be ruined by the presence of the aggressive plants that overgrow them.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2399" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2400">
               <note type="label">spring … effect</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Bounce back to their original state.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2401" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2402">
               <note type="label">crossed</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Thwarted</quote>, opposed (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>crossed</term>, adj.3.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2403" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2404">
               <note type="label">prove … commonweal</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Turn out to be exemplary members of the wider state and community (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>commonweal</term>, n.2</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3598" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3599">
               <note type="label">Roman state</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Bezio notes this reference:
                  <cit><quote>invokes hierarchical law rather than the traditional limited monarchy implied by the use <gap reason="sampling"/> of <q>commonweal</q> and <gap reason="sampling"/> <q>council’s rule</q>. Richmond is a mixture of divine right and limited monarchy that claims absolutism, yet acknowledges the power of the commonwealth and council.</quote> 
                     <bibl>(<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:BEZI1">Bezio 72</ref>; see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2403 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2404"/>; <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2405 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2406"/>)</bibl></cit></note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2405" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2406">
               <note type="label">council’s rule</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Concilium plebis, or the plebeian council, which allowed commoners governmental structure through which laws and statutes were passed. Richmond’s suggestion is that this fair and balanced manner of governing honored the Roman state.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2407" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2408">
               <note type="label">And I … sword</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Richmond wishes to take England by force, not policy, in the tradition seen in earlier kings like Richard I, Edward III, Richard II, and Henry IV and V. Henry VI was a reluctant soldier, and so was defeated by Edward IV and his Yorkist supporters.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2409" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2410">
               <note type="label">resolve</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Firm intention</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>resolve</term>, n.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2411" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2412">
               <note type="label">mowed</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Cut down</quote>, cleared (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>mow</term>, v.1.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2413" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2414">
               <note type="label">hinder</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Keep back <gap reason="sampling"/> impede, <gap reason="sampling"/> obstruct</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>hinder</term>, v.2.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2415" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2416">
               <note type="label">long … good</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richmond implies yearning for the oppressed English to support and contribute to his cause, which heightens Richard’s infamy and Richmond’s urgency. This desire works most immediately for Oxford, who chooses to be at Richmond’s side at risk of his own life, and Lord Stanley, despite the threat to his son George.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2417" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2418">
               <note type="label">dangerous’t brunt</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Most damaging <quote>outcry</quote> or alarm (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>brunt</term>, n.1.II.6</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2419" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2420">
               <note type="label">garrison</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Even though Wales was historically Lancastrian-sympathetic, Richard retained defensive troops across the country to protect against invasion by countries trying to take advantage of the Lancastrian-Yorkist divide.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2421" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2422">
               <note type="label">Milford Haven</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">After Richmond’s unsuccessful earlier invasion, Richard’s forces in Wales were on the lookout in Dale Castle, Pembrokeshire, 3 km south of Henry’s eventual landing site. Oxford notes how close they came to detection by landing in Mill Bay, at the mouth of Milford Haven.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2423" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2424">
               <note type="label">daunt</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Dispirit, intimidate (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>daunt</term>, n.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2425" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2426">
               <note type="label">took</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Arrested, captured (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>take</term>, v.I.i.1.b</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2427" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2428">
               <note type="label">duke of Buckingham</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The loss of Buckingham was a serious blow to Richmond: <quote><supplied>w</supplied>hen he had heard these news thus reported, he first sorrowed and lamented his first attempt and setting forward of his friends, and in especial of the nobility, not to have more fortunately succeeded</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:HOLI5">Holinshed 420</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2429" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2430">
               <note type="label">base a mind</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Fearful an attitude (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>base</term>, adj.II.10.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2431" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2432">
               <note type="label">wink</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Turn a blind eye, ignore (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>wink</term>, v.1.5.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2433" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2434">
               <note type="label">secretly put up</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Plotted in secret.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2435" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2436">
               <note type="label">upstarts</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Rivers and Grey.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2437" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2438">
               <note type="label">usurping king</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard’s path to the throne and the disappearance of the princes comprised a favored narrative for Richmond’s propaganda against his predecessor. There appears to be little irony in Oxford’s line given that he has the fullest of intentions of living in England under the next usurping king, Henry VII. The act of invading England and overthrowing an anointed king problematizes the concept of the divine right of kings, however: <quote><supplied>both</supplied> <title level="m">True Tragedy</title> and <title level="m">Richard III</title> suggest the primacy of designation over direct divine intervention, tacitly authorizing rebellion against tyranny by aligning it with the founder of the Tudor dynasty</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:BEZI1">Bezio 72</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2439" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2440">
               <note type="label">resolution</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>A fixed or positive intention</quote> or ambition (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>resolution</term>, n.1.III.11.a</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary">Oxford uses the same word above (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2358 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2359"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2449" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2450">
               <note type="label">Mother Queen</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The Mother Queen holds status as the mother of the princes in the Tower, whose deaths are still unreported. This title is doubly appropriate as mother to Elizabeth, Richmond’s future queen.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2451" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2452">
               <note type="label">Lady Stanley</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Margaret Beaufort, great-grand-daughter of John of Gaunt, duke of Lancaster, bore the future Henry VII only months after the plague death of her husband Edmund Tudor, the first earl of Richmond and half-brother of Henry VI.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Margaret was separated from her son after the ascension of Edward IV, but energetically positioned Richmond (the second earl) as the alternate Lancastrian heir. Margaret’s marriage to Stanley grew from a political union into something more lasting and was cause for Richard’s ultimately justified mistrust in Stanley (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:JONE7">Jones</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2453" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2454">
               <note type="label">Admit him straight</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Bring him immediately into my presence.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2457" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2458">
               <note type="label">our mother</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richmond’s mother lived a life of danger from her association with Anne Neville, Richmond, Stanley, and Elizabeth Woodville. Richmond is right to ask after her well-being, although Richard’s need for Stanley’s assistance bought her more freedom than most.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2459" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2461">
               <note type="label">Lord Talbot</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">The fourth Earl of Shrewsbury, who supported Richmond at Bosworth and lived to advise Henry VIII.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2464" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2465">
               <note type="label">brave band</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">A well-outfitted army of perhaps 500 men (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:FOAR1">Foard and Curry 39</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2466" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2467">
               <note type="label">Lord FitzHerbert</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">The identity of FitzHerbert is in doubt, but his Herbert connection suggests the congregation of notable families to Richmond’s side.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The use of <quote>Fitz</quote> potentially links this man to Sir Richard Herbert, bastard son of the earl of Pembroke. He was the elder brother but as a bastard did not inherit the title and was a notable figure under Henry VII. Alternately, Churchill proposes this man <quote>was really Sir Walter Herbert, second son of the first Herbert Earl of Pembroke</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:CHUR5">456</ref>). The father to both, Sir William Herbert, supported Richard III, but his inaction at Bosworth was telling (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:ROSS3">Ross 211</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2470" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2473">
               <note type="label">Sir Rhys … Thomas</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">A Welsh landowner whom Richard III attempted to woo prior to Richmond’s landing, and demanded ransom of Sir Rhys’s son in exchange for his loyalty (as with George Stanley).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Despite this threat, Sir Rhys has been noted as having greeted Richmond on landing in Wales and fought valiantly for him at Bosworth. Foard and Curry question this account and suggest Sir Rhys kept his decision until much closer to the battle (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:FOAR1">37</ref>). Poet Gut’or Glyn claims Sir Rhys struck the killing blow in Richard’s death (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:GRIF3">Griffith 43</ref>). He was an important figure under both Henry VII and Henry VIII (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:GRIF9">Griffiths</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2474" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2477">
               <note type="label">Sir … Williams</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Fictional Welsh lords, although it is likely that the former is a corruption of Sir Richard ap Thomas, mentioned by Hall (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:HALL11">Hall 411</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2478" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2479">
               <note type="label">Thomas Dennis</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">An unknown gentleman.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Dennis does not physically appear in Q: this is his only mention as a <quote>Western gentleman</quote>. Churchill notes the following piece of trivia: 
                  <cit><quote>in the sketch of the persons occupied in one act of a play on Richard found in the papers of Actor <supplied>Edward</supplied> Alleyn, the same name occurs. <q>3<supplied>rd</supplied> sce<supplied>ne</supplied>. Ansell, Dangr. Denys, Hen. Oxf. Courtney, Bouchier and Grace. To them Rice ap Tho. and his Souldiers</q>. The other names would seem to indicate that here also Dennis was one of those who came to Henry <supplied>Richmond</supplied>.</quote> 
                     <bibl>(<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:CHUR5">456</ref>)</bibl>
                  </cit> While this is unlikely to be a company list from <title level="m">The True Tragedy</title>, the fact that historical names Hen. (Richmond), Oxf. (Oxford), Bouchier (archbishop), and Rice ap Tho. (Rhys ap Thomas) accompany that of Denys (Dennis) suggests that Dennis may be a forgotten figure from history.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2480" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2482">
               <note type="label">Arnold Butler</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Vergil reports that:
                  <cit><quote>the inhabitants of Pembroke, at the same very time, comforted all their dismayed minds, for they gave intelligence, by Arnold Butler, a valiant man, demanding forgiveness of their former offences, that they were ready to serve Jasper, their earl.</quote> 
                     <bibl>(see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Vergil#emdTTR3_Vergil_anc_114">Anglia Historia</ref>; 216)</bibl>
                  </cit> This refers to Jasper Tudor, earl of Pembroke and Richmond’s uncle.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2483" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2484">
               <note type="label">his treachery</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Butler supported both Yorkist and Lancastrian causes, hence Richmond’s reaction. The influence Butler brought, however, meant that in exchange for his pledge, he <quote>only asked for pardon for any service given to the Yorkists, which was readily agreed</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:BREV1">Breverton, n.p</ref>.). Hall notes Butler was:
                  <cit><quote>a valiaunt capitain, which first askynge perdon for his offences before tyme committed against the erle of Richmond, and that obteyned, declared to hym that the penbrochians were ready to serue &amp; geue their attendaunce on their natural and immediate lord lasper erle of Penbrooke.</quote> 
                     <bibl>(<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:HALL11">Hall 410</ref>)</bibl></cit></note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2485" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2486">
               <note type="label">reap up</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Bring up</quote>, expose unpleasantness (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>reap</term>, v.2.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2487" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2488">
               <note type="label">’mends</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Amends, satisfaction (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>amends</term>, n.I.2</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">After Bosworth, Butler went into service under Rhys ap Thomas, where he trained young men in military discipline (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:BREV1">Breverton, n.p.</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3600" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3601">
               <note type="label">Well, my … best</note>
               <note type="textual" resp="pers:MALO2">This transition is awkwardly phrased in Q, aligned as verse but difficult to scan. While there are some structural hints that these may indeed be verse lines, including the abcb rhyme scheme (rest/best) that works if retained as printed, the scansion is unwieldy. Oxford and Richmond speak in prose prior to this line (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3877 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3878"/>), as Richmond prepares to move into his verse-based tactics (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3879 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3880"/>). The meter is so consistent later in this speech that the muddiness in this section suggests that this is a hangover from the prose structure of the previous lines. Secondarily, if we take the repetition of <quote>my lords</quote> as an indication towards a shift in tone (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3881 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3882"/>), then the second <quote>But now my lords</quote> can be read as a redirection into verse (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3879 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3883"/>). While this reading does omit a abcb rhyme, it also separates a very long line (But now … battle best) into a more manageable format (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3879 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3601"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2493" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2494">
               <note type="label">battle</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Richmond’s battalion, either an entire army, <quote>or one of its main divisions</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>battle</term>, n.II.8.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2495" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2496">
               <note type="label">foremost … fight</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">At the front of the battle formation.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Holinshed notes that while Richmond sought Richard, he did not lead from the front, but had his battalions engage Richard’s troops before him: 
                  <cit><quote>While the two fore wards thus mortally fought, each intending to vanquish and convince the other; king Richard was admonished by his explorators and espials, that the earl of Richmond (accompanied with a small number of men of arms) was not far off. And as he approached and marched toward him, he perfectly knew his personage by certain demonstrations and tokens, which he had learned and known of others that were able to give him full information. Now being inflamed with ire, and vexed with outrageous malice, he put his spurs to his horse, and rode out of the side of the range of his battle, leaving the vanguard fighting; and like a hungry lion ran with spear in rest toward him. The earl of Richmond perceived well the king furiously coming toward him, and because the whole hope of his wealth and purpose was to be determined by battle, he gladly proffered to encounter with him body to body, and man to man.</quote> 
                     <bibl>(see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Hol#emdTTR3_Hol_anc_164">Chronicles of England, Scotland, and Ireland</ref>)</bibl></cit></note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2497" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2498">
               <note type="label">vaward</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Foremost divisions, the vanguard or front line (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>vaward</term>, n.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2501" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2502">
