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                    <note type="label">1.1</note>
                    <note type="textual">The 1611 quarto is divided into acts. Gaines was the first scholar to divide the play into scenes. See Textual Introduction for a discussion of scene divisions in this edition.</note>
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                    <note type="gloss">small boats</note>
                   <note type="textual">Gaines emends to <quote>crayers</quote> but the one-syllable <quote>crares</quote> fits the meter better.</note>
                    <note type="lexical">The examples in the <ref type="bibl" target="#OEDT3">OED</ref> show that both <quote>crayer</quote> and <quote>crare</quote> were early modern spellings (<ref type="bibl" target="#OEDT3">OED crayer|crare noun</ref>).</note> 
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                    <note type="label">Aside</note>
                    <note type="textual">This aside is marked in Q1 after Diana’s <quote>What can you do?</quote>. Collier places it in the margin after <quote>To bright Diana and her train I’ll stand</quote>, perhaps suggesting that this line, with its sexual pun on <quote>stand</quote>, as well as <quote>More than the best here can</quote> are spoken as asides. Gaines places the aside before <quote>That’s more than I can promise</quote> and indicates that <quote>Well, proceed</quote> and subsequent lines are spoken <quote>To them</quote> (Gaines 2.6.113).</note>
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                    <note type="label">(That’s … proceed.</note>
                    <note type="textual">The compositor has wrongly put parentheses around the part of the line that is spoken to Atlanta. Collier and Gaines recognize the error and correct it in their respective ways.</note></note>
                
                

                
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                    <note type="label">Jupiter alone his life defended</note>
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                    <note type="label">He … force</note>
                    <note type="gloss">Jupiter is the subject here</note>
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                    <note type="label">his father</note>
                    <note type="gloss">Jupiter’s father (i.e., Saturn); Jupiter drove his father from Crete</note>
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                    <note type="label">leaving him</note>
                    <note type="gloss">ceasing to speak of him (i.e., Saturn)</note>
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                    <note type="label">father, double tyrannous</note>
                    <note type="textual"><quote>double tyrannous / To prosecute the virtues of his son</quote> is a subordinate clause modifying <quote>our unkind father</quote>. I have followed Collier’s punctuation instead of Gaines’.</note>
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                    <note type="lexical">Specifically a <quote>small Spanish horse</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="#OEDT3">OED n.1</ref>)</note>
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                    <note type="label">riched</note>
                    <note type="gloss">enriched</note>
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                    <note type="label">yet</note>
                    <note type="textual">Possibly a compositorial misreading of <quote>yt</quote> (a common abbreeviation for <quote>that</quote>) in the manuscript. Both Collier and Gaines retain Q1’s <quote>yet</quote>.</note>
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                    <note type="label">Nay, … lords</note>
                    <note type="performance">This dialogic stage direction indicates that Pluto and Neptune have not taken Arcas’s hands.</note>
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                    <note type="label">She … strumpet</note>
                    <note type="performance">Gaines marks this line as an aside. One might experiment in performance with this moment of strife between Juno and Jupiter. Jupiter hears Juno’s denigration of Callisto. Does Juno hear Jupiter’s resolve woo and win all the <quote>beauteous maids on earth</quote>? What is happening on stage during this lengthy aside?</note>
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                    <note type="lineation">The quarto sets each of these three half lines on their own compositorial lines. I have tagged the second and third as a shared verse line, because of the isocolon on <quote>She was/shall be a</quote>.</note>
                    <note type="performance">One might experiment in performance with the rapidity of responses. Does Juno make a speedy rejoinder to Jupiter’s <quote>It was before your time</quote>? Does she take a moment to formulate her response?</note>
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                    <note type="label">snaffle in</note>
                    <note type="gloss">bridle</note>
                    <note type="lexical"><term>snaffle</term> is a transitive verb meaning <gloss>to put a bit on a horse</gloss>. See <ref type="bibl" target="#OEDT3">OED v<hi rendition="#rnd_superscript">1</hi> 1</ref>.</note>
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                    <note type="label">transhapes</note>
                    <note type="gloss">changes of shape, metamorphoses; see <ref type="bibl" target="#OEDT3">OED trans-shape | transhape</ref>, where all three examples come from Heywood.</note>
                    <note type="lexical">Heywood appears to be the only early modern writer to use <term>transhape</term> as a noun. In addition to OED’s examples from <title level="m">The Golden Age</title>, <title level="m">The Silver Age</title>, and <title level="m">Love’s Mistress</title>, Heywood uses the term as a noun in <title level="m">Gynaikeion</title>. He also accounts for more than half of the uses of <term>transhape</term> as a verb in the EEBO-TCP corpus up to 1640. <term>Transhape</term> is a more common spelling than <term>trans-shape</term>.</note>