               <note type="label">leading … rear</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Command of the rearguard battalions.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">He actually led the vanguard, so these positions are reversed: 
                  <cit><quote>The earl of Oxford in the mean season, fearing least while his company was fighting, they should be compassed and circumvented with the multitude of the enemies, gave commandment in every rank, that no man should be so hardy, as to go above ten foot from the standard. Which commandment once known, they knit themselves together, and ceased a little from fighting. The adversaries suddenly abashed at the matter, and mistrusting some fraud and deceit, began also to pause and left striking; and not against the wills of many, which had rather had the king destroyed, than saved, and therefore they fought very faintly, or stood still.</quote> 
                     <bibl>(see Holinshed <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Hol#emdTTR3_Hol_anc_162">Chronicles of England, Scotland, and Ireland</ref>)</bibl></cit></note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2505" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2507">
               <note type="label">by in quarters</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Stand in reserve, ready to join.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richmond’s well-organised reserve actions were crucial to his success.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2508" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2509">
               <note type="label">scouts</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Soldiers ahead of the main battle to gain information (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>scout</term>, n.4.2.a</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richmond’s commands seem dependent on such reconnaissance, but also anticipate the terrain that had, at this point, not yet been decided upon. Market Bosworth was settled long after Richmond’s landing in Wales. Without a sense of terrain, these tactics are impossible to rely upon.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3602" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3603">
               <note type="label">your bowmen … scatter</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Disperse the archers to offer shifting targets.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Holinshed notes: 
                  <cit><quote>When king Richard saw the earl’s company was past the marsh; he did command with all haste to set upon them. Then the trumpets sounded, and the soldiers shouted, and the king’s archers courageously let fly their arrows. The earl’s bowmen stood not still, but paid them home again.</quote> 
                     <bibl>(see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Hol#emdTTR3_Hol_anc_160">Chronicles of England, Scotland, and Ireland</ref>)</bibl></cit></note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2512" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2513">
               <note type="label">our promised friends</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Stanley’s troops.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2514" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2515">
               <note type="label">skirmish</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Close fighting between two bodies of troops (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>skirmish</term>, n.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2516" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2517">
               <note type="label">countermarch</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Reversal of direction in battle, to execute a pincer move on the enemy (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>countermarch</term>, n.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2518" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2519">
               <note type="label">casting</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Throwing of an arrow (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:HOWL1">Howlet, <term>Castynge or throwynge of an arowe, batte, or Iauelyn</term></ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary">His description suggests plans for a flanking barrage.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2520" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2521">
               <note type="label">bravado</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Display in the face of the enemy, to offer battle</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>bravado</term>, n.1.b</ref>).</note>
           </note>
   
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2522" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2523">
               <note type="label">Atherstone</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Atherstone Priory, some eight miles distant from Market Bosworth.</note>
               <note type="commentary">Richmond spent the night at the Three Tuns Hostelry prior to the Battle of Bosworth and took communion there.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2524" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2525">
               <note type="label">Lichfield</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Lichfield is a cathedral city in Staffordshire, 16 miles north of Birmingham.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The itinerary here is out of order: in fact, Richmond visited Lichfield on August 20, where he met Stanley: <cit><quote>And after that the earl and he had communed no long time together; he reverted to his soldiers whom he had assembled together to serve the earl: which from thence departed to Lichfield, and lay without the walls in his camp all the night.</quote> 
                     <bibl>(see Holinshed <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Hol#emdTTR3_Hol_anc_158">Chronicles of England, Scotland, and Ireland</ref>)</bibl>
               </cit> Richmond then traveled east from Lichfield to Atherstone on August 21, and on August 22 to Market Bosworth.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2526" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2527">
               <note type="label">nearer London</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Richmond <quote>intended to pass over the river of Severn at Shrewsbury, and so to pass directly to the city of London</quote> (Holinshed 435) to challenge Richard. Market Bosworth was the point the armies met.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3604" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3605">
               <note type="label">Where shall … king?</note>
                <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The Page is loyal, but here betrays his king’s difficulty with conscience. Shakespeare dramatizes Richard’s guilt through a ghostly dream sequence (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:JOWE5"><title level="m">R3</title> 5.4.98–186</ref>). Here agitation transfers to the Page, who is unable to express sadness in the king’s presence. Walsh places this reaction in opposition to the Page’s earlier attitude as evidence the Page offers two responses to Richard, which <quote>gives the audience alternate choices against which to formulate their own response to the title figure and, by extension, the play itself</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:WALS2">85</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2534" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2535">
               <note type="label">sore-troubled</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Sorely upset, greatly agitated.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2536" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2537">
               <note type="label">diadem</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">The crown and its authority (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>diadem</term>, n.2</ref>).</note>
           </note>
 
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2538" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2539">
               <note type="label">better … man</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Would be better off were he a commoner, or at least not in public office. Richard’s mental state derives from his methods of becoming king, a burden too great to bear.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2540" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2541">
               <note type="label">looks are ghastly</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Demeanor is grim, horrible, terrible, fearful (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:COTG1">Cotgrave, <term>Hideusement</term></ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">This same term is used to describe the princes’ murderers (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1844 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1845"/>). Richard is turning self-destructively into his own victim by replicating the experience of his nephews.</note>
           </note>
       
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2542" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2545">
               <note type="label">privy … heart</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Most intimate, deepest recesses of his being (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>privy</term>, adj.I.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2546" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2547">
               <note type="label">deep-fetched</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Most intimately buried, deep-seated, personal (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>deep-fetched</term>, adj.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2548" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2549">
               <note type="label">chamber</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Private quarters (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>chamber</term>, n.I.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3606" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3607">
               <note type="label">moves … company</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Compels me to grieve too so he does not grieve alone. Whether the Page is commanded or inspired to bewail Richard’s guilt is not stated, but his general demeanor suggests sympathy, or potentially fear for himself if he doesn’t sympathize with his king.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2550" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2551">
               <note type="label">stir</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Make a sudden noise or movement (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>stir</term>, v.I.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2552" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2553">
               <note type="label">whatsoe’er he be</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">No matter who it is.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3608" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3609">
               <note type="label">the just … sins</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">The expected punishment God has wrought for his actions.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3610" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3611">
               <note type="label">unkindly murderèd</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Killed in an underhanded or treacherous way.</note>
               <note type="commentary">Shakespeare dramatizes each victim as judgmental ghosts  (see <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:JOWE5"><title level="m">R3</title> 5.4.98.s.d.–5.4.186</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3612" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3613">
               <note type="label">he in justice</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">God justifiably.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2554" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2555">
               <note type="label">at bed … board</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Both in sleep and waking.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2556" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2557">
               <note type="label">what noise</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">It is uncertain what kind of noise the Page hears to announce the men as they enter. Whether it is a clamor of laughter, conversation, or the tramp of feet, it is certainly loud enough to distract the Page.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2564" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2565">
               <note type="label">camp</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Campaign, collection of troops (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>camp</term>, n.2.I.2.a</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">This does not imply a fixed campsite: the defectors will try to intercept Richmond’s forces as they march towards Bosworth.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2566" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2567">
               <note type="label">left to serve</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Abandoned the service of.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2572" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2573">
               <note type="label">these … villains</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Deserters.</note>
               <note type="commentary">The Page sees Richard’s chances dwindle as he sees the troops Richard depended on begin to switch sides.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3614" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3615">
               <note type="label">make no … man</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Think no more of you than an ordinary man.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2576" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2577">
               <note type="label">as duty binds</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">As I am obliged to do.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2578" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2579">
               <note type="label">advertisements</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Notifications, warnings (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>advertisement</term>, n.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2580" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2581">
               <note type="label">unjust proceedings</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Traitorous, immoral (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>unjust</term>, adj.1.a</ref>) <quote>action<supplied>s</supplied>, <gap reason="sampling"/> behavior<supplied>s</supplied></quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>proceedings</term>, n.2.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2582" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2583">
               <note type="label">lifted out</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Removed (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>lift</term>, v.11.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2584" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2585">
               <note type="label">left … all</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richmond. Richard’s opinion of Richmond as a minor threat was his downfall.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2586" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2587">
               <note type="label">happened</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Occurring, going on (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>happen</term>, v.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2592" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2593">
               <note type="label">Oxford</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Oxford’s remonstration with Stanley does not appear in the chronicles, but does appear in Legge’s <title level="m">Richardus Tertius</title>, suggesting the playwright’s familiarity with the earlier play (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:CHUR5">Churchill 477</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2594" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2595">
               <note type="label">it may … be</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">I will not allow it.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2596" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2597">
               <note type="label">my father</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">My step-father; see the earlier discussion (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3895 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3896"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3616" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3617">
               <note type="label">have … yourself</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Please be careful.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2598" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2599">
               <note type="label">scouting abroad</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Reconnaissance, spying.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2600" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2601">
               <note type="label">disguised</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richmond has left the safety of his camp, cloaked, to walk in solitude. This action matches the similar impulses of Shakespeare’s Henry V (see <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:LOUG5"><title level="m">H5</title> 4.1</ref>) and Richard III (see <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:JOWE5"><title level="m">R3</title> 5.4.200</ref>), who linger around their camps.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3618" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3619">
               <note type="label">mark</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Target an archer aims at (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>mark</term>, n.1.VI.23.a</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The fifth instance of this repeated imagery (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3826 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3827"/>; <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3828 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3829"/>; <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3435 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1238"/>; <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1411 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1412"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2602" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2603">
               <note type="label">last night’s absence</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richmond strikes out without notice, which leaves his soldiers concerned he has deserted.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2604" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2605">
               <note type="label">amazement</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Bewilderment</quote>, doubt, paralysis (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>amazement</term>, n.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3620" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3621">
               <note type="label">more liker … fight</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Would be more likely to surrender or run than to stand and face the enemy.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2606" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2607">
               <note type="label">aloof off</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Separately, apart</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>aloof</term>, adv.2.a</ref>) from the others.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2608" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2609">
               <note type="label">confess myself bound</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Acknowledge I am beholden.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2610" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2611">
               <note type="label">especial care</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Particular concern.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2618" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2619">
               <note type="label">descry</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Catch sight of</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>descry</term>, v.1.I.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2622" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2623">
               <note type="label">thus forward</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">So far advanced.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2624" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2625">
               <note type="label">laudable enterprise</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Valiant undertaking.</note>
               <note type="commentary">Stanley makes it clear he strongly supports Richmond’s claim.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2626" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2627">
               <note type="label">omitting vain circumstances</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Ceasing to speak of useless matters.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2628" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2629">
               <note type="label">purpose</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Reason I am here (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>purpose</term>, n.2</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2630" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2631">
               <note type="label">much matter</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">A great deal of important information.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2632" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2633">
               <note type="label">crave leave of</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Request an absence from.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2634" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2635">
               <note type="label">furiously</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Violently, vehemently</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>furiously</term>, adv.2</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2636" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2637">
               <note type="label">began … charge me</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Made an accusation.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2638" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2639">
               <note type="label">practices and drifts</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Movements and tactics.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2642" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2643">
               <note type="label">only of purpose</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">For the sole reason.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2644" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2645">
               <note type="label">But omitting this</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">These facts aside.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">An extremely indelicate, crude question, given the strain that George’s arrest has placed on Stanley.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2646" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2647">
               <note type="label">shall … help</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Can I count on your army?</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2648" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2649">
               <note type="label">I cannot</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Stanley’s reaction hews to the traditional view of Stanley as non-committal, although he does tend towards Richmond in general.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3622" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3623">
               <note type="label">as I … thee</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">While I will not fight to aid Richard, nor will I fight alongside you.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2650" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2651">
               <note type="label">bootless</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Hopeless, pointless (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>bootless</term>, adj.1.2</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2652" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2653">
               <note type="label">presumed</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Anticipated, expected</quote>, counted on (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>presumed</term>, adj.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3624" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3625">
               <note type="label">the time … troublesome</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">There are more important things happening at the moment.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3626" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3627">
               <note type="label">tend to follow</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Waste time bothering with.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2656" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2657">
               <note type="label">expect no</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Do not trouble themselves with.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2658" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2659">
               <note type="label">gristle</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>A tender or delicate person</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>gristle</term>, n.3</ref>). This word refers to his young malleable bones, which indicates he’s a particularly delicate boy. The point is that he is merely a young boy, not a youth or adult.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2660" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2661">
               <note type="label">goes … heart</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Saddens me.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3628" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3629">
               <note type="label">molehill … mountain</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richmond adapts the familiar adage to <quote>make a mountain from a molehill</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:TILL1">Tilley M1035</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2662" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2663">
               <note type="label">contrary</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Hostile</quote>, brash (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>contrary</term>, adj.3.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2664" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2665">
               <note type="label">chiefest … thee</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Majority of his men will likely defect to your side.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2666" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2667">
               <note type="label">simple</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Foolish</quote>, witless (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>simple</term>, adj.I.4.b</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2668" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2669">
               <note type="label">at my pleasure</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">When I so choose.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3630" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3631">
               <note type="label">on thy … encountering</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">To your side with very little combat.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3632" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3633">
               <note type="label">Bosworth</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Market Bosworth is a small community in Leicestershire, where Richmond’s eastward progress met Richard’s western progress. The battle took place in an open field south of the town.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2672" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2673">
               <note type="label">Yet</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>In addition</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>yet</term>, adv.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3634" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3635">
               <note type="label">twenty thousand</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Estimates vary: Holinshed reports that Richard came with a <quote>huge host</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:HOLI5">Holinshed 438</ref>). Richard’s army has been estimated between 20,000 to 60,000, although the latter is likely exaggerated. Vergil conservatively pegs Richmond’s group at 5,000 (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Vergil#emdTTR3_Vergil_anc_116">Anglia Historia</ref>), but bolstered with Stanley’s force of 3,000 to 26,000, depending on source (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:FOAR1">Foard and Curry 39</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2676" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2677">
               <note type="label">hoping upon</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Depending on the inclusion of.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3636" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3637">
               <note type="label">The more … obtained</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">The greater the challenge, the greater the glory in victory.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2678" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2679">
               <note type="label">attaining</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Reaching</quote>, achieving (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>attaining</term>, n.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2680" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2681">
               <note type="label">Richmond, … George</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">A repetition of Richmond’s earlier English and Welsh imagery (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3590 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3591"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2682" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2683">
               <note type="label" xml:lang="la">Quisqam … bonum</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Who rejoices in power? O, false boon!</quote> A paraphrased quotation from Seneca’s <title level="m">Oedipus</title> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:SENE3">Seneca 6</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" subtype="onlineOnly" resp="pers:MALO2">This comment on Richard’s hubris is set apart from the rest of Richmond’s speech, which calls its function into question. This quotation could have been inserted for the benefit of readers (meaning that it is not spoken on stage), or, much more likely, was spoken by Richmond at the end of his scene. Latin is spoken by Clarence’s Ghost and is repeated by Truth and Poetry in the play’s Prologue, which indicates that the playwright expects the audience to understand the phrasing. The phrasing in Q is slightly corrupted from the original quote in Seneca (<quote xml:lang="la">quisquamne regno gaudet? ô fallax bonum!</quote>): the question mark is replaced with a comma, which alters the phrase to <gloss>whoever rejoices in power, O false boon!</gloss> or, more conversationally: <gloss>What a false boon it is to he who rejoices in power</gloss>. Tangentially, Ullyot examines Seneca’s influence in Legge’s Ricardus Tertius (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:ULLY1">111–114</ref>), which predates this play. Griffin notes Legge’s play, and its Senecan references, was familiar to the author of <title level="m">The True Tragedy</title> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:GRIF2">69</ref>). Greg notes that the use of <quote>ô</quote> is irregular, as the corresponding word was <quote>Roman in <supplied>the</supplied> original</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:GREG11">1929, x</ref>). Greg (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:GREG11">1929, x</ref>) notes that Field was responsible for the restoration of this Latin to this phrasing. Given the quotation from Seneca and Q’s separation of this line from the body of the previous speech, this line has been rendered as verse. Churchill proposes this line is a decorative preface to the coming scene, a <quote>motto to its contents</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:CHUR5">459</ref>), but this is impossible to play without assigning it to an actor, so it remains here to close Richmond’s scene.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2688" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2689">
               <note type="label">hell … crown</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">A thematic continuation of Richard’s earlier speech about the stresses and pressures of kingship, and guilt over murders in his wake (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2013 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2014"/>). At this stage Richard has seen more allies defect and the reality of invasion increase. The scene is now more desperate.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2690" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2691">
               <note type="label">wretched crews</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Miserable, pathetic troops.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2692" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2693">
               <note type="label">foe</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Members of Richmond’s army, largely defectors.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2694" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2695">
               <note type="label">horror … past</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Memory of past violent actions and murders that got me where I am.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2696" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2697">
               <note type="label">gaping</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">With mouths open wide in agony (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>gape</term>, v.5</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2698" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2699">
               <note type="label">reaching</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Striving, competing.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2700" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2701">
               <note type="label">complains</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Wails, moans (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>complain</term>, v.I.3.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2702" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2703">
               <note type="label">pressing</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Urgently calling for (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>pressing</term>, adj.2.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3638" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3639">
               <note type="label">The sun … revenge</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard describes a series of chaotic images: sun, moon, and stars seeming to attack; planets abandoning their proper order; prophetic birds foretelling doom; and both newborn animals and herds of mature cattle crying out against Richard’s rule.</note> 
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard’s natural, animal, and astrological images escalate to encapsulate his feeling that all the world wishes revenge on him, as he transforms everything he sees into an indictment of his guilt. The unwinding verse structure transitions from end-stopped blank verse: 
                 <cit><quote>the form which madness cannot sustain. Prose takes over instead as Richard’s mind gives way—prose which does not entirely lose contact with iambic pentameter, but which breaks through the regularity which the writers for the Queen’s Men assigned to blank verse.</quote> 
                    <bibl>(<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:MCMI1">McMillin and MacLean 152</ref>)</bibl>
                 </cit> Richard’s list-making indicates a lost grasp on his situation and sanity.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2704" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2705">
               <note type="label">eclipseth</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Is hidden by the shadow of the sun.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard’s assertion that such chaos is a nightly occurrence exaggerates what he interprets as foreboding omens. See earlier Richard’s regular shadow imagery (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_658 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_659"/>; <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3897 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3898"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2706" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2707">
               <note type="label">sorrow</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Cry mournfully.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2708" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2709">
               <note type="label">silly</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Helpless, defenseless (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>silly</term>, adj.II.2</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2712" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2713">
               <note type="label">Whole heads</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Entire herds (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>head</term>, n.1.I.ii.10.b</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2714" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2715">
               <note type="label">deserved revenge</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Earned punishment for my actions.</note>
               <note type="commentary">Richard accepts he has sinned sufficiently to justify that the world wishes him to be punished.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2716" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2717">
               <note type="label">In company</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Among friends (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>company</term>, n.2.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2718" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2719">
               <note type="label">doubt</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Mistrust</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>doubt</term>, v.I.2.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2720" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2721">
               <note type="label">uncouth</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Unpleasant, uncomfortable</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>uncouth</term>, adj.5.b</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2722" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2723">
               <note type="label">refrains</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Represses (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>refrain</term>, v.2.a</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary">The sentence is inverted: <q>My head represses sleep <supplied>rest</supplied></q>.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3640" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2725">
               <note type="label">far worse … death</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard claims his life of fear is worse than a thousand deaths.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2726" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2727">
               <note type="label">How, wast … said</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Wait, did I just say death?</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2728" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2729">
               <note type="label">never-dying mind</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Undying memory; Richard’s legacy is his certainty of being remembered amongst his followers.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2730" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2731">
               <note type="label">pressing so near</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Getting so close to me.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2734" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2735">
               <note type="label">our friends</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Lord Stanley.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2736" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2737">
               <note type="label">quite laid abed</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Disabled, immobilized (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>abed</term>, adv.2</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2738" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2739">
               <note type="label">Lovell</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">By sharing lines with Lovell, his close associate, Richard manages to work Lovell up to the same rage he himself feels, so that Lovell curses those who betrayed Richard with lies. Richard is so far gone that he raves to himself until brought back to his senses enough to abuse Lovell for his presumption.</note>
           </note>
   
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2740" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2741">
               <note type="label">light … heads</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Descend on you (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>light</term>, v.1.II.7</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2742" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2743">
               <note type="label">untruth</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Lack of loyalty (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>untruth</term>, n.1</ref>), potentially <quote>lack of faith</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>untruth</term>, n.2</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2746" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2747">
               <note type="label">Now … come</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard’s restoration to is evocative of the same moment in Shakespeare (see <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:JOWE5"><title level="m">R3</title> 5.4.199</ref>), and indirectly, Cibber’s <quote>Conscience avaunt, Richard’s himself again</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:CIBB3">Cibber 5.4</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3641" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3642">
               <note type="label">Sour … delight</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Sweet things that delight Richard are sour to his enemies.</note>