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                    <note type="label">Argos king</note>
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                    <note type="label">novel</note>
                    <note type="gloss"><quote>piece of news</quote> (Gaines).</note>
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                    <note type="label">beldams</note>
                    <note type="gloss"><quote>an aged woman</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="#OEDT3">OED n.2</ref>).</note>
                    <note type="textual">Unlike Gaines, we treat this term as a generic noun rather than a proper name.</note>
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                    <note type="label">Unsensible of</note>
                    <note type="gloss"><quote>Incapable of being affected by</quote> (Gaines).</note>
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                    <note type="label">obdur’s</note>
                    <note type="gloss">obdurate is (i.e., is stubborn)</note>
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                <note resp="#JENS1" type="annotation" target="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_135" targetEnd="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_136">
                    <note type="label">That fort … fail</note>
                    <note type="performance">Gaines marks these two lines as an aside.</note>
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                <note resp="#JENS1" type="annotation" target="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_137" targetEnd="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_138">
                    <note type="label">We … behold</note>
                    <note type="performance">Gaines marks this concluding couplet as an aside.</note>
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                <note resp="#JENS1" type="annotation" target="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_143" targetEnd="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_144">
                    <note type="label">tow</note>
                    <note type="gloss">flax.</note>
                    
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                <note resp="#JENS1" type="annotation" target="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_149" targetEnd="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_150">
                    <note type="label">barricadoed</note>
                    <note type="textual">barricaded</note>
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                <note resp="#JENS1" type="annotation" target="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_153" targetEnd="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_152">
                    <note type="label">pleasure … All</note>
                    <note type="textual">Collier offers a plausible alternative punctuation of this passage. He puts a question mark after <quote>pleasure</quote> and treats <quote>For thy taste and curious palate</quote> as the dependent opening clause of <quote>All the chiefest cates / Are <gap reason="sampling"/> Fetched to content thee</quote>.</note>
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                <note resp="#JENS1" type="annotation" target="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_156" targetEnd="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_157">
                    <note type="label">durance</note>
                    <note type="gloss">forced confinement</note>
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                <note resp="#JENS1" type="annotation" target="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_158" targetEnd="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_159">
                    <note type="label">record</note>
                    <note type="gloss"><quote>remember, take to heart</quote> (Gaines).</note>
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                <note resp="#JENS1" type="annotation" target="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_160" targetEnd="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_161">
                    <note type="label">child</note>
                    <note type="gloss">give birth to</note>
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                <note resp="#JENS1" type="annotation" target="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_162" targetEnd="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_163">
                    <note type="label">obdur</note>
                    <note type="gloss">obdurate</note>
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                <note resp="#JENS1" type="annotation" target="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_164" targetEnd="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_165">
                    <note type="label">gem</note>
                    <note type="gloss">virginity (metaphoric)</note>
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                <note resp="#JENS1" type="annotation" target="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_168" targetEnd="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_169">
                    <note type="label">off</note>
                    <note type="gloss"><quote>Go off, discharge</quote> (Gaines).</note>
                    <note type="commentary">The Clown, punning on the double meaning of <quote>charge</quote> (responsibility; munition), continues the verbal play with <quote>fire</quote> and <quote>off</quote>.</note>
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                <note resp="#JENS1" type="annotation" target="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_170" targetEnd="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_171">
                    <note type="label">sooth</note>