                  <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Lovell mixes his terms and confuses the difference between good and evil, as a further sign of chaos. Lovell invokes scripture: <quote>Woe unto them that speak good of evil, and evil of good, which put darkness for light, and light for darkness, that put bitter for sweet, and sweet for sour</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:THEB6">GNV, Isaiah 5.20</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3643" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3644">
               <note type="label">great … overthrow</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">It would need to be a mighty army that could challenge your power.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3645" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3646">
               <note type="label">is not … me</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Does not bother me as much as it does to see my former allies defect.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2750" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2751">
               <note type="label">rest yourself content</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Be reassured.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3647" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3648">
               <note type="label">power enough</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">A large enough army.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2754" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2755">
               <note type="label">set … land</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Cross the Channel into Britain.</note>
               <note type="commentary">Richmond’s daring to set foot on British soil is an escalation Richard will not brook; that action is very different from Richmond’s threats from Brittany, which Richard did not take seriously.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2756" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2757">
               <note type="label">straggling fugitives</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Weak outcasts.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2758" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2759">
               <note type="label">participate the cause</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Share (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>participate</term>, v.3.a</ref>) the reason (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title>OED</title> <term>cause</term>, n.I.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2762" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2763">
               <note type="label">buzzard</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Worthless fool (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>buzzard</term>, n.1.2.a</ref>). Also, the irritating <soCalled>buzz</soCalled> Richard hears in Lovell’s interjections.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2764" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2765">
               <note type="label">by post … hell</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Have you killed.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2768" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2769">
               <note type="label">Yet again, villain</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">A darkly humorous moment, eliciting a <soCalled>nervous titter</soCalled> from the audience and those on stage, where Richard believes Lovell has dared speak even after he has been threatened with death for any further noise.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2770" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2771">
               <note type="label">comes</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Approaches (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>come</term>, v.I.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2772" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2773">
               <note type="label">left … Stanley</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Stanley’s gamble is based on his knowledge that his second son, Sir Edward Stanley, could still inherit his estate as the earl of Derby.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2774" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2775">
               <note type="label">bastard’s</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">George Stanley’s.</note>
               <note type="commentary">Richard’s epithet is a non-literal insult: George was born several years after his parents’ marriage, and so is rightful heir.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2776" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2778">
               <note type="label">haunt … heels</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Tenaciously follow him.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2779" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2780">
               <note type="label">I butcher … dead</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">I will kill George Stanley in revenge for the dead soldiers that will result from his father’s decision.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2781" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2782">
               <note type="label">his sire</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Stanley.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2783" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2784">
               <note type="label">Leave … now</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Catesby’s rebuke is surprising, given Richard’s instability and how apt he is to lash out. This indicates the collective stress that this invasion is causing. Catesby’s appeal is repeated by Shakespeare (see <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:JOWE5"><title level="m">R3</title> 5.5.73–74</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2785" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2786">
               <note type="label">foe … foes</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Don’t talk to me of enemies.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2787" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2788">
               <note type="label">guiltless blood</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Innocence:  Lovell displays a moral concern by acknowledging George’s youth.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2789" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2790">
               <note type="label">greatly injured him</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Is directly responsible for his death.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2791" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2792">
               <note type="label">Bonds … assigned</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">promise and compact that he swore to.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3649" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3650">
               <note type="label">What though … resign</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Even if you have decided on the outcome and have taken his titles.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Lovell argues killing George will make no difference to Stanley.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2795" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2796">
               <note type="label">In doing … justice</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Given that Richard has just threatened him, Lovell’s resistance over George is a striking moment of tension where he commits to what is just and good. As Richard appeals to his retinue, he finds resistance from Lovell, but also from the Page and Catesby, who stand in solidarity to refuse their commands.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2797" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2798">
               <note type="label">neglect his word</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Broken his promise.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2799" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2802">
               <note type="label">impartial … sword</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Has rendered his past neutrality irrelevant by his aggressive actions.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2805" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2806">
               <note type="label">Draw you cuts</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Draw straws, make a decision (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>cut</term> n.1.1.a</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary">The Page and Lovell are compelled to draw cuts over the matter, but Richard’s immediate command to Catesby suggests that the Page and Lovell do not do as commanded.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2811" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2812">
               <note type="label">we are … one</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Not a literal assessment of their army sizes, but a gambling term, to suggest that Richard’s forces are more likely to prevail. Richard’s odds are a crutch to which he returns with reassurance that, even without Stanley, he still commands the larger force.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2813" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2814">
               <note type="label">promotion</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Advancement, preferment (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>promotion</term>, n.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3651" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3652">
               <note type="label">already … than he</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Currently with the king’s power, a proven ruler, unlike Richmond.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2815" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2816">
               <note type="label">Lovell, Catesby</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The addition of the Page and other attendants to this scene paints a vivid picture as Richard excludes all but his two closest attendants in this appeal. The Page is either actively excluded for his disobedience or is ignored for his unimportance.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2817" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2818">
               <note type="label">join … devoutly</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Gather in prayer. A final desperate spiritual gesture from a man resigned to damnation.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2819" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2820">
               <note type="label">divide … amongst you</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard’s desperation extends to promising riches and fortune, and obliquely evokes Leir’s division of his kingdom.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2821" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2822">
               <note type="label">dog</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">An allusion to a nickname for Catesby (as in cat and dog), and Lovell’s family symbol of a wolf, which earned him the epithet <quote>the dog</quote> in Collingbourne’s doggerel poem (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3899 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3900"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2823" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2824">
               <note type="label">courage</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Confidence, boldness</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>courage</term>, n.3.d</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3653" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3654">
               <note type="label">join … only</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard’s bravura reaches its peak, as he challenges double the population of England, Europe, Christendom, and the entire world, vowing he will not surrender until death.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3655" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3656">
               <note type="label">by death … fame</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">I will not die for spite, which is a childish reaction: but even were the devil to claim my crown, I would defeat him, and even if Fortune herself had determined that I were to fall, then death would ensure my immortality.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard’s thoughts jump around in this speech, his mental turmoil betrayed by fragmented statements and partial thoughts. His indecision about how he will accept his fate verbalizes the fears in his mind. Despite it all, however, he remains defiant.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2825" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2826">
               <note type="label">decreed</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Determined, resolved, decided (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>decree</term>, v.4</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2827" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2828">
               <note type="label">set … head</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Take vengeance by assuring victory for my opponent at my expense.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2829" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2830">
               <note type="label">latest</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Last, final</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>latest</term>, adj.1</ref>). note repetition (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_57 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3901"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2831" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2832">
               <note type="label">lame … mine</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">My withered arm.</note>
               <note type="commentary">Richard has already accused the Mother Queen and Shore’s wife of conspiring to bewitch his arm (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3884 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3885"/>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">A late reminder of Richard’s disability, apparent to the audience, but rarely noted in dialogue.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2833" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2834">
               <note type="label">rake out</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Violently chase and confuse (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>rake</term>, v.1.3.a</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary">A falconry term: Richard plans to mislead or separate Richmond from his army, thus having the chance to attack him alone. But the term also implies the physical violence of dragging or harrowing the body, as one would <soCalled>scratch, scrape, or claw</soCalled> the ground with the teeth of an iron rake (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:THOM6">Thomas, <term>Scalpo</term></ref>), weeding out the enemy.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3657" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3658">
               <note type="label">eat … poison me</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">This final gruesome image indicates the depth of Richard’s hatred, a berserker-like depth of fanaticism in victory. These words show Richard’s mental state as he prepares for and enters the battle, which occurs in next scene.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3659" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3660">
               <note type="label">Sirs … yourselves</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard’s final, defiant direction calls for loyalty or death: those who do not support him are better to kill themselves.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2837" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2838">
               <note type="label">resolute</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Constant, firm, steadfast (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:FLOR1">Florio, <term>Costante</term></ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary">Richard uses this word for the first time in this play since his brother, Edward IV, used it twice on his deathbed (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_177 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_178"/>). In both cases, the kings refer to unshakeable conviction as a challenge to their followers.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2843" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2844">
               <note type="label">The battle enters</note>
               <note type="performance" resp="pers:MALO2">Shorthand for an extended, choreographed, skilled scene of stage combat. The Queen’s Men were expert swordsmen, and this stage direction indicates a prolonged entrance of soldiers to the fray. This would have been a chaotic, dangerous, noisy, thrilling scene for the audience, who get a privileged view of the battle, perhaps with isolated <soCalled>face-offs</soCalled> between named characters and soldiers. As the battle progressed, characters might be <soCalled>wounded</soCalled> or <soCalled>killed</soCalled>, necessitating exits or the creation of human obstacles as bodies fell. As the action climax to the play, this would have been a very busy scene, and might have continued for some minutes. For further insight into the Queen’s Men’s expertise with swords, see Roberts-Smith, 2007.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">McMillin and MacLean offer their perspective that this phrase is:
                  <cit><quote>shorthand description for the staging of the fight in which Richard is wounded, but because the scene is wordless, the wounding is not conveyed in the text: the entrance direction’s <q>Richard wounded</q> names what will happen during the wordless battle</quote> 
                     <bibl>(<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:MCMI1">129</ref>)</bibl>
                  </cit> Further, rather than indicate corruption or text piracy, McMillin and MacLean propose this shorthand as <quote>the way the Queen’s Men worked out their battle scenes, by pantomime and wordlessness</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:MCMI1">130</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2845" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2846">
               <note type="label">A horse … horse!</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The origin of this most recognizable line in this and Shakespeare’s play (see <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:JOWE5"><title level="m">R3</title> 5.6.7</ref>). As noted below, Richard refused conveyance for retreat (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3902 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3903"/>). Wilson suggests Hall’s <quote>they brought to hym a swyfte and a light horse to conuey hym away</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:WILS15">420</ref>) and Peele’s <title level="m">The Battle of Alcazar</title>: <quote>A horse, a horse, villain, a horse / That I make take the riuer straight and flie</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:WILS15">306</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3661" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3662">
               <note type="label">fly, … life</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The Page deserves credit for doing what he said he’d do: he serves his king, without giving opinions on which side is legitimate or has more right. There is no indication that the Page and Richard are alone on stage, although no other characters are named. If this scene includes enemy soldiers attacking Richard (perhaps repelled by the Page or Richard himself), these lines would be spoken in a shout, or at least with great urgency. Clearly the Page has identified an opportunity for Richard to leave the field, so there cannot be a large collection of extras on stage, but they are still amid the fray. As Vergil notes (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Vergil#emdTTR3_Vergil_p7">Anglia Historia</ref>), immediately prior to Richard’s death, he had been almost entirely abandoned by his men, leaving the Page as his last remaining ally.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">As Wilson observes (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:WILS15">305</ref>), this was likely inspired by Hall: <quote><supplied>Richard’s followers</supplied> began to suspect fraud and to smell treason, and not only exhorted but determinately advised him to save himself by flight</quote> (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Hall#emdTTR3_Hall_anc_99">The Union of the Two Noble and Illustre Families of Lancaster and York</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2849" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2850">
               <note type="label">Look … would fly</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Holinshed records: 
                  <cit><quote>And when the loss of the battle was imminent and apparent, they brought to him a swift and a light horse, to convey him away. He which was not ignorant of the grudge and ill will that the common people bore toward him, casting away all hope of fortunate success and happy chance to come, answered (as men say) that on that day he would make an end of all battles, or else there finish his life. Such a great audacity and such a stomach reigned in his body.</quote> 
                     <bibl>(see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Hol#emdTTR3_Hol_anc_156">Chronicles of England, Scotland, and Ireland</ref>)</bibl></cit></note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2853" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2856">
               <note type="label">watery … roll on</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Let the rains continue.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard, close to defeat, sees his own fate in the state of the field, mud, gloom and rain which bogged down the battle, exhausted the troops, and ultimately made decisive Stanley’s intervention with a fresh battalion.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2857" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2858">