                    <note type="gloss"><quote>to support, or back up, (a person) in a statement or assertion</quote> (<ref type="bibl" target="#OEDT3">OED verb 3</ref>).</note>
                    <note type="lexical">The OED cites this line from <title level="m">The Golden Age</title> as an example of this now-obsolete meaning.</note>
                    <note type="textual">Gaines unnecessarily emends the spelling to <q>soothe</q>.</note>
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                <note resp="#JENS1" type="annotation" target="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_176" targetEnd="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_177">
                    <note type="label">Now, gold,</note>
                    <note type="commentary">Jupiter apostrophizes (speaks to) the gold</note>
                    <note type="performance">Gaines marks this speech as an aside.</note>
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                <note resp="#JENS1" type="annotation" target="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_182" targetEnd="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_183">
                    <note type="label">1 Beldam</note>
                    <note type="textual">Q, Collier, and Gaines all assign both <ptr type="localCit" target="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_a4_s4_sp30"/> and <ptr type="localCit" target="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_a4_s4_sp32"/> to 1 Beldam. However, one of the two speeches might be assigned to another beldam. The speaker of <ptr type="localCit" target="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_a4_s4_sp48"/> orders one of the other beldams to <quote>Keep <gap reason="sampling"/> the peddler company</quote> while she shows the peddler’s gift to Danae; the speaker of <ptr type="localCit" target="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_a4_s4_sp50"/> orders <quote>you that have the best legs</quote> to run to Danae. Assigning both speeches to the same speaker may open up comic possibilities, with 1 Beldam feigning lameness and staying behind when she recognizes that the peddler has more presents.</note>
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                <note resp="#JENS1" type="annotation" target="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_184" targetEnd="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_185">
                    <note type="label">that</note>
                    <note type="gloss">that which</note>
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                <note resp="#JENS1" type="annotation" target="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_180" targetEnd="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_181">
                    <note type="label">Exit 2, 3, and 4 Beldam.</note>
                    <note type="textual">This edition adds an exit for three of the beldams, on the grounds that each beldam is given one jewel and the subsequent original stage direction has Danae looking <quote>upon three several jewels</quote>. 1 Beldam remains behind.</note>
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                <note resp="#JENS1" type="annotation" target="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_188" targetEnd="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_189">
                    <note type="label">—Sweet, your ear.</note>
                    <note type="textual">The compositor of Q used italics and an opening parenthesis to signal the aside here.</note>
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                <note resp="#JENS1" type="annotation" target="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_190" targetEnd="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_191">
                    <note type="label">4.6</note>
                    <note type="textual">This edition adds a scene break here. The Q1 stage direction reads <quote>The bed is drawne in, and enter the Clowne new wak’t</quote>. Both Collier and Gaines split this two-part paratactic stage direction into its two component parts and drop the <quote>and</quote>. Collier does not provide scene divisions; even though Gaines does provide scene divisions, he does not add one here, even though the stage is technically cleared.</note>
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                    <note type="label">Jove … way</note>
                    <note type="textual">I follow Gaines in assigning this line to Arcas, on the grounds that <quote>it seems unlikely that Jupiter would invoke Jove (i.e., himself) to <q>guide us in our way</q></quote> (Gaines 77n).</note>
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                <note resp="#JENS1" type="annotation" target="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_204" targetEnd="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_205">
                    <note type="label">Trojans</note>
                    <note type="textual">Q1’s <quote>Troians</quote> could equally well be modernized as <q>Troyans</q>, a more common early modern name for the inhabitants of Troy, from whom Londoners imagined themselves to be descended.</note>
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                <note resp="#JENS1" type="annotation" target="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_206" targetEnd="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_207">
                    <note type="label">5.3</note>
                    <note type="textual">Gaines does not begin a new scene here. I do, on the grounds that this scene is one of the <soCalled>rest and regroup</soCalled> scenes so common in early modern battle sequences.</note>
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                <note resp="#JENS1" type="annotation" target="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_208" targetEnd="emdGldA_M.xml#emdGldA_M_anc_209">
                    <note type="label">a</note>
                    <note type="gloss">on</note>
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