               <note type="label">cheerful sound</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Willing; ungrudging</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>cheerful</term>, adj.3</ref>) fall, swoon (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>sound</term>, n.4.1.a</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary">The clouds that lour over the battlefield are oppressive, and press Richard into the waiting earth, but he is happy to die a fighting king, defending his own until the last.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2859" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2860">
               <note type="label">thy sun</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">An allusion to the Plantagenet ensign, the rising sun. Richard uses this reference as a pathetic fallacy of gloom, incorporating the idea of a setting sun and a loss of life and kingship.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2861" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2862">
               <note type="label">feathers … head</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">As a garland in victory (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>feather</term>, n.II.8.b</ref>), earned on the battlefield but feather or plume worn afterwards on the hat. Many soldiers would self-adorn with feathers, faking past valor which often earned the label <soCalled>fool or poseur</soCalled>. Richard recognizes his folly in pretending he can still win, and explicitly says the birds dare not come near him. For Richard, his best hope is the one he ends with—telling his tale in hell.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2863" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2864">
               <note type="label">Fortune</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard knows, by his earlier appeal to Fortune, that he must face the coming fall, now beyond his control (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3886 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3887"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2865" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2866">
               <note type="label">quiet crown</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Kingship unthreatened by potential usurpers.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2867" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2868">
               <note type="label">Fates deny</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>In later Greek and Roman mythology,</quote> the Fates were three goddesses (Clotho, Lachesis, and Atropos; later Nona, Decuma, and Morta) <quote>supposed to determine the course of human life</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>fate</term>, n.2.b</ref>). Unlike Fortune, who controlled good luck, the Fates determined an overall mortal plan.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard recognizes his life is no longer in his own hands. As the last time we see Richard alive on stage, the audience is left with a reflective, cathartic moment of humanity, showing the bravery and tenacity of a man who had lost touch with these characteristics as he rose to power. Now, he appears focused on the way in which he embraces his end.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2869" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2870">
               <note type="label">golden thoughts</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Ambitious desires.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2871" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2872">
               <note type="label">daunted</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Tamed, subdued, brought under control</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>daunted</term>, adj.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2873" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2874">
               <note type="label">spite</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Contempt, ill-will, malice (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>spite</term>, n.2.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2875" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2876">
               <note type="label">drooping</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Dejected, depressed, dispirited, despondent</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>drooping</term>, adj.3</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2877" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2878">
               <note type="label">my last</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">My last words, my last moments.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2879" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2880">
               <note type="label">damned souls</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Given his actions, Richard is under none of the illusions of Edward IV who thought himself bound for Heaven (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3888 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3889"/>). Richard knows he himself is damned.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2881" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2882">
               <note type="label">Exit <supplied>the Page</supplied></note>
               <note type="performance" resp="pers:MALO2">Q’s singular <quote>Exit</quote> offers little clarity on who is to leave the stage, but without a new entrance for Richard, it is safe to assume that he does not exit, but instead Richmond confronts him as part of the same scene. The Page’s exit alone allows for the climactic battle to commence without Richard requiring an exit. A clamor of noise offstage is sufficient to frighten the Page into abandoning his master and gives Richmond’s forces an entry point to surround Richard. This solves the whereabouts of the Page during this final battle, and while his absence complicates his later account of the battle to Report, it gives a layered comment on the accuracy of the Report, as told by one who was not a direct eyewitness. The Page later describes the sound of trumpet and drum during Richard’s final battle, as Richmond has called for his men to charge.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2883" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2885">
               <note type="label">Enter Richmond … again</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richmond confronts Richard while other skirmishes potentially play out around the stage between soldiers. As Vergil notes, Richard died <quote>fighting manfully in the thickest press of his enemies</quote>, having been abandoned by his men, so this reflects that moment (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Vergil#emdTTR3_Vergil_anc_118">Anglia Historia</ref>).</note>
               <note type="performance" resp="pers:MALO2">There would have been a great deal of action to accompany this entrance, with Richmond’s troops fighting with troops loyal to Richard. These nameless troops represented the last line of defense before reaching Richard, and once he is finally surrounded and outnumbered, Richmond is afforded the honor of taking the final battle. As discussed above (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2845 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2846"/>), McMillin and MacLean suggest battle stage directions encompass robust wordless scenes: <quote>strangely segmented, with wordless battles set apart from moments of speech, as though the battles were thought of as having a text of their own</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:MCMI1">129</ref>). There are many text-based battle scenes, but <quote>the serious battles tend to be wordless</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:MCMI1">130</ref>). The seriousness of the fencing scenes required great concentration to ensure no one was injured, so dialogue is not prioritized.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2886" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2887">
               <note type="label">kills Richard</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Richmond as Richard’s killer is romantic, apocryphal, and ahistorical, but appears here and in Shakespeare.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Vergil reports Richard’s death: 
                 <cit> <quote>Henry perceived King Richard come upon him, and because all his hope was than in valiancy of arms, he received him with great courage. King Richard, at the first brunt, killed certain, overthrew Henry’s standard, together with William Brandon, the standard bearer, and matched also with John Cheney, a man of much fortitude, far exceeding the common sort, who encountered with him as he came, but the king with great force drove him to the ground, making way with weapon on every side. But yet Henry abode the brunt longer than ever his own soldiers would have wend, who were now almost out of hope of victory, when as lo William Stanley with three thousand men came to the rescue: than truly in a very moment the residue all fled, and king Richard alone was killed fighting manfully in the thickest press of his enemies.</quote> 
                  <bibl>(see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Vergil#emdTTR3_Vergil_anc_120">Anglia Historia</ref>; 224)</bibl>
                 </cit> As noted, tradition suggests the killing blow was laid by Sir Rhys ap Thomas (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3904 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3905"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2888" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2889">
               <note type="label">Exeunt Richmond … body</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard’s body needs to be removed from the stage to allow the play to move forward, and a ceremonial progression affords a sense of respect in death for Richmond’s defeated foe. This moment could be played in multiple ways, depending on how many of Richmond’s troops are on stage. More may enter to bear him away, or Richmond could even offer his assistance. Potentially, Richmond dons Richard’s crown and exits the stage, leaving the body to be cleared by Richmond’s soldiers. Each option is a potentially striking stage picture.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2892" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2893">
               <note type="label">Report</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">An allegorical figure who represents the retelling of history and rumor.</note>
               <note type="commentary">An unusual instance of interaction between allegorical and non-allegorical characters (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:WIGG5">Wiggins 489</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">There is no indication as to how Report would be attired, but Ripa records Rumor as <quote>a man arm’d with a coat of mail of divers colours; throwing of darts every where <gap reason="sampling"/> the Darts show flying Reports among the multitude <gap reason="sampling"/> the Coat of Mail of different Colours, the diversity of Opinions of the Rabble</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:RIPA1">66</ref>). This is a similar allegorical attiring to the character of Rumor, a figure who always wore a suit of tongues, including his appearance in the prologue of <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:CONN7"><title level="m">2H4</title></ref>.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3663" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3664">
               <note type="label">the Page</note>
               <note type="performance" resp="pers:MALO2">As he exits prior to Richard’s death, the resourceful Page must have hidden or eluded Richmond’s soldiers long enough to weather the end of the battle. Unless the actor had chosen to hide in view of the audience during the end of the battle, a choice that justifies his information about the fray, much of what he is to say is spurious or guessed, as he has not necessarily witnessed Richard’s final moments.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2894" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2895">
               <note type="label">certain true report</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">A good accurate account.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2896" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2897">
               <note type="label">victorious</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Concluded.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Report does not know the outcome but knows one side has prevailed. Walsh notes the belatedness of Report’s arrival as a comment on unreliable non-eyewitness historical accounts (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:WALS2">88</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2898" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2899">
               <note type="label">whate’er thou be’st</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Whoever you are, whatever side you are on.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2900" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2901">
               <note type="label">field</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Battlefield.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2902" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2903">
               <note type="label">triumphs … conqueror</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Celebrates his bold or courageous conquest as appropriate for the successful military leader.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The Page evokes the Roman triumphs, ceremonial processions to celebrate a successful military victory, particularly a foreign war. Such an association emphasizes Richmond’s role as the victorious new king.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2904" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2906">
               <note type="label">duke of Norfolk</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Norfolk is not in this play, but was the highest-profile Bosworth victim, as Holinshed notes: 
                  <cit><quote>of the nobility were slain John duke of Norfolk, which was warned by diverse to refrain from the field, in so much that the night before he should set forward toward the king, one wrote this rhyme upon his gate: Jack of Norfolk be not too bold, / For Dickon thy master is bought and sold.</quote> 
                  <bibl>(see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Hol#emdTTR3_Hol_anc_154">Chronicles of England, Scotland, and Ireland</ref>)</bibl>
                  </cit> Norfolk and the famous <quote>Jack of Norfolk</quote> note appear in Shakespeare (see <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:JOWE5"><title level="m">R3</title> 5.5.33–34</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2907" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2908">
               <note type="label">Brakenbury</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Brakenbury died at Bosworth, and in the battle’s aftermath, he was attainted and his lands were forfeited.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3665" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3666">
               <note type="label">Lovell</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Lovell was <quote><supplied>a</supplied>mongst them that ran away <gap reason="sampling"/> <supplied>and who</supplied> took sanctuary in Saint John’s at Gloucester</quote> (see Holinshed <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Hol#emdTTR3_Hol_anc_150">Chronicles of England, Scotland, and Ireland</ref>; <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Hol#emdTTR3_Hol_anc_152">Chronicles of England, Scotland, and Ireland</ref>). Lovell’s allegiance to Richard, whether due to loyalty or fear, made his apprehension a priority, although he managed to evade capture long enough to oppose Richmond again. He fomented rebellion on several occasions after Bosworth He was next seen in support of the pretender Lambert Simnel who initially claimed to be the younger of the two princes who died in the Tower, and then the son of Clarence. Lovell remained an opponent to Henry VII and either died at the Battle of Stoke (1487) or vanished before he could be apprehended. Bacon suggested that he had lived on after Stoke by living in a cave or vault (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:BACO2">37</ref>), and a skeleton discovered in 1708 secreted at his family manor of Minster Lovell has been suggested to be Lovell. This is unlikely, due to Lovell’s only passing acquaintance with Minster Lovell (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:HORR6">Horrox</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2911" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2912">
               <note type="label">besides</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">As well as.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2913" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2914">
               <note type="label">made … tragedy</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Was accessory to Richard’s reign of terror.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2915" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2916">
               <note type="label">He is … beheaded</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Catesby’s execution in Leicester so soon after the battle shows time is compacted. Holinshed reports after Richard died, Catesby <quote>two days after <supplied>was</supplied> beheaded at Leicester</quote> (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Hol#emdTTR3_Hol_anc_148">Chronicles of England, Scotland, and Ireland</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2917" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2918">
               <note type="label">took part</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Fought on the side of.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2919" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2920">
               <note type="label">brief discourse</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Holinshed offers a detailed report on the action, which differs markedly from the Page’s description. See <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Hol#emdTTR3_Hol_p14">Chronicles of England, Scotland, and Ireland</ref> for this account.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2921" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2922">
               <note type="label">fell</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Came to pass (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT3"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>fall</term>, v.VI.51.a</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The Page’s detailed account offers many clues about how Richard’s death would be staged, including information on Richmond’s troop numbers, the sound of the charge, and the presence of horses. As the Page is potentially embellishing his story based on what little he saw, this lends little credence to the truth behind the historical report.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2923" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2924">
               <note type="label">mounted on horseback</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard’s horseback appearance in battle was unusual: ordinarily a reigning king was protected in the rearguard to ensure the figurehead stood. See note at <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3906 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2496"/>.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2925" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2926">
               <note type="label">high resolve</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Firm intention</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>resolve</term>, n.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2927" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2928">
               <note type="label">fierce … Greeks</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The first mythologizing of Richard’s death, whether or not it matches with the events of the final battle that the audience have witnessed. The Page likens Richard’s valor to Achilles in the Trojan war, which speaks to the bravery depicted on stage, but hyperbolically extends his acts. This analogy complicates the reliability of historical accounts as the Page <quote>spins</quote> Richard’s acts (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:WALS2">Walsh 89</ref>), or perhaps the Page gives the Yorkist view, just as Richmond (and Shakespeare) will later give the Tudor view.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2929" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2930">
               <note type="label">encounter</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Confront, assail (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>encounter</term>, v.1.a</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The first of three variants on this word in twenty lines, which generically depicts confrontation (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3907 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2940"/>; <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3909 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3910"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2931" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2932">
               <note type="label">worthy</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Honorable, estimable (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>worthy</term>, v.2</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2933" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2934">
               <note type="label">accompanied with</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Surrounded by.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2935" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2936">
               <note type="label">displayed … straight</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Showed his banner boldly.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard is determined to die like a king, and he is described as honorable action in battle, even though his followers have either deserted or died. Richard’s banner, borne by Sir Percival Thirlwall, was raised to announce his presence as he charged Richmond, as noted in the anonymous <title level="a">The Ballad of Bosworth Field</title> (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Ballad">Supplementary Texts</ref>). The raising of Richard’s colors in his final battle might have been an additional moment of defiance in staging his death.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2937" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2938">
               <note type="label">charge … fife</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Traditional martial instruments used to signal an attack, especially a rushing assault that leaves the enemy no time to think or to re-deploy the battalions.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2939" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2940">
               <note type="label">straight encountered</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Clashed head-on.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2941" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2942">
               <note type="label">gan faint</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Became tired.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2943" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2944">
               <note type="label">fly</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Retreat, flee. True reportage, as the Page had urged just that (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3902 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3903"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2945" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2946">
               <note type="label">followed honor</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Died valiantly.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3667" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3668">
               <note type="label">threw … wounded</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Holinshed supports Richard’s bravery: 
                  <cit><quote><supplied>w</supplied>ith which too much hardiness he being overcome, hastily closed his helmet, and entered fiercely into the hard battle, to the intent to obtain that day a quiet reign and regiment; or else to finish there his unquiet life, and unfortunate governance. And so, this miser at the same very point had like chance and fortune, as happeneth to such which in place of right justice and honesty, following their sensual appetite, love, and use to embrace mischief, tyranny, and unthriftiness. Surely these be examples of more vehemency, than man’s tongue can express, to fear and astonish such evil persons, as will not live one hour vacant from doing and exercising cruelty, mischief, or outrageous living.</quote> 
                     <bibl>(see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Hol#emdTTR3_Hol_anc_146">Chronicles of England, Scotland, and Ireland</ref>)</bibl></cit></note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2949" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2951">
               <note type="label">ne’er recovered strength</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Died where he fell.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3669" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3670">
               <note type="label">master … yield</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">As Richard had promised, he fought until his death. The word <quote>yield</quote> implies giving back what he had taken, and perhaps suffering public execution before a hostile mob, humiliating and felt as cowardly. because passive. Richard’s decision to fight to the death is his final (and perhaps only) show of true honor.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2952" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2954">
               <note type="label">Exit … remains.</note>
               <note type="performance" resp="pers:MALO2">Q has no exit line for the Page or Report. The stage will soon become crowded with Richmond’s victorious army, and Report would logically stay to observe in order to fulfill his reportage. The Page, as a visible member of Richard’s retinue, would slip out of sight for his own safety.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2957" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2958">
               <note type="label">crown</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Legend says Richard wore his crown to battle—a conspicuous target—and after his death it was found and presented to Richmond. Vergil reports: 
                  <cit><quote>which, when Thomas Stanley did see, he set anon King Richard’s crown, which was found among the spoil in the field, upon his head, as though he had been already by commandment of the people proclaimed king after the manner of his ancestors.</quote> 
                  <bibl>(see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Vergil#emdTTR3_Vergil_anc_121">Anglia Historia</ref>)</bibl>
                  </cit> The apocryphal detail of Richard’s crown found in a hawthorn bush is a seventeenth century embellishment (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:HEND1">Henderson 237–238</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3671" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3672">
               <note type="label">fortune … day</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Despite the odds, Richmond’s faction easily carried the day at Bosworth with little loss of noble life (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3911 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3676"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2961" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2962">
               <note type="label">fitting your deserts</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Befitting what you have earned (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>desert</term>, n.1.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2963" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2964">
               <note type="label">hot encountering</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">The heat of close combat.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2965" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2966">
               <note type="label">binds</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Pledges, swears (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>bind</term>, IV.15.b</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2967" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2968">
               <note type="label">unity</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richmond’s victory unified the Yorkist and Lancastrian factions and effectively ended the wars of the roses.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3673" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3674">
               <note type="label">those … lost</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Vergil records Richmond’s losses as slight: <quote>Henry lost in that battle scarce a hundred soldiers, amongst whom there was one principal man, William Brandon, who bore earl Henry’s standard</quote> (see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Vergil#emdTTR3_Vergil_anc_123">Anglia Historia</ref>; 225). Holinshed names only two noble victims on Richmond’s side: <cit><quote>King Richard set on so sharply at the first brunt, that he overthrew the earl’s standard, and slew Sir William Brandon his standard bearer (which was father to Sir Charles Brandon by king Henry the eighth created duke of Suffolk) and matched hand to hand with Sir John Cheney, a man of great force and strength, which would have resisted him: but the said John was by him manfully overthrown.</quote> 
                     <bibl>(see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Hol#emdTTR3_Hol_anc_144">Chronicles of England, Scotland, and Ireland</ref>)</bibl></cit></note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3675" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3676">
               <note type="label">maintain … pay</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Support and provide for them (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>maintain</term>, v.I.1.a</ref>) with a generous allowance (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>manual</term>, adj.6</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2971" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2972">
               <note type="label">loving father</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Stanley.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2973" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2974">
               <note type="label">not the least</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richmond leaves Stanley the final position of honor by design, in reflection of Stanley’s important intervention but also in reflection of the character’s ancestry with Lord Strange, Ferdinando Stanley, 5th Earl of Derby (1559–1594), a notable cultural patron (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:MANL1">Manley and MacLean 26</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2975" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2976">
               <note type="label">unlooked-for aid</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Unexpected help.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richmond did not count on Stanley’s help, and as Manley notes it is not clear <quote>whether Stanley acted positively on behalf of Richmond or merely refused to come to Richard’s assistance</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:MANL2">170</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2977" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2978">
               <note type="label">on sudden</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Without warning (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>sudden</term>, adj.1.b</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2979" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2980">
               <note type="label">in nature</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Genuinely (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>nature</term>, n.P.8.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2981" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2982">
               <note type="label">worth</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Great integrity (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>worth</term>, n.1.II.6.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2983" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2984">
               <note type="label">enemies</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Stanley refers to remaining Yorkists who would emerge in rebellion after Bosworth (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3913 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3914"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3677" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3678">
               <note type="label">common … consent</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Holinshed records Stanley’s acclamation: 
                  <cit><quote>When the lord Stanley saw the good will and gladness of the people, he took the crown of king Richard which was found amongst the spoil in the field, and set it on the earl’s head; as though he had been elected king by the voice of the people, as in ancient times past in diverse realms it hath been accustomed: and this was the first sign and token of his good luck and felicity.</quote> 
                     <bibl>(see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Hol#emdTTR3_Hol_anc_142">Chronicles of England, Scotland, and Ireland</ref>)</bibl></cit></note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2985" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2986">
               <note type="label">combat them</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Suppress rebellion.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2987" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2988">
               <note type="label">Caesar</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Julius Caesar (100–44BCE), Roman Emperor, who conquered Gaul (58–50BCE), and spread Roman influence into Egypt and throughout Europe.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Oxford hyperbolically compares Richmond’s conquest to the spread of the Roman Empire yet indelicately forgets Caesar’s death at the hands of former allies.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2989" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2990">
               <note type="label">doubt not</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Have no doubt.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2991" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2992">
               <note type="label">fair Fortune</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">References to Fortune come full-circle, discussed by Shore’s wife and Richard as the fickle goddess to whom each appealed (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_292 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_293"/>; <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3890 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3891"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3679" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3680">
               <note type="label">Hector … senators</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Oxford suggests Richmond is a giant among men. Hector was the greatest of the Trojan warriors, who died in combat with the Achilles after the gods’ interference (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:HOME1">Homer, Iliad, book 22</ref>). Marcus Tullius Cicero, or Tully, was a highly respected Roman orator, lawyer, and senator, whose philosophical letters (discovered by Petrarch) ignited the Renaissance.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2995" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2996">
               <note type="label">Enter Mother … Elizabeth</note>
               <note type="textual" resp="pers:MALO2">This relocated stage direction means that Richmond directly addresses the Mother Queen, rather than anticipate her entrance.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2997" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2998">
               <note type="label">fortune … day</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Victory in the battle.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2999" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3000">
               <note type="label">Lord Marquess Dorset</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">While it seems unusual the Mother Queen does not know where her son is, Dorset was supposed to fight at Bosworth, but was delayed. He lived in exile for over two years in Brittany and participated in Richmond’s 1483 invasion attempt. Dorset almost rejoined Richard prior to Bosworth, but was prevented from leaving France, and, as noted, was held as a war debt to France (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3892 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3893"/>). He rejoined his family after Henry VII took power (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:HICK3">Hicks</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3681" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3682">
               <note type="label">murdered</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">One of the fallen in battle.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3001" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3002">
               <note type="label">doth live</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Is alive.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3005" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3006">
               <note type="label">driven … tempest</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richmond’s failed invasion of 1483 was ruined by unexpected storms.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3007" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3008">
               <note type="label">enforced</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Left no other choice (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>enforced</term>, adj.2</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3683" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3684">
               <note type="label">ask … men</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Charles VIII provided French mercenaries who made up half of Richmond’s force (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:SKID1">Skidmore 224</ref>). Major records the assistance: <quote>Inasmuch as he had been long a dweller in France, Charles the Eighth granted <supplied>Richmond</supplied> an aid of five thousand men (of whom one thousand were Scots)</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:MAJO1">393</ref>). This was crucial for Richmond, as a smaller invading force may have struggled to attract English soldiers. This assistance was clearly strategic in the hopes of gaining the support of a conquering king.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3009" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3010">
               <note type="label">munition</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Weaponry, martial supplies (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>munition</term>, n.4.a</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard accuses Stanley of providing these supplies earlier: Richmond’s need to ask them of France suggests Stanley was innocent, or the embargo succeeded (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3558 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3559"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3011" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3012">
               <note type="label">hostage</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Pledge, security, assurance (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>hostage</term>, n.1.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3013" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3014">
               <note type="label">Dorset … pledge</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Dorset was held along with John Bourchier, Lord Berners, as assurance for a debt Richmond owed Charles VIII, but this was financial, not in exchange for mercenaries (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:HICK3">Hicks</ref>). Here the two events are conflated.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3015" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3016">
               <note type="label">our troubled war</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richmond’s invasion and successful overthrow of Richard. Richmond characterizes this as troubled because of the length of time it took to complete, after his disastrous prior attempt in 1483.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3017" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3018">
               <note type="label">shall … again</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Exiled for two years, Dorset had all his lost lands and titles returned.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3019" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3020">
               <note type="label">God … guide</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richmond’s piety is validated with victory against the odds and vindicates his sense of God approving his claim.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3021" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3022">
               <note type="label">keep … effectually</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Fulfil our promises exactly.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3023" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3024">
               <note type="label">happy battle’s</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Victorious army’s.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3025" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3026">
               <note type="label">make bold … promise</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Be so audacious as to ask you to keep an assurance or agreement.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3027" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3028">
               <note type="label">marriage of Elizabeth</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">As noted, Richmond declared his intention for Elizabeth the previous December, but as of this moment his proposal has not been accepted by the Mother Queen or Elizabeth (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2101 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2102"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3029" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3030">
               <note type="label">my due</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">What I have earned.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3031" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3032">
               <note type="label">in that</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Because.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3033" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3034">
               <note type="label">by election</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Stanley speaks informally and anachronistically. Richmond has slain the previous king, so has claimed the throne by conquest and there is no need for an approving council meeting: no such mechanism was in place at the time. The council in Shakespeare’s play meets to confirm coronation date, not to confirm right to inherit (see <ref type="bibl" target="bibl:JOWE5"><title level="m">R3</title> 3.4.1</ref>). Tradition says Richmond proclaimed his kingship on the battlefield, crowned by popular acclamation (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3917 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3918"/>). Indeed, <quote>the prominence of <q>election</q> among Richmond’s claims through marriage, lineage and conquest further legitimizes the Tudor dynasty, but it also stakes a claim for the peerage in the process of determining the future of the English monarchy</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:BEZI1">Bezio 73</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3685" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3686">
               <note type="label">First … virtuous</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Primarily because they see you as pious and good.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3035" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3036">
               <note type="label">foreign broils</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Wars with neighboring countries.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">With allegiance to both France and Brittany and Richard’s truce with Scotland, Richmond’s followers hoped for sustained peace. Aside from minor rebellions, Henry VII presided over peace until a 1497 rebellion in Scotland (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2983 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3919"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3039" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3040">
               <note type="label">England, … Ireland</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Oxford’s proclamation encompasses Richmond’s realms and anachronistically conflates Wales into England, which would not be incorporated until 1542, in the rule of Henry VIII. He is proclaimed king of France despite assistance offered by the French king, but this is limited to his rule over the English-controlled territory of Calais. The English lost their control over areas on the western coast of France, including Bordeaux and the Dordogne, after the death of Henry V. The English later occupied Boulogne-Sur-Mer briefly (1544–1550) but Calais was the last English bastion in France. Richmond’s third title, lord of Ireland, is a twelfth-century title established by King John, passed to each subsequent king of England until Henry VIII made himself king of Ireland in 1542.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3041" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3042">
               <note type="label">All</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">This traditional response encompasses public proclamation and acceptance of the title, now formally read for public approval at locations around the English and Scottish kingdoms, including London, York, Windsor, and Edinburgh.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3687" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3688">
               <note type="label">root abuses</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Uncover crimes.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3043" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3044">
               <note type="label">commonwealth</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Body of citizens, collective group of subjects.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3045" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3046">
               <note type="label">now flows faster</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richard’s wrongs are exacerbated to emphasise the correction Richmond’s rule offers. Richmond looks to quash the uncertainty that arose after Edward IV’s death (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1594 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1595"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3047" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3048">
               <note type="label">Nile</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The annual flooding of the Nile is a powerful natural phenomenon compared to wide-spread evils Richmond seeks to stamp out.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3689" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3690">
               <note type="label">still … dispose</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">With the greatest of intentions fulfill my promise to be your servant.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3691" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3692">
               <note type="label">longer … love</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richmond’s vow is to live only as he fulfills his oath, which he accuses Richard of failing to do.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3049" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3050">
               <note type="label">Elizabeth</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">This is Elizabeth’s first appearance since sanctuary, which means her marriage has been discussed entirely without her, or at least has been kept confidential offstage (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_1193 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3894"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3051" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3052">
               <note type="label">must</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Want to.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3053" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3054">
               <note type="label">crave … resolve</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Wish to have an answer on how you have decided.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richmond’s noun/verb repetition emphasizes the coming resolution of the war.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3055" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3056">
               <note type="label">touching … unto you</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Regarding the proposal of marriage I have given you.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3057" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3058">
               <note type="label">condescend</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Willingly yield, submit, agree (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:THOM6">Thomas, <term>Concēdo</term></ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3059" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3060">
               <note type="label">please</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Is <quote>agreeable to</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>please</term>, v.I.2.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3061" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3062">
               <note type="label">in duty</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">With respect, deferentially (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>duty</term>, n.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3693" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3694">
               <note type="label">aged … age</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Elizabeth emphasizes the conventional respect experience has earned her parents. She defers to her mother but has also proven herself canny and mature in her earlier dealings, so she is no pawn in these proceedings.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3063" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3064">
               <note type="label">do commit … dispose</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Will do whatever she tells me I should.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3065" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3939">
               <note type="label">ay</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Ever, always</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>aye</term>, adv.1.1</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The first of three uses of this word emphasizes the optimism of this resolution (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3183 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3184"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3067" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3068">
               <note type="label">if I live</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">While I am alive.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3069" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3070">
               <note type="label">make account</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Hold resolution, have expectation (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>account</term>, n.IV.10</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3071" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3072">
               <note type="label">more … love</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Greater generosity of heart than expected.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3073" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3074">
               <note type="label">now were but</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">If only.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3075" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3076">
               <note type="label">happy … meeting then</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Joyous would this reunion be.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3077" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3078">
               <note type="label">’turn in safe</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Return undamaged.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3081" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3082">
               <note type="label">he that … blood</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">One that takes pleasure in killing.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3085" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3086">
               <note type="label">two messengers</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Both messengers stay for the epilogue. Roberts-Smith suggests these messengers are played by the boys who play the young princes, so the final scene is a family reunion tableau (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:ROBE6">2012, 198</ref>). The same argument posits these boys played Truth and Poetry, a contention supported by McMillin and MacLean (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:MCMI1">107</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3087" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3088">
               <note type="label">with great danger</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">At considerable personal risk.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3091" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3094">
               <note type="label">enclosed … earth</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">George associates his imprisonment with a helpless lamb kept alive in a wolf’s den, expecting death.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3095" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3096">
               <note type="label">even … danger</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Fresh from this fear.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3097" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3098">
               <note type="label">come … guest</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Approach to offer homage.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3099" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3100">
               <note type="label">George … emotion</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">George’s repetition indicates his incorporation of the Messengers who have liberated him, as he emotionally acknowledges the risk they took by delaying his execution. The Messengers might stand forth to accept the gratitude of both Stanleys, and even the new king.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3101" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3102">
               <note type="label">post him off</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Divert him, distract him.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3103" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3104">
               <note type="label">alleging … rage</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The Messengers’ diversionary tactics resemble those attempted by Catesby and Lovell (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_2783 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3920"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3105" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3106">
               <note type="label">battles joined</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Armies clashed.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3107" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3108">
               <note type="label">these … away</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">These men and other friends protected me from harm, freed me from bondage.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The messengers appear to have been Richard’s servants or guards who have defected to Richmond to bring George home.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3695" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3696">
               <note type="label">Richard—</note>
               <note type="performance" resp="pers:MALO2">This short line potentially allows the actor playing Richmond to show his disdain for speaking Richard’s name, be it a spit or a glare at those around him. Despite his honor in removing Richard’s body ceremonially from the battlefield, he is still able to show his distaste for him, which is furthered by his parading of Richard’s body through Leicester.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3111" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3112">
               <note type="label">will</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Promise to see that.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3697" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3698">
               <note type="label">drawn … laid</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">This public display, called <term>carting</term>, was a pious display of the evil source of England’s troubles, much in the way that bailiffs would display criminals on their way to be punished. This is also a form of Roman triumph, an emphasis of the victor’s achievement.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Holinshed writes with shame of the desecration of Richard’s body: 
                  <cit><quote>the dead corpse of king Richard was as shamefully carried to the town of Leicester, as he gorgeously (the day before) with pomp and pride departed out of the same town. For his body was naked and despoiled to the skin, and nothing left about him, not so much as a clout to cover his privy members, and was trussed behind a pursuant of arms, one Blanch Senglier, or White boar, like a hog or calf, his head and arms hanging on the one side of the horse, and his legs on the other side, and all besprinkled with mire and blood he was brought to the Greyfriars church within the town, and there lay like a miserable spectacle.</quote> 
                  <bibl>(see <ref target="doc:emdTTR3_Hol#emdTTR3_Hol_anc_140">Chronicles of England, Scotland, and Ireland</ref>)</bibl>
                  </cit> Richard’s skeleton was discovered in the remains of the Greyfriars friary in 2012.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3113" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3114">
               <note type="label">collier’s horse</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">A mean, low-status beast of burden, in stark contrast to the fine charger he rode into battle.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">This choice of steed is intentional, lowering the dead king of England on to an animal used for carrying coals for a collier, or coal-miner. The collier’s horse literally had the lowest, blackest job there was in the coal mines.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3115" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3116">
               <note type="label">of others’ … regard</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">He did not care about other people.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3117" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3118">
               <note type="label">traitor’s due reward</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The display of Richard’s corpse was a grim public warning for the price of treason.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3699" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3700">
               <note type="label">abbey … next</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">An anachronism; the battle itself was waged on August 22nd, 1485, and Richmond does not propose he wait a year until marriage. Richmond was crowned on October 30, 1485, his marriage solemnized on 18 January 1486. Elizabeth was crowned queen almost two years later, in November 1487.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3119" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3120">
               <note type="label">Set forwards</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">March on.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3121" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3122">
               <note type="label">take … state</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Bring peace and reason back to the kingdom.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3701" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3702">
               <note type="label">The Mother … Messengers</note>
               <note type="performance" resp="pers:MALO2">This stage direction allows the bulk of the company to clear the space for the four boys to close the play, and while there is little evidence to support this clearing of the space, as Walsh observes, the stage would be crowded with between ten and fourteen actors (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:WALS2">100–101</ref>). This might result in a <quote>communal moment</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:WALS2">Walsh 101</ref>), with an isolation of the four epilogue speakers.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3123" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3124">
               <note type="label">gentles</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Gentry (ladies and gentlemen) in the audience, in direct address from the stage.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The messenger uses the same address as Truth in the prologue (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_89 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_90"/>), which cements the connection in the doubled casting (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:WALS2">Walsh 98</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3125" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3126">
               <note type="label">these houses</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">York and Lancaster.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3127" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3128">
               <note type="label">Solomon</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">A king of Israel (c.970–931 BCE) so renowned as a wise, fair judge that his name remains synonymous with wisdom.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The Solomon-like wisdom of Henry VII, as the holy unifier of York and Lancaster, was a common Tudor epithet. Solomon’s wisdom lay in his piety and strength of prayer (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:THEB6">GNV 1 Kings 3.4–5</ref>), which associates with Richmond’s triumph. In 1621 Francis Bacon used this image, calling Henry <quote>this Solomon of England</quote>, but in this case, it was because <quote>Solomon was also too heavy upon his people in exactions</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:BACO2">211</ref>). Here the association is based on Richmond’s wit and wisdom.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3129" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3130">
               <note type="label">government … every way</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Rule was fair and honest in all matters.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3131" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3132">
               <note type="label">wondrously increase</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Bless with children.</note>
               <note type="commentary">Henry and Elizabeth had eight children, including the future Henry VIII, along with Margaret and Mary Tudor, both of whom were grandmothers to Mary, queen of Scots and Lady Jane Grey, claimants to the English throne.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3703" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3704">
               <note type="label">subdue … Blackheath</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Richmond survived several uprisings, but this refers to the Cornish rebellion of 1497. Henry levied taxes for his Scottish wars, and met resistance led by James Tuchet, 7th baron Audley, whose forces were subdued at the battle of Deptford Bridge on 15 June 1497 (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:GUNN1">Gunn</ref>). Baron Audley was executed at Tower Hill for his treason. This is the only uprising the playwright notes, despite significant incursions by rebels who supported a Yorkist pretender. Attempts to elevate Lambert Simnel (supposedly son to Clarence, 1487) and Perkin Warbeck (supposedly the younger prince in the Tower, 1490) were both quashed. To note these campaigns is to question the king’s legitimacy.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3135" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3136">
               <note type="label">three … years</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Richmond ruled from 22 August 1485 until 21 April 1509.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3137" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3138">
               <note type="label">Westminster</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Burial site of Henry, who was buried alongside Elizabeth Woodville in the Henry VII Lady Chapel at Westminster Abbey. Six other monarchs, including Elizabeth I, are buried in the same chapel.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3139" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3140">
               <note type="label">son</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Henry VIII, who ruled from April 1509 to January 1547.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3141" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3142">
               <note type="label">victorious</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Highly successful (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>victorious</term>, adj.2</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3705" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3706">
               <note type="label">fifth … France</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Henry invaded France in 1513 as part of a pact with Maximilian I, Holy Roman Emperor, in the Holy League.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3707" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3708">
               <note type="label">Thérouanne and Tournai</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The battle of the Spurs, on 16 August 1513, saw Henry’s force support Maximilian to surprise a French cavalry battalion outnumbered four to one. This minor diplomatic victory won Thérouanne and Tournai and was valuable propaganda.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3143" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3144">
               <note type="label">emperor</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Maximilian I, Holy Roman Emperor.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3709" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3710">
               <note type="label">served … pay</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Mercenary arrangement:  the emperor offered Henry VIII his service in exchange for money. Henry VIII paid Maximilian a daily fee for his support (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:IVES1">Ives</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3145" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3146">
               <note type="label">as a … him</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Maximilian’s participation had little to do with loyalty and more with financial return.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3147" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3148">
               <note type="label">Morlaix</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">English troops attacked Morlaix in 1522 in retaliation for Breton piracy in Bristol, and found the port deserted. After English sacked Morlaix, Bretons built the forbidding Château du Taureau fortification to protect against future attacks.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3149" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3150">
               <note type="label">at a bay</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">In line.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3151" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3152">
               <note type="label">decreasing age</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Advancing years, lessening vitality.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3153" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3154">
               <note type="label">Boulogne</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Henry invaded France in July 1545 with 40,000 men in support of Charles V, Holy Roman Emperor. Henry besieged Montreuil and Boulogne; the latter capitulated on 14 September 1545 and was held by the English for eight years (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:IVES1">Ives</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3155" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3156">
               <note type="label">after … home</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Following his return to England.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Henry died less than two years after the attack on Boulogne, in January 1547.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3157" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3158">
               <note type="label">thirty-eight … months</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">From April 1509 to January 1547, or thirty-seven years, nine months and some odd days.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3159" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3160">
               <note type="label">Windsor</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Burial site of Henry VIII, in St. George’s Chapel in Windsor Castle, with his third wife, Jane Seymour, who died giving birth to the future Edward VI.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3161" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3162">
               <note type="label">three famous sprigs</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Three of Henry’s children rose to the throne: Edward VI, Mary I, and Elizabeth I.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3711" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3712">
               <note type="label">Edward VI</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Crowned in February 1547, three weeks after Henry’s death. Only nine years of age, he ruled under the protectorship of his great uncle, duke of Somerset (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:HOAK1">Hoak</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3713" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3714">
               <note type="label">he did … undone</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">A famously pious king, the young Edward VI continued his father’s active turn from Rome.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3163" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3164">
               <note type="label">given … book</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Heavily inclined to reading the bible.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3165" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3166">
               <note type="label">brought … service</note>
               
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2" subtype="onlineOnly">Oversaw extended reforms of the Church of England, including the 1549 introduction of the Book of Common Prayer, under the influence of Archbishop Thomas Cranmer. This reform, essentially standardizing language, was used in services across England, and saw responsive armed rebellions.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3167" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3168">
               <note type="label">six … months</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">From February 1547 to July 1553.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Edward was buried in the Henry VII Lady Chapel in Westminster Abbey.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3169" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3170">
               <note type="label">Next after him</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">This chronology omits Lady Jane Grey, whom Edward VI named heir in reaction to his sister Mary’s Catholicism. Jane was proclaimed queen, but within nine days her claim was overridden by her cousin, Mary I. As she was not actually crowned, and reference would recall Edward’s attempts to disinherit his sisters, there is little wonder this detail was omitted.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3171" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3172">
               <note type="label">Mary</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Queen Mary was crowned first queen regnant of England in October 1553. Mary’s efforts in reversing progress in advancing Protestantism included the burning of dissenters and left her the posthumous sobriquet <quote>Bloody Mary</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:WEIK1">Weikel</ref>). Aside from the omission of Jane, this is perhaps the most noteworthy inclusion, because, as Walsh notes:
                  <cit><quote>given that promoting the Protestant Elizabethan order was one of the putative reasons for which the Queen’s Men were formed, it is curious that Mary, in this post-Acts and Monuments, and probably post-Armada, play, is mentioned with no virulence—this despite her <q>bloody</q> reputation with Protestants and her marriage to the King of Spain.</quote> 
                  <bibl>(<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:WALS2">99</ref>)</bibl></cit></note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3173" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3174">
               <note type="label">married Philip</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Mary’s marriage to the Spanish Philip was unpopular and led to the belief that England would lose footing in Europe if seen as dependent on Spain. The marriage was ultimately fruitless, spoiling Mary’s hopes of passing the throne past her half-sister, Elizabeth (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:WEIK1">Weikel</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3175" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3176">
               <note type="label">five … months</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">From October 1553 to November 1558. Despite her desire to be buried alongside her father in Windsor, Mary was interred at Westminster Abbey in her grandfather’s chapel, and later shared a tomb with her half-sister, Elizabeth I.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3177" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3178">
               <note type="label">Mother Queen</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The Mother Queen speaks the remaining lines, praises to her character’s granddaughter, Elizabeth I. Griffin notes:
                  <cit><quote><supplied>of</supplied> these final lines, the basic purport is flattery; but in terms of temporal experience, these lines serve to bring the history down to the present moment, with its triumphs and its fears. <gap reason="sampling"/> <supplied><title level="m">The True Tragedy</title></supplied> profit<supplied>s</supplied> in a special way from the theatre practice of the actors’ calling for a prayer for the health of the monarch; intentionally or not, the prayer then forms the requisite reinforcement of the link to the present.</quote> 
                  <bibl>(<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:GRIF2">90</ref>)</bibl></cit></note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3179" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3180">
               <note type="label">mirror in</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Exemplar of (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>mirror</term>, v.1.a</ref>).</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Note contrast to mirror imagery Shore’s wife uses (see <ptr type="localCit" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_302 doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_303"/>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3181" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3182">
               <note type="label">her country … defended</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">After the upheaval of Mary’s reign, Elizabeth presided over a remarkable period of growth and calm, and solidified Protestantism in England. Elizabeth survived numerous assassination attempts and reigned during the failed Spanish Armada in 1588.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3183" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3184">
               <note type="label">for ay</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Forever.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The wish for Elizabeth to live forever is described by Bezio as <quote>either wishful thinking or pandering so transparent that it cannot help but draw focus</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:BEZI1">74</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3185" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3186">
               <note type="label">happy … isles</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Happy be England above the rest of Europe.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3187" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3188">
               <note type="label">favorable planets</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Auspicious omens, positive influences (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>planet</term>, n.2</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3189" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3190">
               <note type="label">prosperity</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Good fortune, <gap reason="sampling"/> well being</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>prosperity</term>, n.1</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3191" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3192">
               <note type="label">lamp</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Guiding light (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>lamp</term>, n.1.3</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3193" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3194">
               <note type="label">proud Antichrist</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Chief enemy or <quote>opponent of Christ</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>Antichrist</term>, n.1.a</ref>); the Pope or Papal power.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Along with a generic anti-Catholic statement, this incorporates the Spanish Armada, defeated in 1588.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3715" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3716">
               <note type="label">hath … means</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Is the reason why.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3195" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3196">
               <note type="label">hairy</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2"><quote>Thrommed, rough, or hearie</quote>, (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:THOM6">Thomas, <term>Irto</term></ref>); rugged (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:FLOR1">Florio, <term>Pillóso</term></ref>), both refer to thrummed cloth, densely woven with <quote>a nap or shaggy surface</quote>, and used for various items including stockings, long hose, rugs, and hats (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>thrummed</term>, adj.1.1.a</ref>) presumably for its weatherproof properties.</note>
               <note type="lexical" resp="pers:MALO2">This unusual word-choice strikes Urban as <quote>an absurdity, arising from some gross misprint. We think it not improbably that the original line was intended to stand as follows, <q>Then England kneele in praier upon thy knee</q></quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:URBA1">365</ref>). Alternately, Mott assumes only literal kneeling in deference to Elizabeth, with little mind given to <quote>hair</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:MOTT1">66</ref>). McMillin and MacLean describe this phrase as <quote>astonishing</quote> and <quote>foolish</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:MCMI1">136, 137</ref>), but their preference is to dismiss <quote>hairy</quote> as a weak anomaly rather than search for a compositor’s error. In fact, it was an accepted word in clothmaking circles since at least 1535 (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>hairy</term>, adj.2.b</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3197" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3198">
               <note type="label">The Turk</note>
               <note type="commentary" subtype="onlineOnly" resp="pers:MALO2">The Sultan of the Ottoman Empire, also called <soCalled>the Great Turk</soCalled>, who sent Elizabeth many gifts through his ambassadors; she sent him an elaborate organ with extra sounds like chimes of birdsong. See John Mole, <title level="m">The Sultan’s Organ</title> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:MOLE1">2012</ref>), containing the diary of Thomas Dallam who accompanied this instrument in its voyage from London to Constantinople in 1599, and stayed about a year there teaching members of the court how to play it. Mott notes friendly diplomatic relations between England and Turkey in the years after the Armada, and credits Harborne, English ambassador in Constantinople, as responsible for spreading Elizabeth’s fame. Subsequent Turkish emissaries to England were warm and complimentary (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:MOTT1">67–68</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3199" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3200">
               <note type="label">babies in Jewry</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Although Jews were expelled from England in the 13th century, by Elizabeth’s day they were allowed to return as merchants of various kinds, musicians, and other specialized workers, like the Queen’s own physician, provided they kept their religion secret, and publicly practiced Christianity. The hardship of such a life for Jews is clear in Shakespeare’s <title level="m">Merchant of Venice</title> and Marlowe’s <title level="m">The Jew of Malta</title>.</note>
           </note>
            
            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3201" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3202">
               <note type="label">rumored … fame</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Talked about far and wide.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3203" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3204">
               <note type="label">never … hand</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">An oath of peace.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Mott notes June 1580 correspondence in which Turkey’s <quote>Imperial Musselmanlike Highness</quote>, Zuldan Murad Chan, writes: <quote>We have contracted an inviolable amity, peace and league with <supplied>Elizabeth</supplied></quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:MOTT1">68</ref>). In the following years, this relationship was further burnished after the defeat of the Spanish Armada: the Turk saw that event as a catalyst for opening up the Mediterranean for trade from the east.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3205" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3206">
               <note type="label">wrong</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Injure, oppose (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>wrong</term>, v.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3207" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3208">
               <note type="label">vain</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Pointless, <quote>useless</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:OEDT2"><title level="m">OED</title> <term>vain</term>, adj.1.a</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3209" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3210">
               <note type="label">tell the care</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Describe the troubles.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3211" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3212">
               <note type="label">peace proclaimed</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The notion of peace is the predominant theme in this speech, both domestically and internationally. Mott observes that <quote>conflict between the peace party and the war party at Elizabeth’s court is well known, and also the Queen’s usual desire to avoid costly foreign complications. At the close of the year 1589 she was especially so disposed</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:MOTT1">69</ref>) after a series of costly international mishaps, including Sir Francis Drake’s disastrous privateering raid on Portugal, and the ill-advised support of the earl of Essex.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3717" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3718">
               <note type="label">Geneva, … Flanders</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">The English invested money, men, and intelligence in the Netherlands, and sent troops to aid the Dutch rebels as they rose up against their Spanish king, Philip II. The English also helped to aid in other fights against their Catholic enemies, including aiding Henry of Navarre against Philip’s French allies. By 1602, there were up to eight thousand English troops fighting in the Netherlands.</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">Elizabeth’s help to the war-oppressed was too frequent to isolate to a specific incident in Flanders or Geneva, which received Elizabeth’s aid for over twenty years. As to France, <quote>Any such recognition of English help must have been <supplied>after</supplied> the death of Henry III, August 2, 1589. To Henry of Navarre, who thereupon became king, Elizabeth sent money and supplies</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="bibl:MOTT1">Mott 70</ref>).</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3213" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3214">
               <note type="label">set down</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">Written to thank her for.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3217" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3218">
               <note type="label">her life … away</note>
               <note type="gloss" resp="pers:MALO2">She dies.</note>
           </note>

            <note type="annotation" target="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3719" targetEnd="doc:emdTTR3_M#emdTTR3_M_anc_3720">
               <note type="label">Your hope … depend</note>
               <note type="commentary" resp="pers:MALO2">A conventional line of praise for the queen to end the play on a happy note.</note>
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